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The two only comments have already revealed a lot of problems, basically that, plus an AI polishing feature (but Tomato's writer assistants all come with AI polishing, so there's no trick to it, just water it down a bit)

I feel that my understanding of Renzhongren is different from that of the author. The medium-level ability is related to the upper limit of the world. In other words, the highest level in this world is 100% at level nine, so his ability is at level 4 at 99%. In the Naruto world, genin 1, chunin 2, jounin 3, shadow level 4, super shadow level 5, six paths level 6, and beyond six paths level 7. Then the protagonist's ability should be 99% of that of a Jonin. ——Original text: "It allows people to immediately possess the current [world's] mid-level abilities, but it is difficult to advance further." Adding another person of the same age? Do peers have anything to do with (the world)?

Forage. The story of "people among people + the ability to travel through gates" is well written and interesting. The protagonist's numerical control is good, average. This kind of arrogant character will either become invincible and boring to death, or it will always suppress the protagonist and make him feel frustrated to death. The protagonist's numerical value has always been moderate, just right. In addition, the protagonist is a fun-loving person and the plot is quite interesting.

By the way, will the protagonist's human talent limit the acquisition of knowledge? If not, he can develop technology. Use otherworldly abilities to develop technology. Does the so-called extraordinary have to be limited to cultivating magic, superpowers and ninjutsu? Why can't it be technology, whether it is two-way foil, star destroyer cannons, or nuclear bombs. Missile. And spaceships. Technology can also be regarded as a system. Whether it is the nanometer level that the earth is currently developing. Or a higher-end atomic level. And molecular level. There are also higher-end levels. As science develops, it becomes more and more mythical, beyond imagination. The technology that extraordinary people can do can also be done. Just like cultivating magic, spiritual power can be replaced by something as small as Fermi level.

People among people are written as people under people. There are nine levels in the current world. Shouldn't the middle level be four, five, and six? Why is it three [Thinking]

After reading it, I looked at the comment section. Every novel has a world view. There is no villain in this novel, the government is very positive, and the protagonist and his childhood sweetheart are very affectionate. Some people who watched the novel for less than 30 minutes said that the protagonist is stupid. Why are you pretending to read a few dark novels? [Vomit][vomit][vomit]

It was originally meant for the heavens, but it was just so-so in the early days. Naruto or the Death Pirates were just like steel-making by one person. But I liked Kuiba's writing very well, so now I'm here for Kuiba, (ಡωಡ) Good health, love health, highly recommend Yaoxia Tonghao Laikang~(¯▽¯~)~

I really like your youthful character as a time traveler who lives two lives again, your caution that is exposed twice in ten chapters, and your endless patriotism. The only small problem is that it's too much fun, and my blood pressure can't be suppressed [laughing]

How to eat McDonald's, I have a complete version of the nanny-level tutorial: first buy a McKinney, chicken burger set, you remember, do not add ice to the Coke, because it is originally ice, what to add to a 1+1 double cheeseburger, taro pie, because the sweet and salty are always dynamic, eat the French fries first, because the French fries become soft and unpalatable when cold. How do the French fries taste like this? Open the box so that the fries will not be on the plate and look dirty. Eat them dry first, enjoying the oily aroma, crispness and saltiness of the fries until your mouth is slightly dry. Then add ketchup and eat it. At this time, the fries are finished and the salty taste of the fries is in your mouth. Now we open the first burger, which is a double cheeseburger. Because its sauce is ketchup, this burger is sweeter. Let's eat this. After eating this, we can open the chicken McNuggets. Because it has a sweet sauce, it can be sweet and salty. After eating four pieces of chicken McNuggets, we can open the chicken burger. Whether it is spicy leg burger or pan-roasted burger, its sauces and seasonings are salty and spicy. As the saying goes, salty and sweet. After eating, you can eat taro pie. At this time, there is the last sip of Coke left. Drink it, wash your hands, and go home!

I feel pretty good, I can continue writing about the novel subject matter.

Travel directly to the Panlong, the Hongmeng space where the stars become, and become the middleman of the three brothers, or the middleman of the three thousand demon gods in the prehistoric times, or in the Cthulhu divine system, directly reach the sky in one step

The theme setting is very good, but there are a lot of worlds. Some of them you don't understand will make people feel confused. Traveling back and forth from one world to another will make people confused. If this part can be optimized, I feel that the score should be improved. More

I haven't read much of it, and the ideas are pretty good, but the loopholes make me uncomfortable and unhappy. People among people plus unlimited time travel, doesn't the first time you get it stack up infinitely to become invincible? Maybe you will say that some worlds are too strong and cannot be penetrated by Taiyin, such as the Ke type. Then you can also add a sentence in the article: "I am afraid of encountering this kind of world, so the male protagonist has his own considerations and plans to upgrade all the way to it." But even so, it still feels overwhelming. After all, if you are really unlucky and stack all the way to the highest level, the next world is too high and you will die. So the best solution is to add restrictions on time travel. For example, there is a cooldown, and the next world can only be unlocked after reaching a certain level of exploration, which can solve the problem of suppressing combat power. Then, the world is graded or the world captured is based on the strength of the protagonist, so there is no worry about dying in the light. Of course, it's just a personal suggestion, because it's very uncomfortable, and I think it's a good idea. It's worth watching for the time being, but when I watch it, I have to patch it in my mind, which only adds to the burden. I'll watch it again, and if there are other poisonous points, I will withdraw it...

The History of Chocolate, I just watched it well, but after watching it too much, I found it was too red.

After seeing the latest chapter, I am also thinking about how the original world will change, how the protagonist will save the world and change the if line. Using the past to overwrite or create a new future, having one person in the world and everyone preventing changes from happening can be considered a foreshadowing and a hint to the future of the original world. I also want to see a perfect ending, but I feel that the leap is a bit too big. What should I write after finishing the original world? I have no sense of upgrading in daily life. The original world chapter itself has reached a peak, and I can't open a new map. Generally speaking, the writing is pretty good, there are no major poisonous points, and it is worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better works [Like]

The ability of "People Among People" is not set well, and overall it seems that some paragraphs are missing. However, if there are no major problems, I will give it five stars as usual.

People among people, not people in the "world", that is, based on people's strength, not the world's set values. For example, if the setting ranges from level 1 to level 100, but the strongest person is only level 89, then level 89 is the upper limit. Among the numbers that describe the central tendency and average characteristics of the data, there are median, mean, weighted average, and mode, all of which are possible, and the differences may be huge. Now that we have conceptual skills, no matter how fancy they are, just use the largest one by default.

There is actually a bug in this type of ability. If you travel to a world before the creation of life by the Creator God, no matter whether you are a subordinate, a human, or a superior, there is only one Creator God.

Yes, the imagination is good, the plot arrangement is smooth, and there are no obvious poisonous points. Grains are worth a try

Shen Nong is Coming. This book is still good. It has the flavor of the original.

It's well written, except that the main character has such great talent but is too lazy to improve his strength.

The protagonist's combat power is a mystery. Anyone can do it twice, and there is never a time when he can do it smoothly. There are too many holes dug, and I don't know if they can be filled later.

This book is really well written, I love it

It's obviously four or five stars, why is the rating so low? Why are updates so slow? Why did it take so long to get only four or five hundred? Author, what are you doing? Have you ever reflected on yourself? Have you worked hard? Have you made a good effort to update? Have you looked next door? 15 Chapters a day! Answer me! Miscellaneous repair!

6 After thinking a lot, I finally give you a 6. This novel really poked me.

It feels okay. Because the protagonist's time travel does not control the flow of time. So it's a bit like traveling through time. Basically, you only have a taste of each world. You stay there for a few days, get familiar with the new abilities, and then move on to the next world.

You can check the end of the first chapter and the beginning of the second chapter to make sure you want to read it.

The protagonist has the same personality as SpongeBob SquarePants

I'd better leave some innocence to the children, so I won't comment too much. It's suitable for junior high and high schools.

This Xia Mi looks like Amis. If it hadn't appeared earlier than Aemis, I would have suspected that the character was copied.