Travel through time and become Hinata,
In a heavily suppressed family,
Time travels back to a child who just got into a caged bird and died unexpectedly,
How can he use his knowledge to change his destiny?
Reader comments
There are so many typos, a bunch of inexplicable commas and carriage returns in paragraphs, a bunch of self-talk, two names that are used interchangeably, and from time to time something that was not written in the previous plot will pop up and suddenly give you some power.
Can we not use two names?
Are the other gods you wrote about invincible? What's there to be afraid of? Normally other gods shouldn't be able to control a kaleidoscope.
Not bad, I can watch it
Too many typos
Average, hard to rate
Too much repetition is not good-looking
It's a bit messy and it doesn't work well
You follow these main characters every day, and your secrets haven't been revealed by F4? Doesn't fit in with Naruto's world view which focuses on intelligence
There are so many typos, a bunch of inexplicable commas and carriage returns in paragraphs, a bunch of self-talk, two names that are used interchangeably, and from time to time something that was not written in the previous plot will pop up and suddenly give you some power.
Can we not use two names? Are the other gods you wrote about invincible? What's there to be afraid of? Normally other gods shouldn't be able to control a kaleidoscope.
Not bad, I can watch it
Too many typos
Average, hard to rate
Too much repetition is not good-looking
It's a bit messy and it doesn't work well
You follow these main characters every day, and your secrets haven't been revealed by F4? Doesn't fit in with Naruto's world view which focuses on intelligence