One Piece: Reborn and Returned, Fishing in the Heavens

It's okay after Chapter 20. I saw the empty island. In fact, I can recruit people like Kidd Hawkins. They have no more potential than the old, weak, sick and disabled people you have now. Moreover, after such a long time, I don't give my subordinates some awesome fruits. They just run around all day.

The follow-up plot is really good. It is rare to write such a good story about Ming Ge. I suggest the author delete the first 20 chapters, which will be better, or suggest readers to start reading after Ming Ge is reborn. Everything before it has no meaning. Ming Ge's development route, changes to the world, step by step, and fishing in the heavens are all well written. However, the fishing world is a bit lacking. We can add more, transform the manpower under his command, and even fish out characters like Kimimaro and Esdeath and take them under his command. In addition, the poker sequence is quite complicated, and the number of poker cards is fixed. It is very troublesome to add new ones later and remember them. It is not as good as three disasters, four dessert generals, etc., Which have signature memory points. It is recommended to optimize. For example, it is better to select one character in each sequence to become the signature. Or introduce a new type in addition to this, and create a fighting character that belongs to Ming Ge like a star, such as God of Thunder Enero, Fire God Sabo, Cooking God Sanji, Medical God Luo and other god series, or the author can think about it himself, anyway, just create some special memorable signature characters as Ming Ge's business card to the outside world, which feels more interesting.

The plot advances quite quickly, but the first twenty chapters are from the past life and should be labeled as extras.

Alas, this novel is such a pity. It was very well written and has been discontinued.

Very nice [Please update] Come on, author

It is very consistent with Ming Ge's character, very restorative, and very thoughtful.

This time, the eunuch won't do it 🤦

Although the front is a bit verbose, the back is pretty good, but I don't really believe in the film industry of One Piece World. Organizing a screening in a place where you have control can promote your image, spread private goods, and inspire public opinion.

It's a bit long in the beginning, but it's okay in the back. I can see it.

The author is pretty good. Overall, I feel like he has no flaws. He writes about a turkey with relatively few pirates. He also has good ideas. You can take a look [smile]