My Mobile Game Takes Me to the Cold Palace, Where I Spoil the Frail Prince

It's really good-looking. This is not a one-sided effort by the heroine to raise the cubs, but a two-way gain. The heroine gradually shines from an ordinary person. The most special thing about this book compared to other books of this type is that both parties gradually grow and become stronger in each other's company, growing in every sense, it's beautiful! I have already reviewed it and am waiting for the author to make a big profit I haven't watched it for a few days. The ancient ones are pretty good, but the later modern ones are too long and very silly. The heroine's family members are also found, and then the heroine has to start helping and saving people. She is tired. When the heroine is in her infancy, her family members are not found, but as soon as the heroine gets better, her family members come. Then I guess the plot is to help the brothers and sisters with psychological problems in the family get out of the shadows, help the family company come back to life, and the heroine's real name is a tool man.

See Chapter 59… The basic framework is: the game on the protagonist's mobile phone is the real world. The protagonist helps the characters in the game world through "Xiaoxiaole" or "Krypton Gold" and completes the tasks in the game, which can add points to the protagonist himself. Currently, there are points for cooking and medical skills... There are two sets of plots, the protagonist's world, the protagonist's own plot, and the game world and the plot of the game characters... If there are two sets of plots, the plot will advance a little slower. If you are impatient, you can wait until you gain weight... [Sneaky laugh]

I'd give it four stars. The subject matter and the benefits of the ancient story are pretty good, and the little male protagonist is very smart and cute, and he's a likable character. The heroine is indeed growing. However, the handling of the plot in the modern chapter is still relatively immature and dry. The traditional slap-in-the-face plot and too fast pace. There is a conflict first and then the person who supports the heroine and slaps her in the face a few lines later. Including the over-exaggerated reactions of passers-by, the plot will appear one-sided. There are those who are making noises and recording videos, and there are those who are watching indifferently, and there are those who are watching indifferently, and there are those who are joining in the fun. Most of the students are quite qualified and will say thank you. I feel that the author can do some research on the human reaction of society. I mean check some information, yes. The frequency with which the heroine encounters the villain feels like she is the enemy of the whole world, and the chaos in three chapters is too fast. (Die Jia: I am just expressing my personal views, without any malice, and not trying to make excuses. I am also good at describing streams of consciousness in difficult sentences. The author is also welcome to reply and communicate)

It's nice to watch. The heroine raises her Zai Zai to make Zai Zai's life better. At the same time, she can also acquire skills to make her own life better. It's a two-way achievement. But the chapters are not fat enough to read. I'll wait for the update~ I'm so speechless. It was well written earlier. I thought the heroine could live a better and better life with the help of her adoptive parents. The debt she had been cheated by because of her deceased adoptive parents had been paid off. But as soon as she recognized her relatives, she was dragged into a new pit of fire. There was a group of relatives with weird personalities and the yin and yang of the heroine. She thought she was acknowledging her relatives to a wealthy family to enjoy a better life and the love of her relatives. In the end, she was saving a new family member who was on the verge of bankruptcy in poverty alleviation. She didn't understand the meaning of this recognition at all, and the more she looked at it, the more angry she became. The latest chapter looks good again. Zaizai is opening the Liuhe box bit by bit. It's so exciting to watch.

Beautiful! Beautiful! It's a very novel and interesting golden finger. It's the first time I've seen [Blowing Kisses]. And it's different from other mobile phone cub-raising stories. It's not the heroine who pays unilaterally, but the heroine can also get golden fingers by helping the male protagonist and improve her own life. 👍 The male and female protagonists are mutually beneficial. Like this 👍 There is nothing wrong with the outline, but later on, the author failed to handle many small details, causing inconsistencies and lack of logic.

It's very interesting. I strongly recommend it to anyone who likes this kind of mobile phone-based drama. There will probably be emotional lines between the male and female protagonists later on. The text is very delicate, humorous and interesting. The plot is interesting, not aggrieved at all, the logic is clear, and it's a good article! I would like to give the author my personal reading experience and suggestions. This book is really good. Among all the articles I have read in Tomato, I think Yun Yang wrote the best one. The ancient world is very real, and the writing style is better than most articles that only write about ancient themes. It has that ancient charm, which is very powerful! 👍 I feel that a large number of readers came here for Yun Yang Zaizai. I hope the author can put more words in the ancient world instead of the modern world. Now I feel that the following chapters have too much modern space. The slap-in-the-face section feels a bit boring. If possible, I hope the author can intersperse some intrigues. This will definitely be interesting and more attractive to readers. After all, the male protagonist is competing for the throne and needs to be written. You can really write a lot, such as developing power, cultivating confidants, etc., You can create a card drawing function for talents, etc., Which are divided into different pools, such as a counselor pool, a secret guard pool, etc. The drawn ones will automatically have a reasonable identity in the world, and come to the male protagonist. The drawn characters may not be full of loyalty, so that there will be more characters, and the interaction between them will be more interesting. The above are just suggestions. If the author likes it, you can adopt it. However, if you are inserting power into the plot, you must pay attention to the supporting role of the female protagonist. Otherwise, if the female protagonist has too few roles, the story will become more exciting for the male protagonist. It will really test the author's writing skills, so a good balance must be achieved. Another very important point!!! I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way. I feel like the two worlds keep switching back and forth, and the sense of immersion in the novel is completely gone. This world suddenly switches, which makes me feel very confused. It really ruins the reading experience. I want to skip chapters until the world I like is switched back. So I personally hope that the author can focus on one world (if it is the ancient world, I will be very happy ❤️) and downplay the other world. Also, the descriptions of some villains in the modern world are not as three-dimensional and vivid as those in the ancient world. After reading the ancient world and switching to the modern world, you will feel particularly bored. I hope this article will get better and better, and I will try my best to recommend it! [Lick screen]

The author is so kind. This is the first time I have published a review and sent a gift to this book. Although the student party has little money, I hope it can give you some encouragement. The writing is smooth and the story structure is novel. The two lines are particularly beautiful when taken alone, and when put together they look great! I suspected that someone was maliciously lowering the score. Fortunately, I came in and read it. I was attracted by the first chapter! I will continue to support you! Hope you stick with it. I still want to know whether the male and female protagonists of this book will be together, or is it about raising a cub? I'm more hopeful that it will be the former, but if so, I'm curious about how the timeline will be handled, and I hope you can reply. Final update! I simply can't get enough of it. @ Circle Overbearing Code Farmer

I have seen the latest chapter. My personal evaluation is that this work is pretty good as a modern fantasy novel. The opening chapter talks about the heroine Qiao Cheng's bad luck, so she will encounter bad things and is more likely to encounter extreme bad people than ordinary people. It can be said that she is a real evil star. Moreover, the heroine Qiao Cheng does not just endure the problem without solving it. It is better than the other stories that pretend to be strong and then abuse women. It is a story without any pain points. Next is my opinion on other people's comments in the book review. There are a few complaints about modern writing that you should not write so long. It is better to look at the classification of the works. If you don't focus on writing modern writing, it would be off topic. I believe there are also people who like to watch the process of the heroine Qiao Cheng getting better and better from the worst life. Then there is talk about whether the heroine Qiao Cheng encounters too many top-notch bad guys. Please don't forget some of the characters who helped the heroine Qiao Cheng. It's just that the extreme bad guys left a deep impression, so some people think that there are too many bad guys and it's too one-sided. Don't forget that the heroine also has bad luck, which makes it easier for us ordinary people to encounter top-notch valuables. This article can only be said to be a two-way redemption story. The conscience of the heroine Qiao Cheng is the main reason for the development of the plot. If the heroine had no conscience, it would be impossible to save the Ninth Prince, and it would be impossible to have a series of subsequent developments. Therefore, this work is not as bad as we imagined. I believe that some readers have felt the heroine's strength in not giving up survival under many difficulties in this work. No matter how many tears she may cry, she still has to stand up and face the difficulties.

Very good. I hope the heroine can meet more people who are good to her in the future, such as true friends. The child had a hard time before. It is still very good, there is no humiliating plot, the plot is not bad, the writing is occasionally a little neglectful, the protagonist can always come up with unexpected solutions, I prefer to watch the protagonist's life in modern times than in ancient times, I am really looking forward to it, both the boy and the protagonist in the game are slowly getting better.

I think this book is very interesting, but the rating is a little low. The only flaw is that the modern chapter has too many cheats and looks boring. The story about raising cubs is more lively and interesting, and the picture is very strong. When it comes to the modern chapter, I just watch the heroine cheating on the left and cheating on the right. I basically skipped this part.