Demon Slayer***

I read a few chapters with the attitude of giving it a try. Mi's character blushes and her heart beats when she meets Shinobu, and Shinobu can't help teasing her. This is enough to make me happy for the rest of my life. Boss, how did you know that I like to read this [Like][Admire]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking \(//∇//)\, it can be regarded as a warm hug for Butterfly Nin, but be sure to ask for it, otherwise I will turn it into a negative review ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

The logic is very clear and the writing is very good. To be honest, this is the first time I have read a derivative of Demon Slayer, but I have to say that it really surprised me. It even made me want to watch Demon Slayer as a person who doesn't like watching anime very much. Shizuya's character really poked me, the cold beauty's shyness really poked people [shy], Shinobu's gentle and sinister character also poked me (so I'm going to watch anime), xql's sweet daily life is very nice, very sweet, My aunt can't stop laughing every time I see it, but the abuse is really cruel. This author can handle it. She really gives it to her if she has a knife. Author, do you know my heart attack when I saw the knife after being in jail for a week [I almost cried], author The writing is delicate enough, so I felt a little nervous when I read it. Shinobu and Shizuya have suffered enough, and I feel sorry for them [almost crying] Let me say it again. The writing is really beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] So does the author really not consider suddenly updating 100 chapters and scaring us to death? [Shy][shy][shy][shy]

The first few chapters are a bit chronological, with a lot of redundant descriptions, and the plot is also bland: practice → learn breathing techniques → become a pillar. However, the writing got better and better in the later period, and the writing style also improved, especially the description of the emotional line, which changed from complicated and redundant to delicate and ambiguous, and there was no greasy feeling. The writing of holding hands and hugging made the aunt laugh and blush. The relationship with Shinobu is also long-lasting and logical. They don't like each other suddenly and inexplicably, but they have mutual support and can understand why they really like each other. This is rare in fan fiction (most fan fiction has a feeling of conquering it all at once) The plot is also getting better and better as it is written. From the running accounts at the beginning and the ability to guess the next step at once, it becomes more ups and downs and interesting, and there are logical waves, making people want to see what the next step will be like. The combination of emotions and plot has also become very good, and the interactions between the characters have also become very sparkling and interesting. I like the part where Shinobu is jealous and Jing is taken to a brothel (?) And is concerned, it is very interesting. I read it in one go yesterday at 3 o'clock in the morning and finished it. I can clearly feel the author's progress. I just woke up today and wanted to comment and support it. The author will write better and better. Come on.

The protagonist blends in very well, and the emotional scenes are also very frustrating, and 🚗Yeah, yes, please continue to be patient 1 Thank you

I have never read a "Demon Slayer" fanfic before, but I didn't expect that I would find a treasure after reading it for the first time. The author's writing style is very good (don't listen to the author's introduction). I also read "Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba" because of this book, and I fell in love with Butterfly Ninja. I was also knifed to death [crying]. So I hope the author can give Butterfly Ninja and everyone a good ending. Shizuya's appearance is really like a ray of light. Big brother did not lose! Can the author save everyone one by one? Can the lord and his family survive? If the butterfly ninja is alive, the pattern must be a butterfly [crying] The author writes really well, the author is very patient and gentle (are all people who like butterfly ninja so gentle [crying]) Finally! I wish the author a lot, tens of millions of dollars! Ten million! Don't mess up, please Summary: Show them all to me! [Laughs] It's a surprise! Beautiful package! [Laughing] The only drawback is that it's not enough to watch!

Placement date: 2025.10.9, The third rated book Still pointing the way (if you don't like watching, avoid lightning by yourself) Please leave a long review of the specific advantages and disadvantages of this book in the comment area (I asked, but it has never been posted) (and I don't think many people will be free to read it...) Early stage: learning Japanese, training, applying medicine, birthday (marking is required to watch the extra) 29 Mi Biao 37 Ren A (1) 40 Forbearance A (2) (Jane), same room 41 Nin A (3) (Simplified) 56 Introduction Quotations 74 Ren A (4) 81 Mi battle-damaged edition (book circle contains stories) (If you like to watch The Riddler, you can start watching it in flashback from 82) 104 reunion 117-118 Many philosophical words 119 detoxification 120miA(5) 121 Feeding Ninja 140mi energy saving version 147 Living together again 150 Tolerance of Jealousy + A (6) 155 Ninja A (7) (cannot be counted once) (high burning to 157) 179 out of control 181 Memory recovery Note: 81 can be used to watch the book circle story. Currently, there are two chapters. The second derivative author: @ Blind Name (apologize directly at) 157 Gao Ran changes his platform (Weibo) to watch 167-168 including extras (If the author has any suggestions, I will delete them) Still points 1. The character creation is successful and very real. It gives people the feeling that it is growing and changing. The most obvious one is from the college student who is afraid of ghosts to the independent Xuezhu, but he is still afraid of pain. I admit that most of the protagonists are not afraid of pain and appear to be very strong... But is it better to be real? Then when the author writes about some small habits (emphasis on Jigoku Ramen), he really writes them out. He does not just leave it to the author to have something to say, or to introduce the characters in this way to improve the character image. Secondly, the IQ is online, and it is enough to hide it once or twice. There is no procrastination all the time. Jingya is also homesick. Some novels are just worn out. Occasionally, she will reminisce for the sake of the plot, or she will suddenly feel sad there (actually, this is what I like). Jingya will usually say "my hometown...", And will also cosplay the Lucky Cat. This is something that exists in reality, right? 2 Is written very carefully There is no OOC for other characters, such as Shinobu. The author has written everything about goldfish, low blood pressure, and birthdays (this is really the best). Everyone who recommends Shinobu knows these little things about Shinobi, but so far, only Tudou has written them. What makes this book feel like a diary to me is that it really happened, not just simple words (well... Of course I think the daily novels written by Hope Next Door are also acceptable), and Aoi, she really stitched Shizuya's haori stitch by stitch. Everyone in the Butterfly House is very good friends with Shizuya, and they all have their own scenes, so I won't say that they are all Shinobu's scenes, but they are all candy. (I'll leave the rest in the comment section~)

It's really good to read. In terms of relationships, it's the most comfortable one I've seen with Shinobu (others I've seen, the plot was okay, but the relationship with Shinobu came out of nowhere [facepalm]), and the plot is also very smooth. Wow, I clearly remember that not long ago, the rating was more than 8 points, and now it has directly reached 9.0. Ahhh, I am so happy. This book is really worth it. I think it can be higher [][][][][]

The foreshadowing is very good. When learning the language at the beginning, he deliberately emphasized protection. When he turned into a ghost later, this characteristic was also imprinted in his bones. He would protect his companions. Even if he lost his memory, the overall look was very comfortable. It won't be like Shuangwen. The protagonist is also a human being and there are ghosts that cannot be defeated. There is no halo just because of the protagonist.

Very good novels, which made me lose control of Originium Disease, Parmish Infection, Rainstorm Syndrome, Vocal Cord Infection, Collapse Syndrome, Abstraction, Money Infection, Radiation Infection, Cyberpsychosis, Fear Gas Inhalation, Homesickness, Urban Disease, Distortion, Slow Shock, Living Corpse Transformation, Witch Transformation, Madness Transformation, Honkai Disease, Demon Body, and Extraordinary Persons. , Hypothermia, Karabacteria, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life equation corrosion, warp corruption, all recovered [Love] I wanted to kneel down and beg myself not to cry, but I found that the tears fell to the ground before my knees. How on earth do you write so well! ! !

My favorite Demon Slayer fanfic! My favorite original character! Who can understand the strength of this Jingmi? The existence like the sea god's needle is fixed in Infinite City! After beating Tong Mo, beat the black dead Mou, beat the black dead Mou, and beat Wumei, and by the way, he saved everyone! I'm extremely satisfied with my career. Moreover, the depictions of other pillars are so vivid and are completely from the original work. I never tire of carrying out missions with Yanzhu and Yinzhu, getting along with Kanahu and Mitsuri, and training with everyone before the decisive battle. As well as the emotional line with Butterfly Shinobu, the delicate, vivid and step-by-step description makes it easy to accept the love between them. In fact, I didn't really want to watch the drama between the heroine and Shinobu at first (I quite like Shinobu). I like to watch the beautiful, strong, miserable and heart-throb protagonist as he pursues his career. But I clicked on this book because of its high ratings. I didn't expect to finish reading this book, which has a heavy emphasis on emotional lines. The author is very knowledgeable. I sincerely think the author's writing is super, super good! If possible, if the author starts writing about Demon Slayer fanfiction again, can he try writing a heartthrob genre? I'm really looking forward to it.

I am a fan of Feng Feng. It is not OOC at all, and the writing style is exquisite. It is considered the best among the Demon Slayer fanfics I have read. The plot of [Adoration] is not obtrusive, and the original work has not been greatly changed. It is pure love. Tomato has such a masterpiece. The charisma of the original heroine is also awesome. Doubao directly generated 2 million words of extra for me. I just finished reading "The Unfinished Book", a completely OOC Bengtie fanfic, and reading this again is simply refreshing. It is recommended that all fanfics be written according to this standard [Blowing Kiss]

My mother, this book is so well written. I will love the relationship between young lovers who love each other for the rest of my life. The tenderness and warmth when they get along are particularly well written. Everyone, please read this book immediately!

It's very beautiful. It makes up for the regret of Xiaoxin being injected with wisteria flower poison, but it's a pity that Kanae was not saved. It's delicious😋

The plot is well described, the characters are vivid, and the personal emotions are well described. It's so well written. Boss, you still have the manuscript, right? It's not enough. I want to watch the sweet couple...[Cry][cry][cry] It took me three days to read it. The emotions are ups and downs. I laugh when it's sweet and cry when I cry. I'm like a lunatic. [Cry] I still want to watch...[Almost cry][almost cry][almost cry][almost cry] There is a feeling that I am developing through reading, watching the author's writing getting better and better, the feelings becoming more and more delicate, full of details, and rich in emotion [I almost cried] It is really a super beautiful novel. It is no exaggeration to say that this is the first such beautiful Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever read. Those two extras are from God, right? [I'm about to cry] I just watched it silently for 23 hours @Potato and Hell Ramen Come and praise me [I understand]

The writing style is very good. It is hard to imagine that this is the first book written by the author. He is a gifted writer! ! ! Emotions come naturally and the characters are not OOC. The author should write more original plots [crying] [crying] The main plot has been pushed to the pillar training. I am afraid that I will not be able to watch the end [crying] [crying] I will follow you forever

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it's really good. When I first clicked on it, I thought it would be the same as a regular time-traveling demon slayer. But after reading it, it became more and more interesting. There was no exaggeration of the heroine's power (nothing like crushing Mubi or anything like that) ) Every time I fight a ghost, I worry about whether the heroine can handle it (my treasure)😭😭😭. The relationship with Shinobu is also gradual, and the heroine also has her own little thoughts (for example, she is worthy of being a person sleeping in the same bed, and she has the same thoughts😃). It was really uncomfortable when the heroine turned into a ghost and lost her memory and met Shinobi again😭😭😭, I hope they both have a good ending😭😭😭😭

Very beautiful, very invincible, very beautiful. The if line in the extra book makes me cry. "When a fish swims in the water, it has both a tail and a head." It's very artistic, but it makes me cry. The emotional scenes are very delicate. It is the most emotionally delicate of the Demon Slayer Twin heroines I have watched so far, and it is also the one with the highest rating. And there are many words in the novel that are very well used. It makes people feel numb and impressed. In short, the writing is very delicate, and the wb rice is also delicious. I read it last night, and I'm reading the underlined tags I marked again today. It's really a novel worth reading, especially the bond between Shizuya and Shinobu. The extra idea is also very good. I am very happy in this world. I hope I can still eat delicious food. Butterfly Ninja and Butterfly Shizumi will be together forever and cannot be separated.

It's really beautiful. I've read so many two-girl gl novels. This one is not only emotionally delicate, but the characters are not OOC at all. I also feel like I'm going to fall in love with Butterfly Ninja after reading it. . . [Adoration]

It's so beautiful, and the love between the two is so touching~ The plot of the original work is handled very well. It is not rigid and tough and allows the protagonist to integrate into the plot. Instead, it uses a natural method to allow the protagonist to experience and participate in the plot. Babies who have not read the original text can also adapt to reading this article without feeling abrupt at all, and they will not worry about not understanding it if they have not read the plot before~ I've already read it for the second time, and it's simply the best Demon Slayer fanfic I've ever read ~ Highly recommended

This is the best book about the relationship between Demon Slayer's original protagonist and Butterfly Shinobu. Overall, it's not bad. It's not cheating, childish, inexplicable, or blunt. To be honest, I like this book's relationship to the point where Shizuya and Shinobu's status in my heart is on par with the official's. After that, it's almost boring to look at other fan's relationship.

This novel is the most high-quality and heart-wrenching work I have read in recent times, and I still feel unsatisfied after reading it. What touches people the most is its authenticity and purity. There is no suspended setting or deliberate coolness, but it uses the most sincere emotions to outline the most touching human scenes. The plot of the story is relaxed and relaxed, with ups and downs of conflict and long-lasting warmth. Every plot serves the characters, and every dialogue is full of profound meaning. It doesn't feel laggy at all when reading, but instead becomes more interesting as you read it. The author's characterization of the characters is profound, and he can accurately capture the inner world of the characters, and vividly display their joys, sorrows, joys, entanglements and hesitations, making you involuntarily immerse yourself in them and empathize with the characters, as if you have personally experienced their lives. The text style is unique, either fresh and timeless, or profound and concise. It can always use the most appropriate language to depict the most moving pictures and convey the most sincere emotions. What's even more valuable is that the story contains love for life and tolerance for human nature. After reading it, people can let go of their impetuosity and gain inner peace. This is a novel that can withstand repeated readings. Every time you reread it, you can discover new details and insights. It is a well-deserved high-quality masterpiece that deserves to be seen and loved by more people.

I watched it as a trumpet and really liked it! ⁄(⁄ ⁄ ⁄ω⁄ ⁄ ⁄)⁄It's a pity that this is my favorite book about Butterfly with two female protagonists that I have read! \(≧▽≦)/ The emotions are really delicate. The emotional lines in the books I read before were too abrupt. I personally like the delicate emotional descriptions, which can make me feel the vividness of a person and the three-dimensionality of a character. Many times, I am really touched by the plot of the book and the words written by the author. I will be happy with you when I am happy, and sad with you when I am sad. Even if I have not opened this book for a long time due to some reasons, when I read it again, my heart will still be touched by the author's description. For me, I am the most Really, I think the most important thing in a book is the details, the characterization of the characters, the rendering of emotions, and the development of the story, all of which are composed of details. I really like the big words, which can give people a gentle feeling, so please keep up the good work, I will keep watching until the ending comes (●°u°●) "

I really like this book. The author may be a little behind in the description of fighting, but it can be seen that he is making progress. The characters are well captured and not OOC. I really like the emotional scenes. I can't help it, old man, come and see, this is the best cook in our village.

As long as you survive a short period of dullness in the early stage, the middle and later stages will be very attractive to watch. The author's writing style is very good, the characters' personalities are in line with the original work and the original characters are full of charm. The emotional lines are delicately written and let people follow what happens between the young lovers, which is very ups and downs. There is no funnel in terms of logic, and the viewer feels happy and cannot help but read on. Finally, I would like to add my expectations, I want to see Nin Meng Meng 1! ! !

This is the first book I've read about Demon Slayer with two heroines. It's really good. The author's writing style is very good! Now that I have finished reading, I don't feel overwhelmed, but a great sense of satisfaction. Shizuya is very good, and Ren is also very good. The relationship between the two people is very delicate. At the end, I read it while listening to "Leave My Dependence", which really made me cry. I just hope that the extra chapter can write more sweet things (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

After reading just a few chapters, I was instantly hooked. I just read Ghost Blade. This book by the author instantly gave me the urge to read all of Ghost Blade. The characters of the two heroines are also very attractive to me. I like the cold heroine and the gentle and sinister heroine the most😍

Alas, now I realize that Tomato has devoured my long review. I originally wrote it after I caught up with the (then) latest chapter, Chapter 100. I always thought it was there, so I had to repost it again. The wording has been modified by the way. - Because the rating has just been launched, I think the rating is low. (Additional: It was only about 7.0 Years old at that time) The overall writing rhythm is more to my liking. There is no system, no strong cheats, and no sudden Internet memes from time to time, and the immersion is very strong. The protagonist has a good character, a charming personality, a complete growth arc, and it blends well with the original work. His personality is also very compatible with tolerance. There is a plot of turning into a ghost, but the transformation is not abrupt. The emotions are delicate and the descriptions are spot on. Very sweet and sad. There is no derogation of the other characters. The author is very dedicated and will catch bugs in time. People who have never watched Demon Slayer can understand it. The main character on the cover is Mei Mei Mei Mei. (Additional note: The cover at that time was still Jing Mi and Chain Crow. I miss the cover of the first edition, which was very graphic; of course, the current edition is just as good, and is bigger and more beautiful. The manuscript is really beautiful...) I think it's a slow start, because I've seen other books that ended with more than a hundred chapters. - Supplement: As for some people saying that the first few chapters are dull, I have a completely different view. It is precisely because of the foreshadowing at the beginning that the original characters are smoothly integrated into the entire worldview. It would be boring if the beginning was missing. It's just that in today's fast-paced society, this relatively slow narrative is no longer popular, but it is precisely this kind of delicate description that retained me. I personally think that ordinary daily life is more difficult to write than battles. It not only tests the insight into details, but also tests the author's writing style. The above is just my personal opinion. ★★★★★ Follow up after 7 hours of reading I have an avoidant mentality, because the author's writing was so good that I couldn't bear to read it. In addition, I suddenly got seriously ill during the series, and I haven't been in the mood to read it since. But this article has been lingering in my mind, so I still want to add something. Maybe I'll wait and see when I don't want to escape anymore. Now I still feel the rating is low. Of course, you may also think that I am exaggerating. After all, everyone's taste is different. I can only say that this book has really entered my heart. Others have said too many kind words, so I don't want to repeat them. I just lamented that I have been reading fan fiction for so many years, and I have also written it myself. It is not easy to finish writing it, and to write it well requires not only perseverance but also talent. Good writing in the world is like a crucian carp crossing a river, but it is very rare to be able to be completed without unfinishedness. I have always had three criteria for viewing fan fiction - whether the original protagonist fits the local worldview, whether the plot adaptation is reasonable, and whether the original character is OOC - from these three perspectives, I can say that the author has almost no discomfort at all. Even among the fan creations I have seen, works like this are very rare. Not only is it rare for Tomato, but it is also rare for Demon Slayer IP, and even for the entire fandom world. Any creator who has ever built his own ideal paradise cannot refuse to praise such a sincere work. A truly good work is one who cannot help but want to recreate it. If I have time, I really hope that I can pick up a paintbrush and present the impressive scenes in this article in the form of comics. When I come up with this idea, it is enough to show what a shocking creation this is.

Nice! ! ! Love watching! ! ! The emotions are handled very delicately, and the plot is also on point. Boss, I will always follow you! ! !

It's amazing. The writing is smooth and sweet, and the details of the fight are also very good. I have to take dozens of insulin injections [smile][smile][smile] I take back my previous sentence, it's a good knife, the author is a good knife [crying][crying][crying]