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The author's writing is really good. Although this book has two male protagonists, I think they are more like family love, which is above family love and in the middle below love. The gentle, gentle and ordinary atmosphere is perfectly suited to my taste. The relationship between two people is like a stream, flowing slowly through the land of life. Every happiness hidden in every detail is a gift from God to me, to me it is the protection of my master, and to me it is the joy of my apprentice's growth. Everyone has different values ​​and views on happiness. I especially recommend and like this book [Love]😊

It's good. Just use less descriptive words. I feel like it has a strength that doesn't belong to the dual male protagonists. I suggest you read more about other dual male protagonists. You can clearly see the difference. The first 40 chapters, excluding the description, just talk about the encounter of the two male protagonists. There is no need to write so much. It is procrastinating and gives me a weird feeling that I have clicked on the wrong software.

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The writing style is better than many novels, and the writing is very detailed. It is not recommended for those who are impatient and want to see sweet interactions between young lovers, because the pace is very slow.

It's so interesting, come and see it, come and see it.

Love to watch! I beg the author not to stop updating [cry][cry][cry]

It's good-looking, the master's character is very good, and the writing is good

I'll give it 5 stars first. After reading it, I found out that the author is indeed writing a male channel, which is obviously different from a double male protagonist book written by a female author [face covering]

Good-looking (*/∇＼*) The plot is very attractive and the story structure is very compact. It makes people want to continue looking forward to the next chapter.

It's really good-looking. It made me stay up late at night to tie it. It must be a big hit.

Warm and a little funny [laughing]

👍Incredibly beautiful

The writing is delicate and good.

Like this kind of thing very much

It's really beautiful, but why doesn't anyone watch it?

It's very beautiful. This is the real training. The master is planning behind the scenes to train the disciples to become super masters. The shortcoming is that the emotional line between these two people is too slow to heat up.

It looks so good. I really recommend you change the cover.

I feel like the protagonist could be given a little more voice, and the description feels more like a bystander from a third-person perspective, but the writing is very good!

The writing and plot are very good and explosive. It is a treasure waiting to be discovered and will definitely become a hit.