Low Wu: This Martial Arts Master Knows Immortal Magic? !

6/10 Advantages: It's brainless and cool (combat is cool), basically invincible, the logic is basically normal, and it also has what a cool article should have. Disadvantages: A little bit toxic, such as double penetration (the author has only mentioned this so far, so it can be ignored but it will be difficult to say later), the heroine (?) Is a bit pretentious, and some places deliberately set off the protagonist Summary: If you like cool writing, you can try it. If you like cool writing, just jump in without thinking. But if you have high requirements for details, logic, etc., You should still be cautious. Warm reminder: If you want to read this book, but are afraid that the heroine (?)'S work will affect the perception, you can try to understand it as flirting or the like (fog), which may improve the perception a little (this is how I read it, and it still has some effect) Finally, the author is great, please continue to work hard and update ten times a day (confident) 4/10, I have read the book with almost 30 chapters and have finished it. Let's talk about the advantages first: Some characters can indeed be created, such as Li Yue as the father, the third prince, etc., Which can really increase the perception. Disadvantages: 1. There are many poisonous points, but not too much. However, there are many that cannot be thought about in detail. If you think about it, it will affect the perception. 2. The later stage is boring. It's basically assassination. You raise your hand to kill a group of people, and then everyone around calls you Lord Sword Immortal. The emperor has already been written about. In this era of low martial arts, I really can't think of anything else that can push the story to a climax. 3. Deliberately setting off the protagonist, so much so that the Blood Claw Sect was created. In the past, there was a martial arts competition that severely damaged the decent sect, and then he controlled the second prince to take down the Mohist artifact. In the end, he was ready to win it in one fell swoop. What does it mean that a blue-robed swordsman destroyed the Blood Claw Sect? 4. The problem of love line. If it is not a single heroine, it should be a harem, but it is unlikely to be a stud harem, because the protagonist has no idea of falling in love, but the author has the idea of ​​writing a love line, which leads to the phenomenon of the protagonist not accepting or rejecting, which greatly affects the perception. There is also the female character who inexplicably falls in love with the protagonist as soon as they meet, but because the author does not deal with it, she owes her a lot of love, which also makes people feel bad. 5. The atmosphere around the protagonist (varies from person to person). Since the protagonist is invincible, there is only respect, excessive respect, no friendship, and the relationship is not well written. There is only the female character's wishful thinking, which is just a family relationship. However, later on, the fact that the original owner died and was replaced will affect the perception, and the total impact will be even greater (of course, if you like the feeling of being above ten thousand people, this can be ignored) Finally, there are double penetration questions and follow-up writing questions The author has only mentioned double penetration before. I don't know what's going on at the moment, maybe he plans to change it. As for the subsequent writing, I don't know what to write. They are all repeated assassination provocations and then the protagonist shows off his power, and there is nothing to make the story feel like reading. Summary: If you are a fan of brainless cool articles, you should jump right in. This is indeed a good brainless cool article, but if you have a brain, the above-mentioned poisonous points will appear. Please choose carefully whether to watch it depending on the situation.

It's so good! It's so cool. Please update it. I like reading this kind of ultimate cool article. . However, the author doesn't seem to be very good at writing about ghostly girls. He could reduce her funny content appropriately. She is full of rumors and resentment about unrequited love. It's really uncomfortable to watch. I hope there will be more cool and cool plots [Adoration][Adoration]

I saw the latest 68 chapters. Some parts in the middle are suspected to be AI. The identity of the heroine is not very good. The princess of the enemy country does not know how to deal with it later. At the same time, the princess of one country does not know the general situation and falls in love with the protagonist of the enemy country because of internal fighting, which is a bit like a female channel... And soul penetration (maybe a bit poisonous) but! But! It does not hinder that the whole book tastes very good so far, and I am full of praise when I eat it. First of all, although it is an invincible flow, it does not have the slightest fighting power. Some people may think that the ancient Shuangwen Invincible flow is clichéd, but it also writes the clichés well. This is not an easy thing in this day and age. After getting the time travel at the beginning, I am penniless and have arranged myself to be invincible. Secondly, the writing is very good, and it does not feel like reading a running account. So far, There is nothing too cool about it. In the end, although the heroine may not know the general idea at the moment, she is definitely a good prospect of a yandere, a girlfriend who misses you wholeheartedly, or a gentle wife who cares about you wholeheartedly. The emotions are written delicately, and I have to say that she sticks to her every day. She always has Guo Jing and Guo Jing's pretty yellow hair in her mouth, but she is not unruly at all. As mentioned above, she is the type of girlfriend who misses you wholeheartedly. She feels relatively sweet. In summary, she is gorgeous! Look! Great book! This is a good seedling! This is something people should read. Really, it's not easy to find gold in the defense. Teacher, write it for me quickly. I want to read the follow-up! !

It's great, 10 out of 10. I highly recommend it. It's been a long time since I found a novel that suits my taste among Tomato's new books. This novel is very consistent with the image and feeling of the sword fairy in my mind. I just hope it won't turn into a harem novel in the future. I quite like Li and Miao. A sentimental sword fairy will have more contrast than a ruthless sword fairy. , This emotion is like a shackle, sealing the power, or it can be a warm light, guarding humanity. When the shackles break, it is also the time when the male protagonist breaks the seal. The plot of being angry and becoming a beauty is old-fashioned, but it works. There is also the issue of the title. I thought about it and called him Li Qing. Why is he not the Dragon Lord? Of course, Qingyu Sword Immortal will do, too. It's best for the author to have his own ideas. Although some people in the comment area say that he is a middle school student, it actually doesn't look like that. It doesn't feel awkward. On the contrary, the author's writing style is very good and the description is very compelling. Moreover, the word sword fairy is the romance of many boys. Who has not had the passionate dream of a middle school hero in his heart? Come on, author, you must not have a harem! Be sure not to open a harem! Be sure not to open a harem! Say important things three times [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

In fact, I think this is a very normal article among many articles. The subject matter is also very good and very enjoyable [Salute] In fact, in terms of character creation, it is considered normal for this age. I like the male protagonist when I see it. In fact, this is normal. It is also normal to like the image of a hero in ancient times [Punch out] [Punch out] I feel pretty good [KISS] [KISS]

This is a really cool article, it won't overwhelm the combat effectiveness, and there are currently no poisonous points. The protagonist has the caution of a time traveler, but also has the high-spiritedness unique to a teenager. The novel is clear and logical, and it also contains some hidden clues to arouse people's imagination. The protagonist's personality is also very easy to change and not frightened. He has a young and chivalrous spirit and is not indecisive. The emotional line is also very clear and clear. If the author plays it normally in the follow-up, it will definitely be a classic and enjoyable story. [Praise]

As a cool novel, it satisfies the need for invincibility after time travel, and it seems to be completely mindless, which is great in this regard; but I always feel that the protagonist is distorted. It does not mean that the protagonist has two identities: a time traveler and an immortal. I feel that the protagonist is not a person but an AI, but as a cool novel, it is really cool. I always feel that the protagonist is like an AI

Cool! It's not brainless, the protagonist doesn't do anything, and I don't know for a long time that I'm strong, but I'm not crazy either. It's a classic and cool novel for beginners. The author is quick to update and recommend. I urge the author to update twice a day.

I have read a similar book before that seems to be written by a great god. The writing style and plot make me feel happy. I missed this one. The general plot is that a modern love-hungry young man travels through time and becomes the son of a city lord. He immediately takes over and searches for his parents. He meets a beautiful princess with clear eyes. The princess falls in love with the protagonist. Oh, by the way, the protagonist is earth-shatteringly handsome. Men are surprised and women are nymphomaniacs. The protagonist always pretends to be cool like a silly boy. It's almost like this. Anyway, I ran away.

The writing is okay, very good. There are two things that people watching should pay attention to. One is that this book is a double-crossing, and the other is that this book has some cliche plots. Overall, it's pretty good, but the author didn't mark the double-wearing keyword.

I think it's ok, the narrative is relatively bland, and some of the plots are more interesting, unlike what they say are brainless. If you don't like this genre, there is no need to disparage it. Keep up the good work, author! !

The character of the male protagonist likes to appear holy in front of others. This can be seen from the Qingfeng Sword Sect. When the male protagonist obtains water control, he can control water within a kilometer. When he obtains wind control, he can control water within 2 kilometers. In the Qingfeng Sword Sect, the magic When the demon came to fight, the male protagonist did not save the people immediately. After the demon injured several and blinded one, he used a flying sword technique to nail the demon to death. This was to show the demon's power, and then he could gain greater fame by taking action himself. The male protagonist's emotional line is weird, I don't know what to say. In the beginning, the male protagonist treated Miss Liao differently from others, and later after they separated, he would miss her from time to time. I thought this should be the empress mentioned in the introduction. Later, the male protagonist returned the sword and made it clear to Miss Liao. At this time, an eldest princess had appeared, and she also wanted to be the empress. Isn't she also a female protagonist?

Cool article, but it's a pity that there is Liao Yunshu.

It is a female channel within a female channel. The male protagonist is a modest gentleman who fulfills his fantasies. You see, he is the kind of person who goes to a village and is slaughtered by gangsters who join forces with the village. He also politely lets the villagers go, saying that he will be normal, but in fact he is just pretending to be a criminal, and he always says that he does not care and takes the initiative to intervene in other people's situations. It is really a very pure female channel.

It's a very good book, five stars for it. Although there are some flaws in some places, this book can surpass 99% of the books in Persimmon. I recommend reading it if you are short of books. Those who give it one or two points, personally feel that they are either too critical or malicious.

🌟This fairy sword-themed novel really amazed me! 📖The plot is compact and the characters are vivid, every chapter is like watching a movie🎬. The setting of cultivating immortality is novel, the logic is strict, and it is effortless to read🧠. Especially the protagonist's growth line, which is delicate and real, made my blood boil🔥. Highly recommended to friends who like Xianxia! ✨

Saw more than 140 chapters. The controversial "toxic point" of this book is that there is a double penetration, and the heroine's first part is a rumor about the protagonist. Double Time Travel: The author did not describe the other time traveler much in this regard. It must have been revised, so there is no bloody plot such as the poisonous time traveler being killed by a werewolf. The rumor that the heroine created the protagonist's heartless man was really uncomfortable at first, but the heroine clarified it in the next few chapters. It can be seen as a little fight between the arrogant princess and the sword fairy couple. A new map will be opened after Chapter 140. In short, as far as the chapters I have read so far are concerned, it is a semi-independent novel, the main character is leading in style, and it is a refreshing novel about cultivating immortality. Good food

This is a peerless book, the wine of immortality in the desert, and the fine food in the wasteland of books. My fourth-dimensional resistance had successfully broken through to great success, and even Wang Mazi, on his way to resurrecting his beloved wife, had to take a moment to read this strange book, and then said that I would also be poisoned by this poison in my fourth step to the Heavenly Realm, and I regretted it.

It's good. Even here, the female protagonist dares to love and hate. It's not because of the strength of the protagonist. The length is so long. I hope the two people can get married eventually. If you didn't want to develop a love line at the beginning, you don't have to write so much. It's a pity.

I feel like I am a newbie, so I would like to give you five stars for encouragement. The setting of this book is very good, and the plot is written relatively smoothly. However, some details are a bit mindless, but relatively speaking, it is mindless and enjoyable. I really don't have any books to recommend.

It is a level that can be kept on the bookshelf, but in fact... The author of this book has certain writing skills, so I feel very comfortable when reading it. But... The story structure ability... Can't be said to be worrying, but it's also quite embarrassing. Well, to give you a portrait of the author, she is a woman in her thirties who wears glasses. She is not socially fearful, but she doesn't have many opportunities to interact with unfamiliar people. She has some work experience related to public office, but it doesn't seem to be long.

Good book, fluent writing, but the emotional scenes are too stiff

It's not a trust, it's not a trust. It's a good book, except for a few moments in the middle where he flirts with the heroine. . All the others have been read. Well written. It's not as messy as other invincible texts. .

After reading it, the first half is a refreshing novel with a relaxed pace, but the style of the second half changes suddenly. I can't say that the writing is not good, but it is very different from the previous style. It is more tense and the plot is more complex. Some people may not be able to accept the sudden change in style. Aside from this, there is generally nothing unacceptable. Now that I think about it, the characters were changed later, and the plot style is completely different.

It's so awesome. I haven't seen a novel like this for a long time. It's not boring. The pace is good. The writing is good. I'll update it quickly and reach 400 chapters. I'll give it a 9.0 Rating. This is such an invincible literary novel.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an honest and refreshing article on 🍅, but it's hard to comment on the emotional line. I think the protagonist is having a seizure [facepalm] I hope the author can handle it well... I hope Liao Yunshu can do it, otherwise it will be unnecessary for you to write so many words. Everything else is fine, reasonably comfortable. The focus of Shuangwen is not on how strong the protagonist is, but on the foil. The core of Shuangwen is the supporting role and the background story, which uses people to show their strength and events to express emotions.

It's a bit strange that the male videos I watch appear on my recommendation list.

I saw the latest chapter, it's really interesting. It's just that the princess of the Northern Jin Dynasty is not very likable, especially when the protagonist is rumored later, she looks like a common girl.

Purely cool writing, it just feels like a female video

Although there are some minor flaws, this book is really good. There are scenes in the back where you pretend to be able to resist natural disasters, such as a flood and a river is opened directly, or an earthquake and the mountain collapses, and you are trapped in the mountain, flattening it, etc. [Shy]