Beat Xiangzi at the Beginning, the Soft and Waxy White Xiangzi Is Fragrant

I feel like the protagonist is a combination of Bai Xiang when he was a mother + Ai Yin who didn't study abroad. Plus the system's divine power, he's really a supermodel! ! ! The daily writing is really good, it is very comfortable to read, and the various details are also very interesting. It can be seen that the writing style is very good.

This is the comment left after seeing Chapter 45 When I read this novel, I was immersed in the world built by the author. The weak main line and strong daily structure made it very comfortable to read, and I could feel that the characters really lived in it. The daily writing is interesting enough, and some scenes made me feel the youthfulness between girls. For example, when eating rice balls with Xiangzi, and with Aiyin and Deng, don't step on the cracks in the floor tiles. The protagonist is not a musical genius right off the bat. Even if he gets buffs through the system, he still has to practice on his own. The protagonist is not currently in any band, but serves as the most solid backer for Shoko, Light, and Ai Yin. She is her mother! The main activity area of ​​the protagonist in this book is not the band (or the main line of mygo), but the daily life outside the band, which is very novel. All in all, it's great to read. Come on, author, you must write novels for the rest of your life. Other readers will do everything!

Five-star praise! The feeling of peace and tranquility in the ordinary times is written. It is a rare mygo article without stomachache and distortion (although I have not read the original work) However, when I read the latest chapter 43 so far, there is no detailed description of the past life. The character described by the protagonist is also very maternal and feminine, so I can't understand why it should be written as a transformation story, which obviously does not have any masculine characteristics. The description is closer to pure Bai, but the transformation label with the transformation label will dissuade some viewers [I understand]

There is no doubt that it is a good book. The whole book is on the sweet side and has no gravity. Teacher Da🐘 was captured at the beginning, so he was a bit soft, and Soyo was not very dedicated to restoring the C group. However, because the protagonist was too gentle, gravity and other things completely disappeared, leaving Ai Yin with no room to play, so the above characters are a little bit OOC (if the official bad one is not cut). Of course, Mutou is still the same man-machine, the lamp is still the same little animal, and Lixi is still the same pressure. This book prefers the daily life between the girls in the band. The writing is very delicate, but most of the early chapters are about daily life. There are few band elements, and the follow-up to the main plot is relatively slow, but there are many original plots. Book friends who like to read daily posts can feel free to read it. Personally, I feel that there are not many MyGO stories with female protagonists in Tomato that can surpass this book. (But I still want to see gravity unfold. And will the author lead a group to play?)

The personality of the protagonist will actually retain readers to a large extent. The plain and interesting daily descriptions in Chapter 42 are always very comfortable to read, and I can't help but read on. The appearance and situation description of the protagonist also make the character a lot more distinct.

Not reading for a day is like a girl in a lamp house who has no vision. The mountains are huge and the sea is deep, just like the band members! It's not that the opportunity is lacking, but that it has been growing in love for a long time. By March 7th of next year, it will be a new chapter of new fashion. Don't be delayed by anything, don't change by laughter, you are you, you update thousands of words every day. Hahahaha, it's the first time I've written so much, so I'll write more. Believe in the power of the succubus. Sooner or later, everyone will be bean curd, and at that time, everyone will become more and more bold, and even want to "Lin Qijiang, Lin Qijiang, Lin Qijiang..." For the dream in my heart, I often update it repeatedly every day, and chat back and forth every day. The significance of this is self-evident. Perhaps she will be surrounded by everyone at the last moment, as she takes actions for points, and engages in a wonderful process of learning about biology together? Hee hee, it's about to get interesting. What's going on in daily life? You will know, you will understand.

My evaluation is very good, the characters are basically not broken (it is a bit like a parallel world), the plot is also very good, I would like to give a review that it is very stable, the daily writing is very good, and the interaction with Xiangzi is also very good (CP is Xiangzi?)

A+!…A+! This natural meaning cannot be surpassed even by the master of the ring finger. This is the most profound art in the world, a wriggling life, a reflection in a well, a suffocating and warm art. This reminds me of a painting I saw when I was in Company L... The painting... Is wonderful! ! !

The writing is good, and I like the main character very much. Personally, I don't care much about becoming a hundred. As long as it's well written, beautiful girl posts are a beautiful thing~ I am biased against Xiangzi. In the early stage, the protagonist helped Xiangzi, then helped each other, lived together, and finally became good friends and besties. There is no problem in these, they are all very beautiful stories. However, after the plot on the small island, they gradually came together and may become a couple in the future... When I realized this, I felt alienated and couldn't accept it. All I could think about was, "Anyone can be such a good protagonist, but why Xiangzi?" I couldn't put aside my prejudice against Xiangzi... Finally, thank you to the author for bringing such a beautiful story. There are dreams in the world, each is wonderful, goodbye...

This is a real girl band. Warm and everyday life is the main theme. Everyone has conflicts, but they will be resolved in a few chapters. This is the girl band I want to watch.

So far it's quite interesting, and the main character is identified as a caring, gentle and good mother. Although the plot is a bit bland, it is not a shortcoming for this genre. What I'm mainly concerned about right now is whether there will be characters from Bang Lao Tuan appearing?

In Chapter 318, after the character's hot and suppressed emotions exploded, he deviated from the future envisioned by the author. The birth of a character bears the mark of the writer himself and flows with his blood, but he is a truly independent and brand-new individual with his own will to life and follows the trajectory of his own destiny to the end. What the author can ultimately decide are events rather than feelings and will. The author can control the occurrence of events, the location of the character, the time of encounter and what will be done, but he can no longer directly control a person created by himself unless he kills him with his own hands (ooc) Anyway, author, I like you😋

I haven't read it yet, so I turned it over accidentally. Watching the warm daily life warms my heart. Hungry, is this the brilliance of Lin Qi, the warm little sun? It can actually penetrate the dimensional wall and shine here! All in all, it is a book worth reading. The author's writing style fits the characters of his characters very closely, making the content in the book real and vivid. Of course, as a bad reader who likes to read books, there is a high probability that I will not be able to read the latest chapter immediately and click on the update that day. Therefore, I will give a good review first and cheer for the author. I must not read it and look back, but it will dry up and crack the soil and wither. Come on! ₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪

It looks good. Xiangzi has also returned to soft, waxy and white Xiangzi. Come on, author.

Oh, I'll go. Buhao. Why don't my hands work as they should? No 😭. Willow willow. The hand opens it by itself. I really don't want to watch it😭. Oh, I'll go. Knock well. 😋So delicious. I'm convinced. What I want to read is the main text😭. 😋The main text is not as good as this one. I went too sweet. I can't control the corners of my mouth😋. Please enter text.

It's really good to read. Although I've only read Chapter 97, it took a long time to read, and I can see that the characterization and plot are really good. It's a standard sweet story, and it's good to read 😋😋😋😋

I think it's quite interesting. It's much better than other girl band fanfics where the male protagonist has a harem.

The plot of the story is smooth, and the protagonist does not drastically change the plot (although there is no Heixiang, but this is better). It does not seem out of place for the protagonist to intervene in the gravity field of the original plot, but it seems reasonable to help the girls untie their knots. In short, it is very beautiful [send heart] [send heart]

The writing is very good, the heroine's character is gentle and reliable, and the Mygo character does not have a personality breakdown, and the pressure is gradually relieved. This is the kind of band girl I want to see!

Four points is okay. The writing was a bit messy at the beginning, but after more than ten chapters, the writing slowly stabilized. About halfway through, you can find that the writing is much better than the beginning. I feel like the author may have written before, but it's been a long time since he's written before so he was a little sloppy at the beginning. Talking about the content, the main character seems pretty good during the Mygo period. I wonder what the plot will be like when the author says he wants to create an original hen card. I hope it won't crash or stop updating. Come on I have been reading other band articles in the past few days, and I found out what they are all about, or is there a boy in the band article? No, I don't know if there is no boy in the band article, it is usually Qingyuri? There is also a work that is completely ruined at the beginning and I have no desire to read it. There is also a work that basically turns animals into humans. It is really artificial and horrifying [smile]

Nice! My favorite band fanfic at the moment. I really like the heroine's quiet and gentle mother figure. Hehe, it's a sweet little novel that I highly recommend. The author also filled in some of the regrets of the original work. I think the atmosphere and psychological description are still in place. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work👍👍👍 I finished reading it in one go, ah, it's so beautiful www. I like this kind of warm little daily life the most😭😭The author, our users, you are so beautiful

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it [laughs]. The plot is smooth, natural and not chaotic, with a strong sense of daily warmth and sincere feelings. The main character focuses on healing and companionship. Currently, we have a softer and softer Xiaoxiang. I hope there will be more posts in the future. Cheers, author.

It's really great! It's one of the best articles I've seen about mygo and other bands! The protagonist is great, the plot changes are smooth, there are many clever ideas, and the whole story is very coherent and not fragmented. Moreover, the author is also very cute and wants to trick her into bringing her home to have a litter. Touch Yi Xue's thigh! Pry open the door of Yi Xue's house! Steal Yi Xue's bedside table!

Personally, I think this book is pretty good among girl band fanfics. The personalities of each character are quite restored, and the protagonist's mother-like gentleness is also very lovable. But what I want to ask more is who will be with the protagonist at the end of this book? In the current chapter, these are the only ones I feel when I realize that I have different feelings for the protagonist. 1. Xiangzi (🐘No need to say much about the progress of the teacher, living with the protagonist, there are many opportunities, the protagonist even made it clear that he was attracted by the charm once) 2. Ai Yin (The opportunity was when she ran into the protagonist while escaping on a rainy day. She tried her best to lose to the protagonist's succubus power, and was captured by gravity) 3. 'Hatsuka' (actually Miku, this is even more important. When she was a child, she met the protagonist of a time-traveling succubus sister. After spending a few days with her, she tried her best but was captured by gravity. She relied on her strong willpower to resist the system's erasure of time and space memory) 4. Mu (Teacher Da Mo: As a half-year-old Xiangzi, is it normal for me to want to play with Xiangzi's sweetheart?) There should have been more lights, but Minato Penguin was busy picking up stones and ran off the track by himself. The remaining ones feel more like ordinary friendships because the author describes them so little. To be honest, because the daily descriptions were very sweet, in the end, no matter who I was with, I felt like something was missing. Especially when the relationship between the protagonist and Xiangzi changed after returning from time travel, I had a strange feeling, which is not to say that it was bad. Sure enough, for this kind of well-described character relationship, I still prefer the feeling that the protagonists are all involved. [Understood]

It's time to catch up with the army and write a book review. Overall, it gives people the feeling of a light novel. The author describes the details very well. The overall rhythm is not fast, just like daily life, slow but warm. Before reading this book, I had never watched any band shows. If you have never watched anything and want to get into the trap but are afraid that you won't understand it, my advice is to go in with ease ([shy][smile]). The author's setting for the protagonist is a time-traveler who doesn't know any plot (I'll mention it here, although at the beginning It is said that the protagonist used to be a boy, but just think of it as a Nian. The protagonist behaves like a gentle succubus later on. Although there are many unfamiliar names if you really look back, in the paragraphs and comments of the nearly two hundred chapters in the past, readers have written short essays to explain the relationship between the characters. If you read more, you will understand hh From this book, I can get a glimpse of the plot of Mygo and Hen Kagami, but that's all. The author's purpose is "What do girls do if they don't play girls in a band? How about playing in a band?", So the author cut out some (maybe most? After all, I haven't read the original work) of the Kaminto drama. Love, the protagonist is responsible for playing the role of the gentle sun and the succubus of the morning star in the middle, so there is less of the palace battle-like pull of the original work, and a lot of warm daily life. The author also gave some characters who were not having a good life in the original work a new warm plot (perhaps it can make up for the original work's difficulty in settling the party?) Finally, there are some interesting features of this book, such as Mortis having the highest appearance rate but almost all of it is in the title (laughs). At the end of each chapter, many readers say "I like you" to the author, and the author will probably say the same thing back. This book is not limited to mygo and hen card people, but also has friendly guest appearances from lonely rock people and your name. I wish all readers a happy reading Finally, I like you [blowing kiss] Oh, by the way, the sense of presence is so low that I completely forgot about it. The function of the system is to allow the protagonist to obtain several abilities and several items. These are all to promote the development of the plot. Then there is nothing more to do with the system. I haven't seen the system in almost a hundred chapters [laughs] [face covering]

As a female in a girl band, the protagonist is really delicious, and it fits the feeling of krkrdkdk, the world view of Bangbang. In terms of logic, except that everyone encounters supernatural things, which makes them somewhat nervous, there are no flaws. After all, our worldview of Bangbang is a low-level demon, and a good family background is just a gimmick. It didn't say that Xiangzi must be given a job. After all, Xiangzi has no debts at all. The first dozen chapters are slightly different from the protagonist's character in the later chapters. It can only be said that the author's writing has made obvious progress and is worth recommending. The elements of time travel in the later chapters have also revealed some of the foreshadowings buried in the previous chapters. It is not confusing to read. I hope to continue writing. The more I read, the more delicious it becomes 😋, but can the author stop being stupid? The so-called beauty is in the chapter on water, so be diligent.

The writing is exquisite, and the protagonist's personality is as good as a saint. I haven't read the original work and I don't know what the original characters are like. Anyway, the characters here are very fleshed out, but the price of being delicate is that it's just a small scene in one chapter [laughing] It's a refreshing and sweet little story

(It's a very good book, it makes the cucumber spin.) It's one of the few things on Tomato that doesn't develop without the super gravity of some fans. The protagonist Oak is reincarnated (?). The writing style is also delicate, and it's very comfortable to read. At least I think it's quite interesting. As you continue reading, the author almost doesn't make bad jokes (only a little bit at the beginning) No spoilers: the protagonist does not know the development of his own plot. The plot of the novel itself is still mostly original. The main writing is still mygo and mujika, but there are also expansions of other bands. It is predicted that other bands may account for a large proportion in the future (after all, it is someone else's plot). There are some light novels (actually I haven't finished reading it yet), Saki and the protagonist stick together, and the cute Saki meets Oak (this issue is amazing (bushi)). The protagonist has a golden finger, but rarely uses it. If you don't like to see the golden finger of the protagonist, you can try it. In fact, this book should be easy to read even if you haven't read the original work (but you may not understand some of the comments) What else should I say in such a long comment? I don't care. Yiren, Mortis said how come she doesn't get paid for working every day (just give me the salary). Finally, I hope that the book will get better as it gets written, and the author will not starve to death. Yiren, Mortis said he likes you book

It's good to watch, but I want to see the twisted emotions between beautiful girls, and I want to see rivers of blood [you taste it carefully] The author wants me to praise him, so the author is extremely smart, the author is like a fish and the goose falls, and the author is unparalleled in the world [laughs]

Lin Qi is the best in my heart. I just finished reading the chapter where the little sister is healed by Maomao and Lin Qi. It is the most gentle pampering (bushi). The emotional drama in this article is very rich, so I am also looking forward to how it will end. To be honest, when I think about the marriage being 1v1, and then thinking about the remaining people, I feel bad for them, unless you are the one who can say that it will be better if everyone is together (not for lovers)