Yunchu's Immortal Cultivation Record

I would like to give you five points for encouragement. It can be regarded as an orthodox article about cultivating immortals. It is better than those articles about cultivating immortals that are not logical and brainless. It also has its shortcomings (for example, there are often brackets to explain) hahaha. In fact, I can briefly explain it in the text... I am quite looking forward to the male protagonist, although I have only seen it twice so far... [Laughing and crying] I like the kind of story that comes naturally without forcing the emotional line. This is the second fairy tale I have read on Yangshizi and I think it is okay. . Keep up the good work [I understand][I understand]

This is really a breath of fresh air among the many childish immortality novels I have read recently, with realistic descriptions of the environment and vivid characters. The heroine's various hardships along the way are realistically described. Survival in the world of immortality is not easy and crises are the norm. The kind of person who spends millions in buying and selling during the Qi training period, who has various opportunities to go out casually, and who meets strangers without having the bad intentions to live in harmony with them. I threw away my brain and couldn't stand it. I accidentally saw that this article couldn't be published at once. It is really well written. I hope the author will update it five times a day and continue not to be a bad eunuch.

Good article. The female protagonist has a righteous outlook on life and is self-reliant and self-reliant. There is not too much competition between males and females in the story, which is very good. Everyone is a normal person, busy cultivating immortality. And the male and female protagonists are not evil people, which I feel is very good. Nowadays, there are many male and female protagonists in Tomato novels who are pure evil people and do not clean up their innocence. I feel a little disgusted. How can such people be worthy of being the male and female protagonists? The author's rating is really low, maybe because not many people have read it, but there are many chapters, and I have already read the latest chapter. The love between the male and female protagonists is also quite sweet, it comes naturally, and they have a daughter directly without pain, which I think is great. Compared with the son in the previous article, I think the daughter has really made a breakthrough.

The heroine has a distinct personality. Her character is resolute and not disturbed by external things. She pursues the road wholeheartedly. I like her down-to-earth character. The emotional line is weak. It is good not to talk about love so far. It will be settled in the later stage. It doesn't matter if it is not there. As for the content, the author's writing is smooth, and the process connection is logical and not obtrusive. I like this rhythm. I've been reading for more than ten years. If it's good, I'll keep reading and support it. Cheers, author😊. I was pleasantly surprised by the new article I discovered by accident.

The writing is very good. You must persevere, author, and it will definitely become popular. The writing is realistic and the plot is rich. The male protagonist seems to appear at the beginning and disappear later? I just read Chapter 24 and I want to give a good review, which is also very rare [face covering] Author, please write ✍[Like][Like]

Tomato is a rare traditional fairy tale. The golden finger is not big. The heroine and her friends explore their path step by step in a down-to-earth manner. There is no competition between the male and female, and it has the feeling of starting from the early stage of the fairy tale. Overall, it's a bit mediocre, but it's much better than the various junior sisters, group pets, and vicious female supporting characters Lu Wen now, come on

Just started watching. An unexpected surprise! ! ! I just found out that it is not finished yet and is still being updated. So far, the word count is low. The author has updated the plot honestly and honestly. I think it is quite interesting. It is not procrastinating and the logic is clear. Keep following it! ! ! And this heroine has a good outlook on life, I love her! !

The author really likes the word heavy flavor. I have read it hundreds of times, and I am really tired of reading, but the core values ​​​​of the novel are expressed very accurately, which is to struggle forward and strive upward. Except for a lot of repeated words, there is not much else to say.

Have you ever seen a fairy tale that suits your needs? The heroine is very charming. She is not a top genius but she keeps climbing the ladder with her perseverance. The author writes the battle in a very immersive way, and the emotional lines are not inexplicable but gradual.

The plot is compact. The heroine has an amazing will and slowly grows up under extremely difficult conditions. There is no system or hidden boss's guidance. The heroine breaks through at the critical moment of life and death. The writing style of the traditional fairy tale repairing chain is also good, you can take a look.

It's a bit similar to "The Story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". An ordinary little man, determined and determined at every step. When he first started cultivating immortals, he was secretive and clumsy, but he was calm and decisive when encountering evildoers. When you meet someone who is kind to you, you will not blindly trust them. Those who have saved their lives will have a yellow bird holding a ring. Pure and pure cultivation of immortality.

It's rare to see an orthodox fairy tale on Tomato. It can be seen that the writing style is a bit immature at the beginning, but gradually gets better. It's good-looking. Come on, the author. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Please update more, don't let me catch up.

It's really good to watch. I like the heroine Yun Chu's calmness, tenacity, and calmness. She solidifies her foundation step by step and is not in a hurry to make progress. The tense opening scene of the story made it very interesting for me to read, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot (I stayed up until three o'clock in the morning, who knows, it's super interesting!!!)

Looking at the beginning, it's really not easy for the heroine.

It is real and objective, the plot design is intense and exciting, and there is no cheating. The heroine grows up step by step in the struggle, honing her will and fighting skills. It is good, worth pursuing, and book lovers who are in a book shortage can check it out.

After reading more than ninety chapters, let me evaluate it first. The heroine travels through the book and the five spiritual roots slowly grow up step by step through her own efforts. It is an orthodox fairy tale, with sects, friends, and CPs. At present, the word "critical moment" appears too frequently in the novel. Every time, various changes occur at the critical moment! I hope it won't happen again in the future! Everything else looks pretty good.

It's really good. It feels like I used to practice fairy literature. I can read it.

It's super pretty, especially the adorable snowball baby.

The story is eloquently told, and I enjoyed reading it. After reading one chapter, I still want to read more. A good novel.

The content is very good, I feel like it's a love story. I really want to read it, but I just can't stand it, but the overall concept is very good [smile]

Watching and watching, I fantasize that Xue Wangqing is the male protagonist [crying]

Can the male protagonist be Xue Wangqing? I feel very handsome and powerful.

Very good, I have the desire to read more

A very interesting book with a very unique storyline.

The writing style is sophisticated, the characterization is profound and moving, and it is not muddled. It feels like I'm watching a male video.

It's good to read. The author updates it steadily. Has there been a sudden update before? Hahaha. The plot is fascinating. The heroine has a calm and calm personality. I will continue to follow up.

After reading a few pictures, the writing is logical and better than mindless writing. It's worth reading.

Come on, baby! I really like the character of the heroine's baby, but it's just too miserable😢 My sister is slowly getting stronger! ! ! Like 🤤

This book is well written, and there is no excessive cheating. It would be better if there were multiple people talking. My colleagues like to listen to male voices reading, and I like multiple people talking. This all has a selection function This article about cultivating immortals is okay, but the update is too slow and not enough to read. The male protagonist Xue Wangqing is not bad, he has not harmed the female protagonist and has helped her many times. It is not bad to take him as a child and his strength is comparable to the female protagonist. The female protagonist wants to build her own sect and recruit people who can take care of the internal and external affairs. She also needs to be sincere and devoted to the female protagonist.

I have been short of books for a long time and finally found this super nice book. The heroine's baby is so tough and strong! But the heroine's design looks like the kind of character in a non-CP novel. I hope her relationship with the male protagonist won't be too strong. I'll take another look [I understand]