HP: so What If Thousands of People Hate You?

Not happy, good looking. There isn't much of this kind of writing around these days, especially among lilies. Everyone likes cool stories with an invincible protagonist and no twists and turns, but they forget how one can feel the bright sunshine without the tears of a sad world. Love color tenderly in black and white, and make a pilgrimage to black and white in color.

Lyle is a heart-wrenching protagonist. She is not the kind of suffering character that is simply created and formatted. It's a little girl who is constantly being hurt in a bad environment, constantly forcing herself to adapt, and struggling to move on. Her experience was so painful that I couldn't help crying several times during the reading process. What I have been striving for is just to be understood and loved. Because of this, I am particularly looking forward to the tender daily moments between her and Hermione - as if in the long dark night, someone is finally willing to look at her seriously.

The character of the protagonist is very real, and she looks like she grew up in line with her background. Children are forced to mature and have the flaws and fragility, hesitations and contradictions that occur at that age. I really like the characters written by the author. It is so rare to see this kind of work! The development of the story line is also reasonable and smooth, and some controversial parts in the original work are also discussed, such as whether Muggle is also a discriminatory term. I like this very much!

Lila's character is very good. I feel like she is just a little arrogant who says she doesn't need friends but is a bit arrogant and lacks love when she treats Hermione. She needs to be affirmed by her grandmother. There are really too few and too few people who love her. But it can be seen that the author really loves her. The character is very well written. The concept of the novel is also very novel in HP fan fiction. However, I feel that the author sometimes writes a bit messy and readers can't quite understand it. I feel that some generalizations or explanations can be made to make it easier for readers to read. The part about the secret room made me so confused that I didn't even know why Laila successfully brought the diary back. Well, it's probably just a little suggestion. I really like Laila. I hope the author can continue writing [Love]

This is my favorite style. I like the growth line of the imperfect heroine very much, but I still hope that the author can speed up the pace and add some excitement. I don't think the injuries suffered by the heroine belong to the narrative of abuse of women. The narrative of abuse of women refers to the spectacle of a woman's pain being displayed, and the pain does not allow her to have any personal growth (for example, just to be favored by the male protagonist, to gain some kind of moral capital, or just for some kind of "beautiful" scenery, etc.) Typical situations, such as in Chen Sicheng's "The Disappearance of Her", Li Muzi took the initiative to take off the oxygen mask, the scene of being drowned, etc. And Laila has her own clear growth line, and those pains are the only way to go through the beginning of Tianbeng. After all, it is difficult for people to reflect on things when they are happy. And the heroine did not suffer any physical torture, but more of the social repression in her environment. Objectively speaking, the heroine would often take revenge, but the author did not exaggerate the feeling of pleasure, and more of the expression was centered around the heroine's heart. The selling point of this book is the growth history of Laila, a seedling that grew out of a rock crack. If you want to read about being pampered from beginning to end, this is not the book for you.

It is indeed Tomato's rare high quality. Even if it is a fan, the personality charm of the original character Lyla is not inferior to that of Harry and Hermione. Lyla has already stayed in the hearts of readers in flesh and blood [Love]

It's delicious. It's the first time I've eaten one where the main character is a Death Eater. It feels a bit strange, but this character surprisingly doesn't make me hate it! I finished reading it in one day. It's a very bitter little Lyran star. Alas, child... Alas, if you grow up, you won't be deceived. Star, your life is bitter. I hope this stubborn and lonely child can be happy.

This book is really great and I highly recommend it to everyone~ First of all, the plot content of this book is not like other books. This is the only book I've read where the heroine believes in the Dark Lord, and the heroine doesn't just like him, but she longs for the feeling of being praised and trusted. Also, I think the best thing about this book is the heroine's personal growth and her psychology. Secondly, the heroine's character is very distinct. The image of the heroine is not simply optimistic or negative, and her emotions are not static. The author's portrayal of Laila's emotions is particularly successful. He does not deliberately glorify anyone. Whether it is negative or positive emotions, he can express them very truly. Also, the author's writing is great. The plot of the story is well detailed and full of ups and downs, which can greatly attract readers' interest in reading. Many places are very delicately depicted, especially the heroine's character. The emotions of disgust or love for others are not simple, but many emotions are intertwined, allowing readers to feel the complex feelings. The plot content is also very interesting. Finally, this book is really, really, really, really, really, really good to read! ! ! Because I'm not very good at writing book reviews, I write like a human-machine (´;ω;`) but this book is really, really good! ! ! The protagonists are more realistic in their characterizations, while some books have characters that are a bit too flat. All in all, it's really super, super, super pretty! ! ! ! ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭ Another point is that many fanfics I have read are either purely sadistic, purely refreshing, or purely sweet. There are really few that are so realistic. And I think the relationship between the heroine and many people is very good (ฅ´ω`ฅ): the heroine and Sirius hate each other, but they are very awkward, well, I can't say they are in love, well, they just care awkwardly; and the heroine and Hermione, needless to say, Hermione is the only person willing to take the initiative to care about Lyra, which is so good!

It's very interesting, and the writing style is rather cold, which fits the heroine's desolate background very well. I just hope that the author will stop leaving the heroine alone. It makes my heart feel cold. Give me some sugar [I'm about to cry]

I feel like the heroine is a bit depressed and very helpless. But the content is super exciting. He vividly wrote about the helplessness of a child and the behaviors of some people. Hope it doesn't end badly. I also hope someone can love her more.

It's very interesting. I think this book is one of the rare ones that is unbiased. At first, I was worried that there would be common problems with Harry Potter fan fiction in Tomato, but I didn't expect this book to be so interesting. I hope the heroine will be happy in the future!

Shocking and delicious, highly recommended! I feel sorry for anyone who didn't get to read this! ! ! The psychological description is delicate and vivid, and Lyle's characters are created so well. Through the text, I can almost see the girl who grew up in the twisted No. 12 Grimmauld Place, but still retains a trace of tenderness in her heart. She lacks love, so she decided to defect to Voldemort just for Walburga's praise, and because of the clever words of Diary Soup, she fell deeper and deeper. By the time she came to her senses, it was already too late, just like the Gaunt ring, which could only be removed by cutting her neck. Looking back, she only wanted a love at first. She had too little, only Kate, a naughty cat, Kreacher who didn't completely belong to her, and Hermione. Except for the original characters, none of the original characters have OOC, and no one is deliberately blackmailed. Although I prefer Draco, who has no dealings with Lyle, the whole story is very comfortable to read. In short, this is a rare and good article. Madam, I will follow you forever! ! !

So fast and real. It is written with Sirius' daughter in Harry's same grade as the protagonist. If your father doesn't care, you don't have a mother. The family only has Chelik, a civet cat, and Hermione cp. It's all glass shards and 30% sugar. But the more she looked at it, the more real it became. She had always believed that Voldemort would win, so she made mistakes and abused her every step of the way. But she was just a child. Harry gets everyone's attention and she's just a poor thing that no one cares about

I gave her all my tears, it was written really well in big letters

The characters in the original work are very consistent with the original work, there is no OOC, and this book is one that you can't help but read in one go (you can read it and cry at the same time, it's really beautiful, the heroine is really miserable, I hope the author can give a HE, every chapter is 🔪🔪) Don't be fooled by the author, be careful and complete the update, otherwise you will have to send it to me [shy]

The full text has a good control over the character creation. Harry and Lupine personally feel more like a movie. The remaining characters are closer to the original novel. Because of the perspective of the protagonist, some people have really bad reviews. The narrative relationship is also very clear. The growth and psychological changes of the heroine can basically be seen. However, the most admirable point is the portrayal of Dumbledore. I feel that the easiest to OOC in HP fanfiction is Dumbledore. The last version I have seen that was so restored was a bad fairy tale.

This HP fanfic is not a cookie-cutter, mindless novel. It is a story about a little girl's struggle, self-healing and self-redemption in the darkness. The heroine is just a little girl who desperately longs for recognition from beginning to end. She is obsessed with the glory of the Black family and pursues the belief of pure blood. Her lifelong wish is to return to the family that belongs to her. This stubborn original intention has been throughout her youth. She has never been a perfect heroine, she has vivid and real weaknesses. She would panic from the bottom of her heart, she would instinctively fear the dark oppression brought by Voldemort, and she would also be outright jealous of Harry Potter as her godson. Her selfishness, cowardice and petty thoughts are all fully exposed. It is this imperfection that makes this character completely stand up. During her school years at Hogwarts, she and Hermione gradually got to know each other, and this relationship that transcended positions became the warmest light in her gloomy life. Her growth has always been vigorous but quiet. From being trapped in the shackles of pure blood, to being in the Death Eater camp, struggling in the mire of darkness, she gradually broke free of the fear in her heart, and forcibly developed the courage to face the darkness and stand up to fight. All the bonds, redemption and growth in the book confirm that sentence, love is indeed the greatest magic in the world.

It is really a book that I like to read and have been following it for a long time. The heroine of this book is not like the strong and perfect heroine in other books. She does not have a golden finger. Her background is not very happy. Sirius does not love her and her repressive environment. But the character creation is very real, because a person cannot be perfect, and Laila's character is not perfect. She wandered repeatedly between the two camps, and of course she chose the right side in the end. Fortunately, Laila was happy in the end [crying] In fact, this is the second time I have modified a comment, because the comment was at the front and could not be viewed.

Nice! I can really feel the love for Laila from the author's writing. Poor little Lyra, I hope you will no longer be lonely in your future life. The other CP is Hermione who is also very satisfied! The smart and proud little witch is only worthy of another smart and proud little witch! [Full] The interaction is also very cute, I like it! Come on, author, I will continue to pursue it!

Overall, I think the plot and description are very good. It makes me feel that the character is very three-dimensional and like a living person. However, the connection of the plot needs to be polished. I wish the author better and better here.

It's beautiful and the descriptions are very real. It's not the kind of short sweet novel that you often read. But it's very real when you put it into it. The magical world has just calmed down for more than 10 years, and the protagonist's thoughts are still influenced by his grandmother. It is impossible for him to have a normal mind. Now that I have read half of it, maybe it's because my tears are low, or it may be a little bit sympathetic. The whole thing is that after the last tear, the next one comes again, and this book is not the kind of torture for the sake of torture. , It is very in line with the situation at that time, I feel that even if the original book reaches that plot, it will be like that, [cry][cry], but I am not satisfied. I am not satisfied with the psychological committee [cry][cry][cry], it is really a very good book,

This kind of novel that changes from a child's perspective would not look good without good character creation, but the author has written the protagonist's stubbornness and naivety very well. From this perspective, she is not a perfect protagonist, but in the author's writing, she is a misguided child, a child with low self-esteem, who has never felt "love". Even if someone approaches her and puts up spikes like a hedgehog, if she feels the warmth of a normal person instead of the verbal abuse and brainwashing of Walb, maybe she will not be so paranoid? ) She also has a good side. I like Lila very much, although I haven't seen any reason why Sirius hates Lila. At the moment, I just don't really like Sirius here. It's just my personal opinion. I'm really looking forward to the next plot [sending my heart] It would be great if the author released all of them [grieved] [crying]

It's very beautiful. I cried while watching it later, feeling sad and moved at the same time. The heroine's growth line is so well written. I found that I didn't know how to write the heroine's transformation. After reading this, I can clearly feel the heroine's transformation and growth, and at which events and nodes she changed. She has been looking for herself to save herself. After seeing how hard she was living, she said she wanted to give up life, but the next moment she struggled to survive. When I watched it, I thought, it would be too tiring to give up life. At the same time, I wanted to give up for no reason. Nothing is more important than living. The heroine is really strong and brave

This is not a pleasant book, and I even read some reviews that said it was frustrating. I admit that they are right, but these will not affect it in any way to make it a good book. Laila's life was full of chaos and chaos. She is infinitely close to Barty Crouch Jr. In terms of father-daughter relationship; her status in her native family is close to Regulus; she learns from Severus Snape in emotional processing and school career. The start of a crash, coupled with a driver who is furiously stepping on the accelerator on the downhill road, this is Laila. She always makes wrong choices, and fate plays a trick on her when she tries to catch something. Laila spent her whole life searching for love, for a pair of eyes that were full of her. But Laila lacked a little luck. The first person to say "I'm here" in her ear was Diary Tom, the person who became the most important teacher in her life was Barty Crouch Jr., And the first person to call her "little baby" was Bella. To be honest, this is definitely an unkind encounter, so she is like a monkey trying to fish the moon out of the water. The harder she tries, the more pathetic she becomes, and the more she tries to catch it, the more she loses. The tragic fate kept chasing this girl, trying to devour her. Laila could only keep running. She ran into the winding path, she ran into the maze of bricks. She could not see the direction clearly, but she could not stop. She could only keep running until she reached the future with her or was swallowed by fate. I really like the moment when Lila ran towards Hermione at the wedding scene. There was chaos all around, but the hurried Death Eaters and the helpless Draco were withdrawn from Lila's world. It seemed that only Lila and Hermione were left, but Hermione was not waiting for her at the end of the world. When Lila opened the door, she understood that love requires respect and fulfillment. Laila is a running girl, running in dreams, running at weddings, running in abstract destiny and concrete reality, until she runs to the future with her, run, run, my girl, run, run, my Lyle.

The description is very realistic, there is almost no OOC, and it follows the original character design without breaking the setting. Everyone acts from their own standpoint, and the protagonist is portrayed very well. In many HP fanfics, the original characters are black and white. This book shows that different people make different choices because of their positions. There are no perfect saints and no absolute bad guys. Dumbledore didn't care about Lyla in the first few years when she was studying. Barty did his best to teach the heroine. He was not an absolute bad person, and even Draco had good moments. It has truly fleshed out the characters, and even if there is an original work, it will never be lazy and not portray other characters in the book.

After reading it for so long, I realize that I haven't written a review yet... This is one of the few good articles I've read in HP fanfics. The character creation is particularly vivid and delicate, and it feels like watching a friend I have known for a long time grow up, suffer, make choices, and finally defeat myself. Laila is a good baby, she should be happy forever...꜀(^. .^꜀ )꜆੭

It's really beautiful! ! ! Lyra and Hermione also have a bit of a quarrel, but Slytherin and Gryffindor will never understand each other, and they will die from the same disease! ! ! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I really want to go in and punch Sirius, the father! ! ! ! !

The author has made the heroine's character very interesting. She is not blindly good or blindly bad. I really have seen enough of the kind of protagonist who has the wisdom to see through everything. On the contrary, heroines with a setting like Laila are rare. I'm also looking forward to getting a copy of Luna

This is the second HP fanfic I have read about the heroine of Bitter Melon. The heroine in the previous one was the child of Bella and Rodolphus. Because Voldemort killed many people with fierce fire, even if he won, he stayed in Azkaban for 11 years. Fortunately, Lyra only stayed for 3 months, and she still had her lover with her. It was so good, so good, so bitter, so bitter.

Good looking It's rare to see such normal and high-quality fan fiction. If I had read this novel a few days earlier, I wouldn't have been arrested offline by the Internet police To be honest, I never like to read long novels. One or two hundred chapters are enough, but I have actually finished reading this book with more than 400 chapters. I am amazed that this book is really well-written, the characters are really full-bodied, each character is well written, and you can feel their flesh and blood from the text. There are more than 400 chapters from childhood to the final battle, and there is no violation. I really stayed up late to read it after class. After reading it for a few days, it felt like I had read it for a month. I was immersed in the plot of the novel and followed the timeline for half of Laila's life (actually it was only 20 years). The heroine is really miserable, but she didn't do it deliberately for the sake of being abused, it was caused by the harsh growing environment. Her distortions are traceable, but she loves Hermione in her own way, and Hermione also wants to save Laila in her own way, but Laila is really a little bitter melon😎😭