Traveling Through Mingke, I Became Xiao Ai's Lord, Holy Lord

The idea is good, but too short and there are too many emotional scenes. I can't help but praise, the female channel Long Aotian in Conan's skin

Very interesting theme and plot Recently, the addition of emotional lines has been too slow. Too much writing and ink is cumbersome. The protagonist is like a young boy who has just traveled through time [palm face]. It is much better to return to collecting charms and following the main line of the plot. There can also be emotional scenes, but not so many. You can write specifically about daily life and details of mission actions.

Crows fly, ducks climb, black tigers strand lambs, elephants kick, tiger claws eat pudding, black tigers fly past vultures, angry-clawed foxes fly in flocks, gazelles leap, horse tail flicks goshawks, scythes clear grass, rats walk in ditches, whales wag their tails, and flying eagles pounce. Shadow, a giant ax chops down a tree, a kite spreads its wings, a lion worships the sky, a cheetah gallops, a kite lands, a mule kicks, a mouse walks a maze, a mouse steals cheese, an angry duck takes off, a mantis punch, a snake step, an oyster shell, a black tiger digs out the heart, two dragons play with beads, a scorpion Palm, Melon Punch, Floating Lotus, Tarzan Crush, Flamenco Dance Steps, Cat Turn, Flying Hammer, Cat Shaking Water, Flying Crane Catching Shrimp, Cat Landing, Bear Paw Attack, Orangutan Branch Breaking, Rabbit Punch, Tyrannosaurus Flying, Hurricane Kick, Earthquake Punch, Xiao Xing Star Belt, Meteor Continuous Hit Mountain, Thunder Fist, Tiger Falling on the Eagle's Back, Super Planet Burning, Kangaroo Jump, Sweeping Legs, Tiger Fighting Style, Double Wind Passing Through the Ears, Eagle Claw Kung Fu, Flying Dragon Returns to Heaven, Cobra, Lobster Claw, Hungry Wolf Advances, Black Tiger Crosses Goshawk, One Tiger Kills Two Sheeps

I stayed up late and read the updated content in one breath. To be honest, it gave me a really good feeling. The emotional transition was actually quite well designed. It would have been better to condense it more and stop explaining it so much and use one or two sentences. At least then no one would say it was awkward anymore. I think the best thing about this book is that the protagonist is a qualified "Holy Lord", there is no mercy, and the impression brought about by a simple bad mouth is also quite good. A Conan fanfic that doesn't follow the original plot in a cookie-cutter manner. This is the kind of fanfic I want to read. The red and black sides are really tired of solving the case. Five-star praise!

Very, very well written and very interesting

Brother, you are a devil, are you trying to make true love here? It's kind of interesting [laughs]

Monkey charms are ever-changing, and they can't only change people. Why haven't you tried changing animals, or turning other people into animals? If there are dead things that can turn into any dead thing, wouldn't it be equivalent to Green Lantern? [Think]

Not bad Either no heroine or multiple heroines. OK?

Good writing has potential

The plot is compact and not procrastinating. There is no irritation. It's just too fast. I finished it in just a few chapters. I haven't read enough. I only have so much sugar, right? I want to see the teacher's speech! ! !

Five-star praise, five-star praise, this is a very exciting novel about Holy Lord wearing Conan and marrying Haibara Ai. It can be said to be a double surprise for Holy Lord fans and Haibara fans, but it is too short. The ending is very exciting and worth reading. Writing fan fiction is not easy, please cherish it

Update as soon as possible, I still have more to say. I don't know how many chapters I will write in the end. I hope it will be about 300 chapters, because I feel it's a bit short. Hehe, but please pay attention to your health, come on! [Blowing kiss]

I just read a few chapters and I think it's pretty good. The author is quite interesting. So many comments say that the author is overpowered. I'll see what happens later. As for those who say they don't want a female protagonist, just find a pit and jump into it.

It's pretty good. Why are there so few people?

I think it's pretty good-looking, at least it's not the Madonna, and it's much better than those Madonna-essays. [Think]

It's okay, it's just that the emotional scenes don't have to be awkward and disgusting like the beginning.

I can't be the only one eating this Daffin, you all should come in [angry][angry][angry]

In fact, I feel that the protagonist can pretend to be an unintelligent stone statue and be picked up by a big force [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I saw the latest one, and I find it quite interesting. I read a lot of comments about combat power, and it feels normal. I slowly find the spells, and my power gradually becomes stronger. Isn't this the case with most books? [What] And it's not flat now. It's boring to shovel it like a cart all the way. I agree with the author's point of view on the emotional drama. What's the difference between a fan who doesn't have emotions and a eunuch? It's impossible to have a favorite work without a favorite character.

It looks good, no need to say more

Looks good, quality is okay

Not bad, the taste matches

Three chapters a day, the homework is awesome Five stars is too early, it was finished so hastily.

It has been gathering dust on the bookshelf for more than half a month. I wanted to keep it for a while, but I couldn't help but read it.

Read this at 19:14 on December 10, 2025

It's very good. Please give me more support. [Like]

It's pretty good, but the author (writes) it's too short.

It's very interesting and makes me like that the devil is also a real devil, and the evil is also really evil.

A very good book, but the shortcoming is that it is too short and not enough to read.

It looks good, and the speed is not very fast [laughing evilly] Highly recommended