I, the Lost Creator, Am Waiting Online in a Hurry.

It's very well written. If you like loli, then this is your best choice.

To be honest, this book is very good overall, but there are still many areas that need improvement. The subject matter of this book is very good, interstellar science fiction, and the recovery of civilization. This is also what attracts me. Judging from the early stages of the book, it is perfect, the main plot progresses smoothly, and the style is in place without compromising the characteristics of the characters. But in the later stages, the subject matter begins to deviate from the main background, and it feels like the author has become obsessed with his own art and cannot extricate himself. I hope the author can listen to readers' suggestions, calm down, and develop the plot in many ways. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better.

It's okay, the writing is good, the plot setting is a bit problematic, but the overall look and feel is good, there are some minor flaws in the middle, but it does not affect the overall Why is there such a big poison just after the review?

All-Loli heroine, full of stars! The writing is very good, and the endless daily life with the little lolita and the inner drama of the heroines when they are "in heat" are also very good. The latest chapter is also very good, and the new Loli guide is also very interesting. I praise Aojiu! A new evil god named Loli appeared in the subspace.

Brother, just one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please. Brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. Brother, I'm tossing and turning now. Brother, I'm begging you. Just one more chapter. Brother, please add one more chapter. I'm about to die. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants on me. Climbing, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, bro, just update, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, bro, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I can't sleep now. I beg you, bro. Just one more chapter. I can't do it anymore. Please, bro, I can't stand it. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please update another chapter! ! ! ! [Cry]

The writing is very good, but there are some unreasonable aspects in the plot, but it is acceptable. This is not a science fiction novel. If it is classified, it is probably an interstellar fantasy? The setting is indeed not comparable to that of an assembly-line novel, but the author is a new author. There are some deficiencies in the growth of the protagonist, the description of the supporting characters, and the arrangement of the plot. The protagonist is salted fish, and the whole novel is full of "sense of relaxation". There is no passionate battle or profound growth, only the daily life of a young man lying down. This type of article is not very popular on the platform Tomato. But I think we can still give the author some expectations. Maybe he will perform better when the protagonist truly grows into a "leader". Come on, author, I hope this book can accumulate experience for you. The comments are just my insignificant opinions, but if there is a next book, it is still of this type, which can speed up the growth of the protagonist. He can grow up in about 80 chapters, and the book data should be better.

Is this really a newbie? It seems like it's from a veteran somewhere, or maybe it was transferred from a female video channel?

Very pretty. This is a fanfic of that comic. A bit interesting 6666, this next battle is not as exciting as I imagined.

Abba Abba, I don't know how to rate it (because I haven't rated it yet). It's a very interesting book. The author is very active and also optimizes the article. I don't understand why the score is so low.

Very good, very good

It feels like half of the chapter is psychological activities

Look! It's a bit messy in the early stages, but it's a very good book [Love]

It looks great, good luck to the author.

Come on, the author [like]

I'm trying my best to see this kind of thing

It's okay, but I feel like I won't live long. The way these two siblings get along is so similar to Yuu and Qiong😆😆

The bastard brother who relies on nooks and crannies to learn about love lines zako～zako～

Good-looking, love to see [admiration]. Make me a lolita control [shy]. Ask for group number.

I watched it in one go, it's great

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel like this that made me laugh in bed.

Brother, please don't stop updating. Your book is one of the few that I didn't find boring. I have no more books to read after you stop updating. I am really tired of reading traditional books. I really like this type

Damn it, the Zayu author has completely immersed himself in his art [laughing]

One of the few books I like.

Super beautiful, very hard-working, great writing, I like the author

Just wanted to give a review

Well, we can reduce Liu Bei's plot appropriately.

Go on... Look up at the stars, and finally reach the other shore

It's okay, give me five stars to encourage you.

Support the author, it looks good

There's nothing good to say about Lolita, it's just her attitude