The Five Elements of the Immortal Way

The author writes very well about the military. Regardless of whether it is wrong or not, it can at least stir people's hearts, but it is not as pretentious, contrived, or brain-dead as some novels. Although there are some flaws in other aspects, it does not affect the overall situation. I wish the author a smooth completion of this novel.

The plot is reasonable and realistic, and there are basically no cheats. I still like it very much. The protagonist is a very mortal person who is also a decent person but does not have too many emotional entanglements. Some old bookworms may think that the plot is average, but I personally think it is okay. I personally like the kind without any cheats. If you have a spiritual field ring or something, can you still be called a mortal? Even if you write about a mortal, you have to feel helpless like a mortal and write about the process of becoming an immortal and the changes in mentality.

10 Points is beyond mention, 6 points is definitely low. The logic is generally smooth, and the character of the protagonist is also tenable. It's a pity that most of the supporting characters are a bit too tooly Not very engaging, just a good product to pass the time [Like] Not bad

It's okay. You can read it in Shuhuang. I feel that six points is a bit low. The time line is too detailed. On the contrary, the time in the later stages will not be enough. The nine levels of Qi training have a total life span of 120 years. The foundation is built only when it is almost over. You can also say that the foundation building period is more difficult than the Qi refining period. The foundation building lasts for 240 years and takes 100 years. After twenty years and then you build more than ten levels of foundation, you think that this time is not enough. Even if there are adventures, the early stage is so difficult, your later story will be even harder, it feels like singing.

Exquisitely conceived, not holy, not noisy

A very good concept. Apart from the slightly tight opening chapter, after entering the world of cultivating immortals, the plot progresses steadily and richly. The foreshadowing can be regarded as intertwined, entangled with each other as the plot progresses. The most surprising thing is that both the names of the protagonist and the supporting characters in the work are very poetic, and it is very comfortable to read😌, give the author a thumbs up👍

It's well written, a very solid story about a mortal Xiangxianxia, ​​without any golden fingers or following the routine of a cool novel. The protagonist started from a humble beginning with mottled Five Elements Spiritual Roots, but with the lowest qualifications, he struggled step by step in the quagmire of the secular world and the treacherous path to immortality based on his faith. The writing style is capable and high-quality, and the foreshadowing of human calculations and the mist of heaven and earth is very tense. The pace is slow but full of stamina. It is full of the tenacity of ordinary people to break through. The more you read, the more you can appreciate the true weight of the road to immortality. It is very suitable for fans of traditional fairy tales [Like]

This is one of the few novels that I can read on Tomato. I didn't want to leave a review and give it a five-star rating, but after the protagonist left the small world and became a pill, he became more and more verbose and talked more and more. Now I can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can see that this review can be restrained. After all, it is not easy to find a novel that suits your appetite on Tomato. I really don't want to give up!

At present, I have read Chapter 50, and the entire story structure is okay. However, the protagonist personally feels that the early cultivation process is too slow. The life span has exceeded 30% of that of a monk in the Qi Refining Stage, and he is still only at the fifth level of Qi Refining. Later breakthroughs will become urgent, and foundation building too late will also affect the protagonist's final achievements.

The writing is very good. For ordinary people, it is normal without cheats. This book describes all the difficulties for ordinary people to cultivate immortality. Just like us ordinary people, which life is easier? Very good, come on, author!