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It's a story about a female grandmother who sticks to her heart from beginning to end. It's quite enjoyable to read it with patience. The heroine is cute and beautiful. Lei Dian may have a perfunctory name for the heroine. She keeps saying she wants to become stronger but she keeps being rescued. It's too naive (but it's still cute) In fact, the tone of the whole book is a bit similar to rewarding the male protagonist with a beautiful wife (... I don't mean to be disparaging. It's actually quite refreshing to watch the interaction. In the past, my knowledge of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality was limited to some out-of-circle jokes, because I was not interested in this aspect and had no intention of reading the original work. When I read this book, I realized that the protagonist Han Li in the original book does have a very charming personality, and the other characters are also very vividly written.

I think this article should meet you in Huahua. I shouldn't be here, I should be in the car, watching how sweet you two are [admiring] fellow Taoists, hurry up and get on the bus, there are still many empty seats, and follow Yaoyao all the way.

The writing is good, the heroine's baby is simply a succubus, wow, there will be a lot of updates [shy] Feng hope feels that she still likes the heroine, but Xuan Gu really doesn't feel that she is interested in her. He bullies and lures the heroine. The heroine feels a little love-minded, and is dependent on her for no reason. She has already reached the golden elixir stage. The heroine is still weak, and anyone can handle her, but she is too soft. My son, beauty is beautiful, I feel like a loser beauty, and there are not many emotional scenes. I describe the appearance of the heroine in a large space, and describe the countless people who are fascinated by the heroine, but no one has expressed their feelings. To be honest, the heroine is not as strong as Feng hope, and she has been dragged into making a furnace.

It's really beautiful! The heroine is so cute! I hope to write a long article, more than one to two million words [to send my heart], it's really beautiful! ! ! The writing is also very good! The author keeps writing [sends heartfelt]

I give it five points because I deliberately looked for this heartthrob type of article to read. But half of the reason I don't like it is that it's a spoiled wife type heartthrob. The female protagonist doesn't know anything. The men who buy stocks feel like the heroine is a hero and saves her beauty. I prefer the fact that the author is a mother and doesn't abuse her daughter. But personally, I still prefer the self-improvement heartthrob type. So here it is, it's worth watching.

Is Feng Xi the Great Good Man a good start? I love watching it. I think Guirenniao's character is very cute and the author's writing is also very good. Come on, come on, no matter what, Guirenniao laughs at it, Wen Tianren laughs at it, 🌰 laughs at it, Xuan Gu laughs at it, they all laugh at it [laughing] [laughing]

Wuwuwu author, who would write such beautiful tong humanities for me without you? ˄ ˂̥̥ I am so impressed by the author's writing that I can't help myself. Zundu likes the feeling of Xuan Gu Jinjin very much [Adoration]

It's very strange. This book always emphasizes some items, and some symbols are very strange, a bit like AI

I'm chasing after you from Old Ford, looking forward to Xuan Gu's appearance [Adoration]

It's quite good-looking, although I can't stand the weak look of the heroine who can't do anything but only be afraid, but I really like Han Li, and I wrote Han Li's taste.

Good, good, good looking

Especially beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The characterization is very good

It's very beautiful. Big cheers to the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful, please stick to it.

The writing style is very delicate and it makes me happy to read it! ! Madam, please continue to update! ! I'll call you! ! [KISS][ANGRY][ANGRY]

It's beautiful, very detailed

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I still want to watch it ~

Write quickly, write quickly, write quickly

Super cute baby heroine [send heart]

Looks good, rice, rice, hungry [blowing kiss]

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I've never seen Mortal, but this person is quite good-looking.

It's good to read. There are too few stories about ordinary people. This book ranks third in my heart. I hope it will be better.

It's very nice, but the author has been missing lately. I'm waiting for her update.

Nice! ! The writing is very comfortable and the plot rhythm is also very good! Highly recommended for fans who like (ω) nanny! ! Great updates! !

Beautiful! This is a fan story about a mortal heroine who cultivates immortality. The author's writing is very good ~ super fragrant food

It's so beautiful. It's the best fanfic I've ever seen. The most beautiful mortal novel. The characters are not broken and have the feeling of being a heartthrob [Love]

So pretty! It is quite suitable as a novel about a female grandmother. The heroine is very cute. The writing style is also very good. There is no boring description that is very simple. It can be seen that the author writes with great care.