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It's not bad. The subject matter is semi-new. From the time travel of the protagonist in one system, it has become available to everyone. It's a bit like a game with a module. It's very interesting, I like it very much, and it's worth watching. But the name doesn't make it clear what the content is. . . . .

Man, hang in there, the data is getting better and the ideas are getting better, it's really cool.

Good morning! Hogwarts! Today's Dead Man Lotto is a full 9,527! Thanks to the endless stream of fifth-year transfer students, five thousand died in the Forbidden Forest alone. But a Gryffindor is also dead, and I think you all have to pay money, because Harry, the savior, will definitely not be able to swallow this breath.

Imagination writing, group portrait writing. For those who have played Huo Yi's games, they may have a unique feeling of pleasure. It is also very friendly to people who have never played it before, so they will not be confused and may even arouse their interest in the game. It is also friendly to the original work party (private designs are allowed). Many common outrageous private designs do not appear. The characters basically follow the original work, but each has its own emphasis. The author's thinking about the original characters can also be seen. The whole book starts from Chapter 15 and gets better and better. Starting from Chapter 44, there are ups and downs, and the more you write, the better. The overall situation is improving, so if you feel bad at the beginning, stick with it, and it will get better and better in the future. This is the only one with this idea at the moment. There is a very good point in this article. Generally, the intensity of pressure will lead to a decrease in the feeling of pleasure, but if you don't press it, there is no need to write it. This book will use descriptions of psychological growth to offset readers' desire for intensity, and even resolve suppressed resentments. For example, male and female blogs have a mix of writing styles. It is rare for pure male channels to write about daily life so well. I suggest that the author can take into account the sense of comfort while carrying forward the style, which should be able to go to a higher level. In short, I write so much for one purpose, change the title and cover of the book, polish the first five chapters, don't cut it, don't go to the palace, there is still a chance for everything. PS. If you are planning to run away and still write this idea, please take me with you (just leave a message)

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good. I really suspect that you have been studying for a while. If you update it once a day, it is too little. It is indeed very interesting. As long as you're not as short as the previous Hogwarts book, it's not impossible to surpass the MC one.

I cut it as soon as I brushed it. It's really amazing. I think it's really well written. Hey. I hope the author will come back and update

It's so good to watch, so good to watch. The plots of HP and Hogwarts Legacy are well arranged and compact. The protagonist group and characters are all very nice. I look forward to the great Harry Potter coming to his loyal wizarding world.

Very good, it was just pushed today, the author keeps writing! ! [Cry]

It's quite interesting so far. I hope I can write it to the end safely. This book is okay, but not many people read it? The author's previous book was also good, but it was too short.

It's very interesting to watch. Most people who can't understand the mixed content of Hogwarts Legacy have never played it.

Good book, finally someone writes about Potter's psychological growth, but has the author considered changing the title to "Hogwarts/HP: Game Comes, All Avatars" [Thinking]

Come on, I like it so much [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Come on, the author writes very well

The original Harry has courage, wit, and a flexible bottom line. Watch love, more updates!

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good cheers for the author

The author's top priority is to change the title and cover of the book The subject matter is very novel and the writing is good. The main reason is that the title of the book is not very attractive and has no connection with the main content of the article. It is suitable to be placed in the introduction. The name can be changed to a name that is suitable for the content and attractive, such as "HP: All-Human Huo Yi Simulator".

Really, the writing above is super good, and the ideas are very novel. Don't be fooled by the ratings. It's worth reading. But for some reason, the traffic has not been high. I hope the author doesn't give up.

It's really well written. It makes me want to play games. It's just that your current cover is too abstract.

The book is good, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch? . . .

It looks good, I said come on, don't cut it for them (ﾉД`)

It looks good, but the update is too slow. It took so long to update just a little bit.

Hp with the same text, the plot is smooth and the imagination is very attractive, the writing is first-class, the author is so grateful ^0＾~＾0＾~

Beautiful, very novel book

This novel is quite novel. I don't know why the rating is not high. The characters are well created and the occ areas can be rounded out in time.

Interesting new setting, come on author

It's really beautiful. The writing style is very similar to JK. Keep it up, the author. I've already recommended it to my friends. To be honest, the author wrote it and I want to play Huo Yi.

It's a very good book. I don't understand why the rating is so low. I just hope the author won't ruin it and do it faster.

The subject matter is novel and very interesting

Very pretty, don't be a eunuch

Interesting, needless to say