[Single female protagonist + high martial arts + superpowers + decisive killing + revenge + no brainlessness + late stage expert]
The male protagonist, Cao Can, was playing with his mobile phone on the roadside while waiting for the light to turn green, but he heard a loud noise. As soon as he raised his face with confusion, a speeding heavy truck kept dilating in his pupils... "Wc", before he finished speaking, he left this world.
"Yan Jin? The person who awakened the C-level power 'Xinhuo' appears again? Alas, we have to prepare in advance." The powerful man sitting on the black gold throne in the center of the dark hall sighed with emotion.
"Xinhuo~Xinhuo~ I don't know if it can grow this time." A heavy and majestic voice came from inside a crystal-clear spire.
"Hey, hey, hey, don't, don't sleep, Yan Jin, you, don't you want to take me to see the highest mountain, the longest river!". There was a girl who was sobbing uncontrollably. Her long hair was not tied up except for a hosta loosely tied around her head. A few strands of hair were stuck to the side of her neck, making her skin as white as if soaked in moonlight. The most eye-catching thing is the pair of starry eyes with pear blossoms and rain, which makes people want to take care of them.
I heard someone yell "Burn the Sky", and the endless black mist and chaotic and terrifying roars that enveloped everyone suddenly stopped. A young man walked out of the sea of fire, his broad shoulders held up his black windbreaker, and his jawline was clean and straight. , When the broken hair was blown up by the wind, the exposed eyebrows were sharp and clear, and a red dagger pendant hung from his right ear. The red was like a burning flame, glowing with a fine luster under the light, making the lines of the ear bones more sharp, adding a bit of unruliness.
He is both the bright sun and the eternal ember
Reader comments
The structure is quite clear, the content is also very good, and all aspects are good, but some details still need to be changed. Also, the focus should be on the protagonist. Why do other people write so much? After all, this is your first time writing. You should write better and better in the future. The potential is not small. I wish you good luck and success!
The structure is quite clear, the content is also very good, and all aspects are good, but some details still need to be changed. Also, the focus should be on the protagonist. Why do other people write so much? After all, this is your first time writing. You should write better and better in the future. The potential is not small. I wish you good luck and success!