Liu Bei: “Brother, I’m begging you, stop setting me up. I can’t take it anymore. My heart can’t handle this.”
After a fierce battle, Guan Yu is finally surrounded. Facing the situation, he sneers and pulls out the “secret strategy” Liu Mang gave him. “Second Brother, run! I’m really not tricking you this time.” Guan Yu: “...”
Zhang Fei: “Big Brother, if you don’t mind, can I beat that brat up?”
Zhuge Liang: “Who burned down my thatched cottage??”
Pang Tong: “What does this idiot mean by showing me a roast chicken? Fallen Phoenix Slope? I’ll fight you to the death...”
Zhao Yun: “You wretch, Liu Mang, you’ve made me betray my principles...”
Sun Shangxiang: “Liu Mang? More like a lecher...”
I have always been curious about whether the protagonist's personality is innate or a result of the troubled times of the Three Kingdoms, or whether the protagonist's personality is just the hippie smiley face we usually see just for Liu Bei to play Sichuan Opera 🤔
The article is rigorous, the narrative is smooth, the logic is clear and tight, the pace is slow, and there are some minor flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. The first ten chapters feel very good, and the rest of the article can be read as a daily article. The plot is rich enough, and friends who like it can read it.
In fact, he is very good-looking, but you don't need to think of him as a time traveler, just think of him as a player or a local with the memory of a time traveler. He is very talented and intelligent, but also very magical. Why do you say you don't need to be a time traveler? Because his ethics are more like playing games in the Three Kingdoms, and do not have the mentality of some normal people in society in later generations. For example, some of his actions in the early stage, such as Taipingdao's actions, are more like the actions of a player or a person with a strong ego. It is also the so-called "I have to do whatever I want." Or it may be a joke that goes too far. In fact, it is not a sign of maturity. There are some contradictions before and after, such as asking the guards to "not change their expressions" and "laughing loudly" when they killed the Yellow Turban rebels, and having the Yellow Turban soldiers call them "inhuman", which conflicted with "nauseating" and "cannot bear to see this" during the battle between Liu Bei and Yuan Shao later. For example, the "benevolence" of Liu Mang and the "benevolence" of Liu Bei were emphasized in the previous article. Liu Mang has already had some psychological construction and there are some differences. Liu Mang's psychological autosuggestion and so on may not be the most pleasing aspects of this article, but the article is true and logically consistent, and it is also an article worth reading.
The author's writing style is really good. Each character in the story is full of flesh and blood. After reading some of the previous chapters, the daily narrative has a faint sense of warmth. The score should not be so low. In my mind, the Three Kingdoms score is above 9. It is worth reading ~
Some conflicts may be a little stiff. Although the protagonist has traveled through time, but because he has traveled through time and become a child, the shaping will be intentionally or unintentionally biased towards children. For example, in the handling of some problems and the development of the plot, he is more "childlike" or naughty? But if you go there for fun, then overall it's okay.
I am really happy to death hahaha😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
It's funny and fun. Although there are very few war scenes nowadays, the plot is just after the Yellow Turban Rebellion and the protagonist is not an adult yet. How come there are so many wars for you to watch😓.
Really well written
Very nice. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Okay, the content is interesting