Harry Potter: Bringing Peace to a Dark Age with the Killing Curse

It's not bad. The subject matter is semi-new. From the time travel of the protagonist in one system, it has become available to everyone. It's a bit like a game with a module. It's very interesting, I like it very much, and it's worth watching. But the name doesn't make it clear what the content is. . . . .

Man, hang in there, the data is getting better and the ideas are getting better, it's really cool.

Good morning! Hogwarts! Today's Dead Man Lotto is a full 9,527! Thanks to the endless stream of fifth-year transfer students, five thousand died in the Forbidden Forest alone. But a Gryffindor is also dead, and I think you all have to pay money, because Harry, the savior, will definitely not be able to swallow this breath.

Imagination writing, group portrait writing. For those who have played Huo Yi's games, they may have a unique feeling of pleasure. It is also very friendly to people who have never played it before, so they will not be confused and may even arouse their interest in the game. It is also friendly to the original work party (private designs are allowed). Many common outrageous private designs do not appear. The characters basically follow the original work, but each has its own emphasis. The author's thinking about the original characters can also be seen. The whole book starts from Chapter 15 and gets better and better. Starting from Chapter 44, there are ups and downs, and the more you write, the better. The overall situation is improving, so if you feel bad at the beginning, stick with it, and it will get better and better in the future. This is the only one with this idea at the moment. There is a very good point in this article. Generally, the intensity of pressure will lead to a decrease in the feeling of pleasure, but if you don't press it, there is no need to write it. This book will use descriptions of psychological growth to offset readers' desire for intensity, and even resolve suppressed resentments. For example, male and female blogs have a mix of writing styles. It is rare for pure male channels to write about daily life so well. I suggest that the author can take into account the sense of comfort while carrying forward the style, which should be able to go to a higher level. In short, I write so much for one purpose, change the title and cover of the book, polish the first five chapters, don't cut it, don't go to the palace, there is still a chance for everything. PS. If you are planning to run away and still write this idea, please take me with you (just leave a message)

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good. I really suspect that you have been studying for a while. If you update it once a day, it is too little. It is indeed very interesting. As long as you're not as short as the previous Hogwarts book, it's not impossible to surpass the MC one.

I cut it as soon as I brushed it. It's really amazing. I think it's really well written. Hey. I hope the author will come back and update

It's so good to watch, so good to watch. The plots of HP and Hogwarts Legacy are well arranged and compact. The protagonist group and characters are all very nice. I look forward to the great Harry Potter coming to his loyal wizarding world.

Very good, it was just pushed today, the author keeps writing!! 😢

Good book, finally someone writes about Potter's psychological growth, but has the author considered changing the title to "Hogwarts/HP: Game Comes, All Avatars" 🤔

It's quite interesting so far. I hope I can write it to the end safely. This book is okay, but not many people read it? The author's previous book was also good, but it was too short.