Oh No, My Adoptive Sister Won't Leave Me Alone

Until now, it feels like I'm reading a diary. The heroine's description is too divine? Or is it too AI? I'm the male lead and I'm suffocating. The pressure is too great. Non-critical daily routines are just brushed off again. It's so depressing.

The writing is very good, and I feel that the author is a top student in psychology. This novel describes the protagonists' experiences from childhood to adulthood, analyzes their psychological processes, and can even give me some inspiration in life. When dealing with some sharp issues, you don't have to be confrontational. Sometimes you can learn to "let go" like Zhao Heng, which is something that other light novels don't have. Come on, author, I will keep following up for updates!

I have something to say. Although the content is dull and boring, it is all about business, psychology, computing, and various studies. It seems depressing to me, but the author is still very powerful. I am talking about literature. Haha, I suggest that the author can write more sweet articles that are more daily. I will take care of them first and then read them well. Come on, it is very interesting.

The previous part is okay, but the part after the sister transfers to school becomes very lengthy, and the emotional transition between the two people is also inexplicable. It gives me the feeling of watching a soap opera. The middle part is too difficult, like a piece of bread without milk, which makes the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist look very disconnected compared with the previous part. The two people basically quarrel - cold war - heavy rain and thunder - reconciliation - cold war. The plot is simply changing the soup without changing the medicine. But one thing to say is that the writing and description are quite good, the sadistic part is also well written, the business thinking model is also very clear, especially the psychological description is very good, it is not a simple white text that just promotes the plot, and the details of the character creation and interaction are also very good, so I give it an overall 3. Let's read the plot later. I don't know what happened. I have read a few repeated chapters and I can't stand it anymore.

The author is strong, and the lightning protection structure and plot setting are very good. There are no flaws or bugs. If you have to find some problems, it is too bland. There are no ups and downs, no suspense, and no climax. It is okay to read it in one sitting, but it cannot attract readers who follow up. It is too boring and tiring to follow.

The content does not match the title. I feel that the male protagonist has been pestering his sister. Although the female protagonist is considering the consequences of falling in love on the family, it is too written and it is a pity to abandon it.

I watched the college entrance examination carefully at the beginning, and jumped to read it later. The author's psychological portrayal of the characters is very good. It is the kind of portrayal that does not directly express the thoughts but can be seen just from the lines. It's so awesome. I doubt I've studied psychology. I have a little hobby like this with special plots. It seems depressing and exciting to be honest. I hope it won't be blocked, it's an awesome idea.

I am posting this paragraph today purely to chat with you, specifically about the future direction of this book and the question of male characters and female characters. Maybe some friends still think of male characters as cool novels, such as the kind where the male protagonist is strong and invincible and the female protagonist is delicate and cute. I personally don't like the kind where the female protagonist will be like a vase and a tool to highlight the male protagonist's charm. I definitely wrote this book for a male channel. No matter from the narrative perspective or the readership, it is a male channel. Even if it is not good, it is a neutral text. It definitely cannot be a female channel. I admit that the previous description does have the flavor of a female video, but how should I put it, friends who have sisters at home and are relatively close to each other must know that it is normal for Gu Chen to rely on Zhao Heng when he was a child, and it is not excessive. Instead, I stopped writing. Also, can a six-year-old and an eight-year-old really tell whether it is a male or female video? Is it a male video to write about six-year-old Gu Chen pinching eight-year-old Gu Zhaoheng's neck and saying, "Women, you are playing with fire?" Is this right? Isn't this right? If I dare to write it, brothers probably won't dare to read it 🤦

It's too boring, there is no plot that readers want to read, the heroine's character is too cold, the author talks too much nonsense, and I am tired of aesthetics. I think it would be better to have less about academics and business and more emotional drama. Overall not bad

The more I read, the more I feel that the author and I have the same major, but I feel that professional courses should not be taken in the junior or sophomore years. You should not learn data structures and the like before algorithm analysis and design. I can only say that the male protagonist is too strong.