Coiling Dragon: Seeking the Dao Through Martial Combat

Don't miss it if you pass by, take a look, take a look, the beginning of a classic old book fanfic Let me tell you one thing: don't give points, don't give points, don't be on the list, we have to secretly send thank you to everyone.

I have only read the beginning, 12 chapters, but it gives me the feeling that it is a masterpiece in the fan fiction category. The first online novel I read was Panlong, which left a deep impression on me. This novel really has the same feeling as when I first read Panlong. It is very comfortable, smooth, and well written! After reading Chapter 68, I gradually lost the "coiling dragon" feeling at the beginning and wrote the author's own style. However, a novel with a western fantasy background and written in an oriental fantasy style still seems a bit out of place. In terms of the quality of the novel, the writing is okay, but I no longer have the expectation of "coiling dragon". I wish the author better and better 😄

Excellent product, with the taste of a dragon. There are some things I don't understand. The grandfather who raised him is called Old Jack, and he does not enjoy the benefits of the protagonist. The blacksmith who hires labor is called uncle, and he gives money to help him break through and go through fire and water for him! I don't want to get married, but I want to build an empire and pass it on to people who are not related by blood! The Xinwushan Town that had been relocated so hard was inexplicably massacred! The two central gods of the protagonist did not stay to look after the house, they all went to the cemetery, but Lin Lei did not go!

Great job, author First of all, the description is the same as the original work. It describes the cultivation insights instead of just mentioning them in one stroke. I want to praise them here. And it can be seen that Chinese style descriptions have been avoided as much as possible to avoid drama. I have to praise it here. Many Panlong fandoms are poisoned by the fact that they have completely turned into Eastern fantasy in their writing, and have lost the unique Western fantasy magic style of this book. And it can be seen that the author is trying to improve the logic, which is great Give the author a thumbs up

Panlong is one of the best fan fictions. Other fanfictions have reached the sanctuary and become a god in just a few chapters. In fact, Panlong is the most readable when he is in the Magnolia Continent.

Not bad, doesn't look too poisonous. However, I would like to give you a small suggestion. Nowadays, people read books faster. There are too many words in a paragraph and it is too dense to make me want to read further. It is recommended that a paragraph should not exceed four lines. As for the plot, just write according to your own ideas. After all, you can't satisfy everyone. There will always be people who like your work 👍.

It looks good. Come on update it. You are not stuck in the original work. You have your own ideas. Come on update it and keep working hard. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Five points, two points for the original work and three points for the author. The writing is very good. The description of scenes and the like gave me a sense of the picture. The description of things from far to near really caught my attention. However, the plot is too slow and the pace is not fast enough.

As an old bookworm, this book gives people a feeling of combining Chinese and Western. It tastes very good, but it is too short [please update]. The content can be interacted with the original text, insert two lines. Anyway, the butterfly has already spread its wings, so it will be more exciting 🤦

Don't say whether it's good or not. But Panlong is also the first novel I have read in its entirety. I look forward to it. Take your time. What you said will be a million words if anyone reads it. More than 90 chapters are too few. After a while, I will add bookshelves.