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This is the work that I have read that is closest to the original work of a mortal. It has an exquisite layout, smooth writing, compact storyline, and ups and downs. It is a rare good book written by mortals. I finally understood the legendary story of murder and arson by Li Feiyu [Like][Like][Like] After reading "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", are you still unfinished and have too many emotions like me? Is it the young and frivolous Li Feiyu, Mo Caihuan who is unable to fall in love, Zhang Tie who has been reduced to a puppet, or Master Xuan Gu who has unfulfilled ambitions? This book seamlessly connects with the setting of the original work. There is no time travel, no rebirth, no golden fingers and no spiritual roots. Let's see how Li Feiyu, a mortal whose life hangs by a thread, changes his fate against the will of heaven and embarks on the path of cultivating immortality. He kills people and sets fires, grudges and grudges as he pleases, and traverses the world of immortality!

The writing style is like a sword drawn out of its sheath, revealing its cold light! The author uses a cold and almost sharp brushstrokes to carve the word "against the sky" into the bone marrow. Every battle scene is like a splash of freehand brushwork, full of murderous intent but not harsh. The most amazing thing is the desolation hidden under the edge - as if fate itself is a knife dance that seals the throat at the sight of blood.

The author's control over the characters is very good. The plot of the novel is very able to arouse the readers' emotions. You can feel the author's intentions. The content is logically clear and the plot is rich. It is a good book.

This book takes the world of immortality as its background, and the trajectory of Li Feiyu's rise from adversity is passionate and touching. The training system is clear, the sect disputes and the magical weapon showdown are full of tension, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. The protagonist's tenacity and counterattack are vivid and vivid, and the road is difficult and dangerous but the original intention is not changed. It not only has the majestic artistic conception of fantasy and immortality, but also contains the passionate feelings of the little people who defy the will of nature and change their lives. It is a hearty read and worth reading.

The writing is good, not mindless and cool, and is of a higher level than most of Tomato's fellow mortals.

The article is written with clear ideas, a clear story line, and no running accounts. I prefer the emotional lines in novels. Don't be sloppy. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into writing this novel. Come on

Although the routine is a bit old, it is still a rare fan to watch. Give some encouragement.

It is rare to see such excellent fan fiction on Tomato. The author has profound knowledge and clever ideas. It is worth reading. I recommend [Learned]

Li Feiyu is written from another perspective, haha, it's all good fan books, but the son of the lower plane in this world is Han Li. How Li Feiyu rises, the author has to think about it.

I found that I read the book I found in the morning and now I have finished it. I still have so much to read! It's rare for Tomato to see such high-quality fan fiction

It's well written. It's the closest to the original work I've ever seen in Mortal. The story is concise and has less nonsense. Come on, come on This book has rigorous logic and rigorous structure, closely following the timeline of mortals. The writing is smooth and concise, and the emotions are touching. Especially the night when Han Li and Mo Cai were together, which fulfilled the dreams of many mortal fans, and the brotherhood between Li Feiyu and Han Li, which is still precious in the intrigues of the world of immortality. I hope everyone will comment and help promote this good work to more people [Like] [Like] [Like]

The author has good writing skills

Why don't you finish it? It's all very good.

Well written, hope you continue to work hard!