After a year of contract marriage, my abstinent childhood sweetheart husband Shen Shiyu and I treated each other as if we were guests. We slept together in the bedroom, but it was just one bed and two quilts.
I didn't know that he could hear my heart.
Looking at him who had just come out of the bath, I had no expression on my face, but I was screaming in my heart: [Hi ha ha ha, these abs, these mermaid lines, if you don't do something, it will be a waste! Why haven't you taken off the bath towel? I'm so anxious!
The next second, his foot slipped and the towel "accidentally" fell apart.
I stepped forward to help him, without squinting my eyes, but I was shouting in my heart: "I see it, I see it!" Throw away his bathrobe tomorrow too!
His ears were red and he said in a hoarse voice: "I'm fine."
Later, I thought to myself: [I really want to tie him to the bed and make sauce...]
That night, Shen Jin also finished taking a shower and took the initiative to hand me a tie with a deep look in his eyes: "I heard that you want to tie me up?"
Me:? ? ? Help! There's something wrong with my husband!
Reader comments
The concept of the story is quite interesting, and the description technique in the opening chapter is very good. However, the painting style suddenly changed after the heroine suddenly started writing. There are too many adjectives with tomato characteristics in the whole article, and it is the familiar boss plot. The progress is a bit slow. After reading more than 20 chapters, I didn't find it sweet, only funny and a little embarrassing [laughing and crying]
The literary talent is not bad, but I saw that the text descriptions of several scenes are exactly the same, which makes it look rather monotonous. There are some turning points that I can't understand and the changes are too fast. However, there are also many outstanding things in it. I hope the author's literary talent will get better and better in the future.
The content is good, but there are too many narrations, and the interaction between the two people is not as much as the narrations.
The concept of the story is quite interesting, and the description technique in the opening chapter is very good. However, the painting style suddenly changed after the heroine suddenly started writing. There are too many adjectives with tomato characteristics in the whole article, and it is the familiar boss plot. The progress is a bit slow. After reading more than 20 chapters, I didn't find it sweet, only funny and a little embarrassing [laughing and crying]
The literary talent is not bad, but I saw that the text descriptions of several scenes are exactly the same, which makes it look rather monotonous. There are some turning points that I can't understand and the changes are too fast. However, there are also many outstanding things in it. I hope the author's literary talent will get better and better in the future.
The content is good, but there are too many narrations, and the interaction between the two people is not as much as the narrations.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, highly recommended
Beautiful, fluently written, and rich in imagination. Recommend
It's so beautiful. I like it very much. The heroine is so interesting [laughs]