See how the protagonist Luo Ya grows up, develops family ties, friendships, becomes a god, and finally proves Hongmeng in his own way. The scenes of struggle, remember to save your mind before reading this book.
Reader comments
Don't miss it if you pass by, take a look, take a look, the beginning of a classic old book fanfic
Let me tell you one thing: don't give points, don't give points, don't be on the list, we have to secretly send thank you to everyone.
I have only read the beginning, 12 chapters, but it gives me the feeling that it is a masterpiece in the fan fiction category. The first online novel I read was Panlong, which left a deep impression on me. This novel really has the same feeling as when I first read Panlong. It is very comfortable, smooth, and well written!
After reading Chapter 68, I gradually lost the "coiling dragon" feeling at the beginning and wrote the author's own style. However, a novel with a western fantasy background and written in an oriental fantasy style still seems a bit out of place. In terms of the quality of the novel, the writing is okay, but I no longer have the expectation of "coiling dragon". I wish the author better and better [laughs]
Excellent product, with the taste of a dragon. There are some things I don't understand. The grandfather who raised him is called Old Jack, and he does not enjoy the benefits of the protagonist. The blacksmith who hires labor is called uncle, and he gives money to help him break through and go through fire and water for him! I don't want to get married, but I want to build an empire and pass it on to people who are not related by blood! The Xinwushan Town that had been relocated so hard was inexplicably massacred! The two central gods of the protagonist did not stay to look after the house, they all went to the cemetery, but Lin Lei did not go!
Great job, author
First of all, the description is the same as the original work. It describes the cultivation insights instead of just mentioning them in one stroke. I want to praise them here.
And it can be seen that Chinese style descriptions have been avoided as much as possible to avoid drama. I have to praise it here. Many Panlong fandoms are poisoned by the fact that they have completely turned into Eastern fantasy in their writing, and have lost the unique Western fantasy magic style of this book.
And it can be seen that the author is trying to improve the logic, which is great
Give the author a thumbs up
Not bad, doesn't look too poisonous. However, I would like to give you a small suggestion. Nowadays, people read books faster. There are too many words in a paragraph and it is too dense to make me want to read further. It is recommended that a paragraph should not exceed four lines. As for the plot, just write according to your own ideas. After all, you can't satisfy everyone. There will always be people who like your work [like].
Panlong is one of the best fan fictions. Other fanfictions have reached the sanctuary and become a god in just a few chapters. In fact, Panlong is the most readable when he is in the Magnolia Continent.
It looks good. Come on update it. You are not stuck in the original work. You have your own ideas. Come on update it and keep working hard. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
Five points, two points for the original work and three points for the author. The writing is very good. The description of scenes and the like gave me a sense of the picture. The description of things from far to near really caught my attention. However, the plot is too slow and the pace is not fast enough.
The kind of writing that is delicate and moisturizes things silently, the true meaning can be seen in the ordinary.
Don't say whether it's good or not. But Panlong is also the first novel I have read in its entirety. I look forward to it. Take your time. What you said will be a million words if anyone reads it. More than 90 chapters are too few. After a while, I will add bookshelves.
Compared with those AI articles, this is a Panlong fanfic written by the author with great care. I hope the quality will remain the same in the future.
I didn't expect to see a Panlong fan on Tomato. Come on, it's well written!
As an old bookworm, this book gives people a feeling of combining Chinese and Western. It tastes very good, but it is too short [please update]. The content can be interacted with the original text, insert two lines. Anyway, the butterfly has already spread its wings, so it will be more exciting [face covering]
It's well written, and it's considered a masterpiece among Panlong fandoms.
It's well written and beautiful. No exaggeration, the plot is reasonable and delicate
It is a book that becomes more and more popular as it goes high and low. Updates are often interrupted, so I suggest the author finish it as soon as possible if he can't finish it.
I wrote with real emotion.
Let me state in advance that there are two points in the original work that make me still chase me for eating tomatoes and scolding me. ① Lin Lei pulled out the Purple Blood Soft Sword, which caused the seal to be broken and the beast tide destroyed Wushan Town; ② Grandpa Delin was left in a state of disgrace.
If these two nodes still happen in this book, I will definitely change it to two stars.
Not bad, it feels like watching Panlong back then
The author's writing style is rigorous and neither frivolous nor frivolous. Those who like refreshing writing should not read it.
Not bad, not bad, great 😎
Seeing this reminds me of the days when I watched Panlong! Good writing, keep it up
It's very well written, and it gets better and better as you go on. Okay
It's the best one I've ever read among the Panlong fanfics.
So far, this is the best Panlong fanfic I have ever read. The plot is very smooth and the descriptions are very clear.
It's pretty good, but the Panlong fanfic was taken down halfway through the last time I read it.
Can you please explain to me why you can't awaken the complete memory of your past life or else it will explode?
A rare Panlong fan with good writing and smooth plot.
Just saw half of it. Comment first. It's beautiful and I love watching it. It's another perspective of Panlong that I love to watch.
It's getting worse and worse, and the protagonist appears less and less.
Not bad, good writing style, well written
It's rare to see the romance of Chinese martial arts in a Western fantasy world
Not bad, a bit reminiscent of the feeling of watching Panlong in the past
Don't miss it if you pass by, take a look, take a look, the beginning of a classic old book fanfic Let me tell you one thing: don't give points, don't give points, don't be on the list, we have to secretly send thank you to everyone.
I have only read the beginning, 12 chapters, but it gives me the feeling that it is a masterpiece in the fan fiction category. The first online novel I read was Panlong, which left a deep impression on me. This novel really has the same feeling as when I first read Panlong. It is very comfortable, smooth, and well written! After reading Chapter 68, I gradually lost the "coiling dragon" feeling at the beginning and wrote the author's own style. However, a novel with a western fantasy background and written in an oriental fantasy style still seems a bit out of place. In terms of the quality of the novel, the writing is okay, but I no longer have the expectation of "coiling dragon". I wish the author better and better [laughs]
Excellent product, with the taste of a dragon. There are some things I don't understand. The grandfather who raised him is called Old Jack, and he does not enjoy the benefits of the protagonist. The blacksmith who hires labor is called uncle, and he gives money to help him break through and go through fire and water for him! I don't want to get married, but I want to build an empire and pass it on to people who are not related by blood! The Xinwushan Town that had been relocated so hard was inexplicably massacred! The two central gods of the protagonist did not stay to look after the house, they all went to the cemetery, but Lin Lei did not go!
Great job, author First of all, the description is the same as the original work. It describes the cultivation insights instead of just mentioning them in one stroke. I want to praise them here. And it can be seen that Chinese style descriptions have been avoided as much as possible to avoid drama. I have to praise it here. Many Panlong fandoms are poisoned by the fact that they have completely turned into Eastern fantasy in their writing, and have lost the unique Western fantasy magic style of this book. And it can be seen that the author is trying to improve the logic, which is great Give the author a thumbs up
Not bad, doesn't look too poisonous. However, I would like to give you a small suggestion. Nowadays, people read books faster. There are too many words in a paragraph and it is too dense to make me want to read further. It is recommended that a paragraph should not exceed four lines. As for the plot, just write according to your own ideas. After all, you can't satisfy everyone. There will always be people who like your work [like].
Panlong is one of the best fan fictions. Other fanfictions have reached the sanctuary and become a god in just a few chapters. In fact, Panlong is the most readable when he is in the Magnolia Continent.
It looks good. Come on update it. You are not stuck in the original work. You have your own ideas. Come on update it and keep working hard. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
Five points, two points for the original work and three points for the author. The writing is very good. The description of scenes and the like gave me a sense of the picture. The description of things from far to near really caught my attention. However, the plot is too slow and the pace is not fast enough.
The kind of writing that is delicate and moisturizes things silently, the true meaning can be seen in the ordinary.
Don't say whether it's good or not. But Panlong is also the first novel I have read in its entirety. I look forward to it. Take your time. What you said will be a million words if anyone reads it. More than 90 chapters are too few. After a while, I will add bookshelves.
Compared with those AI articles, this is a Panlong fanfic written by the author with great care. I hope the quality will remain the same in the future.
I didn't expect to see a Panlong fan on Tomato. Come on, it's well written!
As an old bookworm, this book gives people a feeling of combining Chinese and Western. It tastes very good, but it is too short [please update]. The content can be interacted with the original text, insert two lines. Anyway, the butterfly has already spread its wings, so it will be more exciting [face covering]
It's well written, and it's considered a masterpiece among Panlong fandoms.
It's well written and beautiful. No exaggeration, the plot is reasonable and delicate It is a book that becomes more and more popular as it goes high and low. Updates are often interrupted, so I suggest the author finish it as soon as possible if he can't finish it.
I wrote with real emotion. Let me state in advance that there are two points in the original work that make me still chase me for eating tomatoes and scolding me. ① Lin Lei pulled out the Purple Blood Soft Sword, which caused the seal to be broken and the beast tide destroyed Wushan Town; ② Grandpa Delin was left in a state of disgrace. If these two nodes still happen in this book, I will definitely change it to two stars.
Not bad, it feels like watching Panlong back then
The author's writing style is rigorous and neither frivolous nor frivolous. Those who like refreshing writing should not read it.
Not bad, not bad, great 😎
Seeing this reminds me of the days when I watched Panlong! Good writing, keep it up
It's very well written, and it gets better and better as you go on. Okay
It's the best one I've ever read among the Panlong fanfics.
So far, this is the best Panlong fanfic I have ever read. The plot is very smooth and the descriptions are very clear.
It's pretty good, but the Panlong fanfic was taken down halfway through the last time I read it.
Can you please explain to me why you can't awaken the complete memory of your past life or else it will explode?
A rare Panlong fan with good writing and smooth plot.
Just saw half of it. Comment first. It's beautiful and I love watching it. It's another perspective of Panlong that I love to watch. It's getting worse and worse, and the protagonist appears less and less.
Not bad, good writing style, well written
It's rare to see the romance of Chinese martial arts in a Western fantasy world
Not bad, a bit reminiscent of the feeling of watching Panlong in the past