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This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.

It's well written, but don't make the protagonist too dull. Alas, the writing of the main character is getting more and more dull. It is not as interesting as the beginning. Later, I changed the writing to AI. How come the main character becomes like a fake person?

Based on the content of Chapter 57 that I have watched so far, it is a relaxing novel for beginners. The initial setting in the novel is very novel, the plot is smooth, and the content is also very good. I have not found any major poisonous points so far. I personally highly recommend it. I don't know if the author is a newbie. The content I've watched so far seems a bit immature. I hope the author will write better and better. The author's current foreshadowing is also very good, regarding the subsequent events of going to the Magic City, the subsequent development of Gaojiacun, and the later plot of "Wanjie". I hope the author's follow-up plot will be smooth and smooth without causing major rifts. From the current point of view, it is an excellent novel for beginners. I highly recommend it.

The author's choice of subject matter is good, and it is a pure novel written by a novice. The shortcomings are that the main plot is not very clear and a bit confusing, and the characterization of the protagonist is a bit too mediocre... In any case, he has just graduated from college two or three years ago. It is recommended that the author clarify his thinking and clarify the main development route. It is best not to make it a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. You can set up a long-term phased main task, supplemented by other side tasks. This way, no matter how you write the main line, it won't be messy. The author will keep up the good work and work hard to update [smile][smile]🤔

The book is good, and it tends to be more humorous and daily. But this long review really makes me nervous, about Xue Baochai, Sun Wukong and the like. What did Jili Gulu say? Which sentence I said in my dream almost made me think this book was a curiosity book

It's so good. The protagonist is Cheng Xin's distant cousin. Come on, author, don't care what others say. After writing this book, you can go to the starting point to preach.

Words are like gurgling water, cleansing the soul and intoxicating. The writing is full of flowers, every word is precious, every sentence is classic, and it is amazing to read. The writing is like twinkling stars, lighting up the inner night sky, and the emotions are delicate and touching. 👍

It may be that the author has less social life, which leads to the behavioral logic of some characters in the book being different from ordinary people. The bug of unlimited character attributes was not taken into account. In the early stage, the values ​​were single digits, but later the values ​​exploded, but it was difficult to express growth. It's a lot of fun, and the awakening is also very interesting. 4.2 Stars.

To be honest, this rhythm is very comfortable. It's not like the kind that starts with black technology after dozens of chapters. It's a little funny and develops naturally. Come on, author, keep updating, [Love]

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