The Three Little Ones Became Generals, and Garp Smiled Crookedly.

It's so beautiful. I've long thought about this kind of theme. The three Luffy brothers are all together, and other potential characters are drawn to me. It's not stupid or embarrassing. Five stars is just the upper limit here, but it's not the limit I want to give.

I gave it four stars because the protagonist has grown too slowly. He is still ten years old in more than a hundred chapters, and the World Government lost the rubber fruit and turned around and Luffy became an esper. This is not suspected of being a bit confusing. Nothing else is wrong. Looking forward to the next plot, it would be best to have a red-haired pirate who is making trouble on the Justice Island, and the matching opponent is the confused expression of the protagonist when he is in the group, or the Supernova Gathering in Shampoo Land and the protagonist and them say something terrible [laughing] and let Ace capture Blackbeard, and then publicly execute him as the son of Rocks to trigger a war on top. Ace's blaster Whitebeard should be worth watching [laughing]

I wonder if Garp pinched your neck and asked you to write it [Thinking]

It looks good, I hope Uta will be the heroine

It's okay, but I can't tell the author's intention. There is no heroine or multiple heroines. The protagonist doesn't have this kind of performance. I'm afraid of feeding him later😯 (The main reason may be because he started writing when he was six years old, but I still remain skeptical of the author)

One hundred million points of honor

Can you be more specific? Are you going to comment on a certain book, a certain movie, a certain event, or something else? Can you give me some detailed information so that I can make a more accurate review?

Come on, your rating is fine, but it's just not great.

That's awesome, my brother, even Luffy accepted it

The natural type is better, mainly more handsome than the fantasy beast type

Not bad, good cheers, author

It's okay, but I just don't understand. If you don't strengthen the burning of the fruit, why do you let Ace eat it [face covering] Do you have any plans for the future?

There's nothing poisonous about it, it's okay

It's okay, come on

Very good, good luck to the author

A novel about a six-year-old kid talking in his sleep haha

I think it's okay. Why is this book rated so low?

The subject matter is good. I hope I can write it well.

It's so funny, I suggest everyone laugh together.

Four stars, the overall feeling is good, but the part about Luo joining the navy is a bit strange.

Not bad, the writing is a bit idle, I like it

Three old men can wake up from their dreams with laughter

This setting is very novel and very nice.

I think it's pretty good

Good looking good looking good looking

Tool man, you also want to experience it

Come on, author, it's very interesting.

Very nice, I like it

Give it four stars to support it! ~

This theme is rare😳