The Sister I Picked up Only Treated Me with Double Standards

The novelty of the story is very good, but it is too bland. The supporting roles can be included, but they should play a more prominent role in causing conflicts. The story itself is in the process of creating and resolving conflicts. However, the role of the supporting characters in this book is very small, and it is too delayed, making it impossible to feel the progress of the sisters' emotions. It is not a good thing to be too slow and slow. Other sacred books may progress more slowly than this one, but many people still read and comment on it. Why? His book is interesting enough, and the description of life has more new ideas, rather than a description similar to a running account like this book. My personal suggestion is to pay more attention to the emotional progress of the two sisters, to write about the possessiveness of each other that gradually falls into each other's slightly yandere sense, and to give readers enough emotional value feedback. Very few people can accept a narrative that is too bland. In my opinion, the sister's possessiveness towards her sister is a good breakthrough point, which can be used to lead the story. This is the transition between the two of them towards love, and the same is true for the sister's love for the sister. The role of the supporting role is to promote the relationship between the two. For example, the sister is jealous of the supporting role and behaves "excessively" towards her sister. Otherwise, if the boundary is not crossed, how can the two of them see their own feelings clearly? In this process, the sister goes from questioning the relationship between the two, to understanding that the sister is indispensable to him, and then to accepting this relationship is also a very important narrative. I think other supporting characters can also play this role, such as the mothers of the two sisters. These are all factors that may cause conflicts between the two. It is best to separate the two for a period of time but not too much. It is best to end it within dozens of chapters. During this period, the two sisters can describe their longing for each other, the recognition of their feelings and the most important "deterioration". The current plot is really nothing new and exciting to watch. The traditional formula may be old, but it works. I hope to see more interesting and more intimate interactive plots between the two sisters in the future.

I quite like this book, the plot is quite good, I can accept it, and I will keep following it. Come on, great author It looks good, it really looks good, come on! ! !

It's pretty cool, why do I feel like no one is watching it?

Why are there no comments?

Nice! Sweet, with twists and turns, but beautiful! The writing is very good, I love reading it!

It's very interesting. I caught up with this one from the previous one [Blow a kiss]

An okay one

My life is so miserable without you

Seeing me generous [admiration] [admiration] [admiration], why no one sees [what]

The author could consider adding some twists and turns. The article is good but too bland.

It's beautiful. If you like Nianxia, ​​don't miss it!

It looks good and meets my requirements [Adoration]

Yandere is so scary

Very well written, good luck to the author.

Not bad, good, very good-looking

One of the few works that I like.

It looks good, good luck to the author

Good-looking and yandere, I love watching it

Good, good, good, so sweet

Super beautiful, recommended

Stop, stop, stop, after watching it for so long, you didn't get any points? ٩( ๑╹ ꇴ╹)۶

I like this kind of long-planned setting

Meow, I haven't read many words, but I think it's quite sweet QAQ