Classmate *******

It's really good. Finally, someone understands Lin Luoxue, but there are some flaws. I would like to remind the author that some of the plots of the original drama seem to have fierce conflicts, which directly complicate the characters. However, this is also the charm. Therefore, the protagonist becomes the squad leader later, and the conflicts in the subsequent plots need to be dealt with carefully. After thinking about it, there must be necessary conflicts, otherwise it will look pale, and whether the protagonist can be with Luoxue, but a little later. I just like this kind of you-in-I-in-you kind of slow-burning feeling. I don't want to think about some novels where two books are just the same. What is the difference between this and the female ticket [crying] This is a very good book. It expresses Lin Luoxue's true inner needs. It is not just for the sake of pleasure. The only shortcoming may be that the protagonist is too good and is a little separated from other characters in the front, but it does not affect it. It is a very good Little Broken Window fanfic. Good luck to the author [Like] [Like] [Like]

This book is really good, and it describes emotions very carefully. Unlike other fanfics, I read a lot on Basic Tomato and other websites. Most of them are very sloppy, and they are very inconsistent with the character of the original work. This book is very detailed. As for many people saying that the protagonist is very nagging (I also thought this was a bit annoying at first, but then I thought about it more and it made more sense). Reason), I think it's normal because the author brings a God's perspective. If you change some things, you can't change them overnight. You can only use this characteristic to make him more normal. As for some people commenting on not participating in the fight, I think this is also normal. If it were real life, how many people would dare to really participate, not to mention that the protagonist was transferred to another company midway

It's very interesting. I've read several fanfics about people who went to school together. This one is very well written from the protagonist's character to the relationship. It's not love at first sight, but slowly getting to know each other, starting from being friends. It's really worth recommending [Like]

Out of 10 points, I would give it a 9 now. ✅The writing is good, especially the self-analysis content of many characters has been added, making each character's personality richer and fuller. ✅The novel adds the original male protagonist Zheng Huaijing, who is more like a mature parent. He slowly resolves many disputes, prevents Gu Yixin from being reported, prevents Xiao Haiyang and Lu Qiaochuan from causing more trouble in military training, helps Bi Shisan who has tuition difficulties, and gives Lin Luoxue a sense of security... At present, there are still many stories that have not been unfolded, such as Zheng Huaijing's family story... ❌A lot of Ren Yifan's content has been reduced ❌I feel that the characterization of Lu Qiaochuan is a bit strange (it is similar to the original TV series character design and style of doing things, but I feel that a lot of Lu Qiaochuan's content in this book is not pleasant, maybe because he is very unreasonable and mean)

It's pretty good, but I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and the trio is a little more than just friends. There is also hope that Lin Luoxue will not be the heroine, right? It's not that she's bad, but I feel like she needs a good friend more.

Who is the heroine? The ideal in the world is still pitiful.

It is well written, written from an intellectual perspective, and satisfies the thoughts of some readers from a God's perspective.

Come on, it's very well written.

It's not easy to be a fan of Little Broken Window. I support it. It can be seen that the author has some thoughts of his own and is writing very seriously.

Nice! Authors with life experience and interpersonal experience [Sending Hearts]

Come on author, the writing is very good.

Please keep your pace

There are flaws, but survival is not easy. Give it a little push.

Directly issue a good person card to everyone

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Okay, but the updates are a bit too little. I update once a day and can finish reading it in one go.

Among the fanfics I went to school with, it's relatively good. It's quite interesting, but there are too few.