
Bengtie: Cos Yanqing Traveled Through Time, but Suffered Battle Losses
崩铁:cos彦卿穿越,但战损
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Animation Fans' Combat Power Ceiling
Beg! Star! Dome! Iron! Road!
Is there any book about Star Dome Railway? Although it's hard to be stabbed in the back, the plot is still very good. I want to read it! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*
I've Known Since I Was Young That I Would Be the Leader of the Sword.
I want to read a book similar to "The Sky Never Sets". Don't be a person who carries a sword, but be a cultivator with brains
Please! Another Me! Switching Forms in Seconds
High Quality Fanfic
High-quality anime fan fiction, preferably more than 500,000 words
Why! Is the Role-Playing Genre in Decline?
The original god became the greatest wear and tear of the seven gods. He secretly disappeared into the world and became a sweeping monk. He was helped by travelers to open his heart (multiple swords)
Is There Any Good [Honkai: Star Dome Railway Fanfic]?
[Remember to only accept those from Xingtie. You don't need to repost the ones I've posted because I've already collected them. I'd like to thank all the Taoist friends who recommended the book! (There are tens of millions of topic recommendations, and half of them will be visited by those who touch fish topics)
Books That Don't Feel Pain and Don't Take Their Injuries Seriously Should Have No CP.
I would like to read a book similar to "The Stealing Pen: Pretending to Be Inscrutable but Beautiful, Powerful and Tragic". Please, please, please, I want the kind that doesn't feel pain, doesn't take my injuries seriously, makes people feel distressed, has no CP, has no CP, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you^ω^
Damn It, Where Is Beng Tie? Where Is My Ben Tie? Let Me Write Something Good.
Are There Any Books About Star Rail That Cannot Replace the Original Protagonist?
High EQ: Beng Tie Has No Masterpieces. Low EQ: I Recommend Some Good Books by Beng Tie.
Want to watch something similar to "Star Railroad: Is this Civet the Envoy of Fertility?" Book.
The Cos War-Damaged Version of the Character Traveled into This Character's World and Was Crazy and Distressed
I want to read a book like "Star Vault: After being kidnapped by the system and becoming the favorite of the Star Gods". It would be even better if there are all-oriented ones.
I Want to Read a Star Dome Railway Fanfic! ! ! !
Written with thought
There Is a Shortage of Books, Please Give Me Books
Funny + single female protagonist + superpowers or systems, preferably if the male protagonist and female protagonist are childhood sweethearts, sweet. Please.
They Say That If "Suffering" Ever Ends, I... Will Be the "Savior"
I want to read a book similar to "Collapse of the Iron Nation: Playing the role of Bai E and shocking Bai Yuekui". They said that if "suffering" has an end, I... Will be the "savior", but why now, behind me... "There is nothing" "This must be a different kind of romance"
Is There No Bengtie That I Can Watch?
Is There Any Ma Jiawen Who Plays the Role of Mihoyo in Other Worlds?
I want to read a book similar to "Integrating Star Iron and Playing as Star God at the Start".
I Have Recently Become Obsessed with Star Iron, What Can You Guys Do?
I would like to read a book similar to "Star Orbit: Have You Ever Heard the Hymn of Abundance".
Want to Read a Really Interesting Book?
I want to watch content similar to "Beng Tie: Eating the Space Station in the First Three Minutes". You, come here, yes, it's you. Are you fed up with the same routines over and over again and want to find novels that are truly refreshing? Now that you have met it, take it and see it
What's Going on with Bengtie Lately? Nine Out of Ten Fanfics Have Been Scrapped, and One Is Unfinished.
I want to read a book like "Star Iron: Only after my death did Liu Ying understand love (Flowing Firefly)". Ah Qing is better😭😭😭
The Cos War-Damaged Version of the Character Traveled into This Character's World and Was Crazy and Distressed
It would be even better if there are all-oriented ones.
I've Recently Become Obsessed with Star Iron, Do You Guys Have Any Recommendations?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Organization IX".





































































































So embarrassing, I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it, it's embarrassing, I want to see it, I want to see it, it's embarrassing, I want to see it, it's embarrassing, I want to see it, it's embarrassing [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] It's embarrassing every time I see the protagonist cutting off other people's abilities. Firstly, I can't explain the source, secondly, the lines and identities don't match, and thirdly, I feel like I'm stealing, especially when the exact same moves are shown in front of me, it's so scary π_π. But the article smells so good, I really want to read it, I'm so curious, this inspiration is amazing. I want to know how the next plot will develop differently, and I want to know the story of Yan Juncun and Beng Tie. I want to see him not only develop a love for the characters after playing a game, but also after getting along with them, know the details that the pv never said, and establish a bond between Yanjun and them, not just the player's liking for the characters. Okay, I admit that I like the character Yanjun. It's a bit hypocritical, because after playing the game for a while and understanding the character's plot, I was moved to death for the character in a daze. There is a feeling that the protagonist is a leather bag, and the only meaning of his existence is to change his mind. He has no connotation. I'm interested in the inner meaning of Yanjun himself, and want to see him make friends and go home. However, it is generally believed that the meaning of the classification of cos writing is that it is difficult to change the meaning and focus on describing the protagonist without prioritizing. Alas, I have seen too many cosplay protagonists who are indoctrinated into non-existent meanings and are willing to sacrifice for the role. Sometimes I feel that this protagonist is quite unlucky. But seeing that the protagonist didn't join the Star Train, I became more interested in the rest of the story. Will the author portray the protagonist's unique connotation and make him a charming person? Will the author let the protagonist and the people in this world experience unique crises and difficulties that are not found in other parallel worlds? All in all, there is currently a lot of curiosity that makes me look forward to what comes next. It looks good and feels good, and it's actually not embarrassing at all. It's really good-looking. The main reason is that it can arouse the readers' emotions. It is really beautiful. The plot is very interesting and the protagonist is also very good. It is really interesting to watch. Come and watch it. ♡(.◜ω◝.)♡
It's really good. Overall, it's a cosplay of Yanqing's demonic form, and then he travels through time, is picked up by the general, and then gets crazy thoughts. The plug-in is the original full-level account. The protagonist actually feels a bit depressed. Sometimes he is depressed, and then he gets crazy thoughts. It feels good. I thought it would be very embarrassing when I read the comments at first. In fact, it's okay. It's much better than some others I've seen. Anyway, it's watchable. From chapter 52 onwards, it depends on the author's background. It's around 7 o'clock now. As long as the subsequent writing is good, it can get a rating of 8 to 9 o'clock. Judging from the current situation, the author should want to write that the protagonist was originally Yan Qing, and then he wanted to save him because of the destruction of the Luofu Immortal Boat and other things. After he came here, he thought he was originally a cosplayer. Really, I don't really want to see this kind of thing. I have seen many, many of this kind. In fact, this kind of score is not low, most of them have it. From eight o'clock to nine o'clock, except for some writing that was not good, from six o'clock to seven o'clock, it was written that the original protagonist was assimilated into a character, and the memories of the original family were all forgotten, and could not be remembered at all. Then I suddenly discovered to my surprise, alas, it turns out that I am this character myself, and for some purposes, I created false memories for decades. This comment is purely my own preference. If you feel bad, please don't mind it. Anyway, let's support the author.
A very good fan theme, and the author writes it well! Why does the protagonist, a time traveler, have those memories? Is this foreshadowing! I really want to go home... Why does it become like this... Why do I have those memories! Who I am! Yanqing is still Yanjun, no I am you! You are me too! Yanqing... At the end of the story, I will embark on a journey again! The general will not die, and Luofu will not die! Everything will have a happy ending! As for me... Heh Where is home... ——A traveler who goes against time
I thought it was really embarrassing when I read the comments, but after looking at it, I actually felt pretty good? (Maybe I am embarrassed because I tasted too much (tears, how could this happen)) It can be regarded as a standard online article. It is a cosplay of the main character. I have seen quite a lot of this kind of cosplay. If you get used to it, most of it is okay. It is not too exaggerated to be famous among many Star Iron fans (I used to read articles about the collapse of combat power (angry)). The progress is still expected. It can be considered that this type of cosplay is wearing the same old routine. I don't know how it plans to develop in the future. It's good to have new ideas, but it's actually not bad to pick an old routine and write it down. After all, Yanqing doesn't write much (sadly). I don't recommend it, but I really like it. The smug boy's spirit is still Chinese-style, which still pokes me too much QAQ
It looks good, but there is a bit of a knife. I am a bit curious whether Yanjun has already experienced his cosplay, but just forgot about it and passed it to another world. I said before that I wanted to keep the score low, but now that it's finished and nothing happened, it seems like it won't be a failure, so let's go up.
It also has to be a female author. There are no messy and inexplicable harems and love scenes, and there is no pornographic plot about the characters. This one is very good, and the emotional description is delicate. The plot is smooth and has a sense of the whole. There are a lot of knives, and it is delicious. Another important point! The pioneers are the treasure of our family! I haven't seen Qiong Bao in a book for a long time, so cute! Qiongbao's mother, does she love you?
The author's writing style is very good and his imagination is wide open. He should have also integrated the if line in the old Mi Qianxing. The protagonist travels with a Bengtie full life and full spirit character and a backpack. He thinks that he is cosplaying Yanqing through time travel. But now there are various foreshadowings. The protagonist if line cos should be experienced by himself. The protagonist is ignorant and doesn't know what happened. Others have already taken advantage of it. It's quite cool. However, it gave Yan Qingchu and Yunli who hated Yunli some protection. Later Yunli appeared and stole the protagonist's sword. Then the protagonist and the others went to Huaiyan and saw Yunli asking for the sword. Yunli said that the points lost on the battlefield were retrieved on the battlefield. Then the protagonist and Yanqingchu thought that the other party was really a child. Of course, later the protagonist also took Yunli's old iron and said it was a lesson to Yunli. This lesson can only be said to be in the eye of the beholder.
It's really awesome! ! ! I'm just a little curious about how the author would write the plot if he didn't choose to get on the train. If the connection is normal, there are no character OOCs, and the updates are normal, I dare say that this book can catch up with the two famous books.
It's really super good-looking, not that embarrassing, and feels okay. The character of the protagonist is actually very full. In fan fiction, especially Yan Qing's fan fiction, few people actually write it, but the author's portrayal is very good. I like it very much. Give it a try, it's very beautiful and perfect.
It's good to read. Yanchu loves to read it. I beg the author to hold on. He doesn't seek to guarantee the quantity with an absolute number of chapters, but only seeks to preserve the quality with the best writing style. (The writing of Yanqing can be said to be penetrating, and the introduction of the protagonist does not feel too abrupt. The step-by-step introduction to the plot is very clever, and the overall connection to the world is also very good)
Nice. Basically, the plot is complete, but there are still some logical illogicalities. However, the problems are not big enough to be noticed at first glance. It can be read completely and is very interesting. Finally, Yanbao, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, I am so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, I am so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, you are so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so so cute, so so cute, so so cute so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so to so so so so so so so so so so so so so to so so so so so so so so so so so so so to to you.! ! ! ! !
OK, I'm here to comment too. After watching it for so long, it's finally tied. In fact, I was a little impatient at first, but around chapter 30, my daily routine started to slow down a bit. But when I looked at it more carefully, I couldn't help but want to keep reading. The plot is very novel, I added my own interpretation to the original story, and I didn't feel like I was reading the book. It's very complete! The protagonist's emotions and settings are also very good, and you can clearly feel his growth. Secondly, the writing is really good and I know how to attract attention. The author has a thorough understanding of Tie's worldview and plot. When I read it, I thought it was written by someone from the planning department () and the ending was also very good. I was a little regretful that Yanjun couldn't meet the generals of his own world line, but the extra chapter gave me a big surprise. In short, this is one of the few well-written Tie's fanfics I've read so far, and it can be called a masterpiece. It's over, I've finished reading another book. This is one of the few excellent books I have read. I admit that my first book review was a bit arrogant (not) and it was really well written! I can feel the bond between the characters, and the world view I think is clearly written: the author of Haji definitely read the plot of Omphalos carefully. Everyone is happy with the ending, but it feels like a closed loop for no reason, but I like it very much! Looking forward to the author's next book!
It's rare to see Yanqing as the protagonist, usually it's Cloud 5 or an original protagonist. [Congratulations] I like this book very much. The subject matter is relatively novel. I think the plot is also very good. It is a reassuring plot that belongs to daily life but has a bit of glass blade. Keep up the good work, author! I really like this book [love] Some people say that this skill fusion would be awkward, but I don't think so, because the reasons given are very reasonable, and the life experience is tragic enough to make it convincing. I'm usually the kind of person who would be tempted to quit and delete books when I see an embarrassing scene, but this book doesn't have that thought at all.
This book is directly on the White Moonlight level After watching it, I will keep coming back to watch it. I love it so much. All the pitfalls written by this author have been filled in And I declare that the author is the best at writing endings Both the text and the movie are very well written. There is no conflict with either one. The author, your relationship is the best I have ever written. I give you a thumbs up. When I re-read it later, I found that the author had hidden a lot of little ingenuity, which was very interesting. You can explore more. Many things that were not right have also been improved. I will always love this book😭💝💐 The author doesn't care whether the protagonist is The stories of (real world) (main world) (fi line) (extra) have all filled in the gaps. The finale is also written to make readers feel relieved Both the early and mid-stage knives are delicious. The extra ones are more delicious😋 Even the explosion of vests didn't feel so sudden. Anyway, the few books I read had a lot of explosions. I started to explode for no reason, and all of them exploded in one burst. It was very embarrassing. I felt very comfortable with this one. The vest is highlighted bit by bit The emotional lines are also very well written. From beginning to end, the protagonist never forgets his original intention Hmm... Co-branded coffee😋🙌🏻 Author, your knife really made me cry to death and I think it is the best one written. I will watch it again and again😭 (This child has developed feelings after eating a knife💔) It's just that sometimes my body suddenly feels cold, and I feel like I want to swing on the rafters😄 Don't miss Jing Maomao in every episode😋😋😋 Both cubs are lovely babies, good babies, good babies Woohoo, author Wa just saw your book I just recommended Yanqing. He is really very good. After getting to know him, I think he is even better. The baby Yanqing you wrote is really delicate. The growth aspect is simply amazing. I am so excited. The voice actor is actually Meow-chan! ! ! Or the voice actor of Wendy whom I recommend? Falling in love with them both is as easy as breathing😭💝 This is fate. Fate made me read this book and get to know this character😭I thought that I would be fine after leaving Genshin Impact, but I didn't expect that I would still be unable to escape after leaving the village😭Please hang on to me😭💝 Highly recommend this book! ! ! 😭😭😭💝💝💝💝💝💝 Please rate it, and be sure to do follow-up reviews. I think the author should get more points😭💝I think this book is a very good one in the fandom💝
I like this setting very much. Author, you must insist on updating it. I finally found a better-looking one, but in the end I only updated it a little. [Cry][cry][cry]
7.2, Are you kidding, full marks! ! I don't really like cosplay because I'm OOC, but this book is great, the plot is great, it has a knife that makes me happy, it has a very happy plot, and the writing is also great
I haven't read much, so far I think it's pretty good, but the aspect of using other people's skills still feels a bit weird. The writing is not bad, but… I still can't accept the point of using other people's skills, and I find it inexplicable (?) The writing is good, Yanchu's victory There are also some selfish reasons. After all, Chef Yanqing will always give higher marks. As long as it is Yanqing, it will be fine. Stop for a moment and return to the normal topic. The writing is very good. A lot of what is said in it seems to share the same brain with me. It is exactly the same as my point of view. (Note: The following is my inexplicable praise (?) Of Yan Qing and has nothing to do with this book, it is purely personal feelings) A high-spirited young man like Yanqing should be dazzling, talented and hard-working. He is really good and good. He is really a polite and hard-working young man. Salty porridge and custard buns, you must grow up happily.
It looks great, could there be a little more fighting scenes? If you like fighting, you might want to write a story about Yun Wu's extra chapter. If you want to lament, based on the current protagonist's experience, it feels unreasonable even if you don't become a star god. I feel like the author can try to write a plot where the star god k The author must write more and never stop. Also, he should write less plots in which the protagonist cries. I don't know why, but I kind of want to watch the kind of plot where the Star God kills himself, but there are so few of this type. I don't know how to write novels. If I am good at writing, I can write it [face covering]
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It's really good to watch, I like it. The characters in it are all very good, and everyone is very realistic. Moreover, it can be seen that the author really cares about it, and every character is well shaped. Also, can the author suddenly add 30 chapters and scare me to death, making me stay up all night to chase it and then not be able to get up in the morning? It's very interesting, I like it very much. The author's writing is very delicate, and his planning for the characters is very gentle. After reading it, the reluctance to let go has become lighter. The author not only gives the characters a future without regrets, but also allows us readers to stop relying on it, because we know that everyone has a bright future. [Like] Thumbs up for a bright future!
Actually, I'm not Yanqingchu and I haven't played Bengtie, but my sister is recommended by Yanqing, so when I saw a fan of Xiaoyanzi come in and take a look, I thought I could recommend it to my sister. But when I saw the book reviews, they all said it was embarrassing and not good-looking. After entering the main text, I thought it was okay? In the end, I insisted on finishing it. I thought it was very good and comfortable to read. Maybe the early part was a little bit boring, but the first and middle parts were a bit boring. I still liked the second part better (it has nothing to do with my knife-loving nature. This book has a very sweet ending). It's a pity that my sister said that she doesn't read the fanfic (I recommended it to her but she doesn't read the fanfic [face covering]). The ending was a bit unfinished, but it was just right. I still liked it very much. Who else told me that it has CP? I couldn't see the CP with either eye! It doesn't look like there is any CP at all! (At most, at most I can eat some narcissus, right? I don't see any other CP that I can knock off) More than 100 chapters are not too long. After reading it, I almost wanted to push it. Little Swallow is really cute. Don't read it. I only reviewed it six hours after reading. I finished it with another account. Then I read other Yanqing fandoms and stopped reading after a while. I suddenly felt that compared with this one, that one was full of surprises. In short, this book is definitely worth reading. It can be read by both knife lovers and candy lovers ♡=•ㅅ<=)
If you like the stories of Jing Yuan, Yan Qing, or Immortal Boat Luofuli, then I would highly recommend you to read this second creation. There are moments of laughter, tears, and heartache for the characters. I am Jing Yuanchu, and I like the description and characterization. The only flaw is that although the power acquisition route is given logic, it still feels relatively random. However, considering that we are here in the Bengtie Universe, where the world's top guys gather, and the story is about a channel where the if line is difficult to redeem, it is not the protagonist group of the train, and it is really difficult to make dumplings without a powerful golden finger, so I feel relieved. Overall, it does not affect reading and deserves five points from me.
The writing is pretty good. The writing style of the female channel focuses more on solving the psychological problems of the protagonist and the comfort of the surrounding people to the protagonist, which is very suitable for a world view like Beng Tie that does not have a lot of main plot development but a lot of personal plot if. However, the relationship between cosplay and if lines is still not shown too much. I feel that after solving the problem, the protagonist will be more comfortable running outside. Looking forward to the following plot, mainly because I really want to see the tragic story of the if line recover and become a brave flying bird under the comfort of everyone in the current main line. Of course, whether you can go back or not depends on how the author writes it.
If you write about Yanqing, Yanchu will give it five stars! Hey, it's a more serious review. It's very well written. The author should continue to update it! It's not easy to find a high-quality Yanqing fanfic. The author must continue to update it!
He has a good imagination, a good grasp of the rhythm, and handles the cook very well. It's not too sad to feel distressed. Overall, it is very interesting to read. Although the title of the book is not pleasant, it is also very straightforward, which is the characteristic of traditional online books. The treatment of Yanqing's name is also very good. Jun and Qing are both nicknames. Qing is inherited from the habit of a general, while Jun is like a transformation after growing up. The name Yanjun also has the shadow of a general, very much like the name he would give himself. This book basically fits my personality. It's just that I'm a little unskilled in transitions, and sometimes it's confusing to watch, and I can't react quickly.
It's very interesting. The writing style of the author sister is very good. It combines the if-line plot of Mi Huyou. When I first started watching it, I was a little embarrassed, but it's much better now. But what I want to say is, the author sister nb! When I first opened this book yesterday, the number of readers was 173,000 words. Now it has been read by more than 200,000 people. The rating was still 7.2 Yesterday, and now it is 8.0 [Shy] Ah, I praise the author sister, it's so beautiful [Sending my heart] I've finished reading it again, come on! [Shy]
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It's really cool. The protagonist's thinking feels very confusing, but the writing is super good, and he vividly interprets the entangled belief of wanting to go home.
It's quite good, but the rating is too low. Several 9-rated books on the same subject are not as good as this one. Good thing it's not poisonous! It feels so good not to have to clear mines! I like to read this kind of subject matter, but other books have to be read while being shocked, but I didn't get shocked at the end of this one🥺👍
COS Yanqing accidentally traveled through time and landed directly in the battle-damaged game, giving him a full sense of immersion. The character design is highly restored, the young swordsman's arrogance and vulnerability coexist, the plot rhythm is brisk and not procrastinating, and the interactions with the train crew and the fairy boat are naturally interesting. Chef Yanqing looks good, but occasionally the knife suddenly pops out.