The Dharma God of Hogwarts

It's good-looking. The male protagonist is a wizard in the true sense. He keeps exploring and pursuing knowledge, and he is very smart and well-planned. So far, the writing is very, very good, but it is too short and not enough to read.

It's so good-looking. It's also called "As a great wizard, I try to be an out-and-out fairy tale wizard in the world of Harry Potter after being reincarnated." It's an out-and-out invincible novel. It's enjoyable. It doesn't have a plot that takes one bite after another. It's an ordinary life with great power. It's a good read.

I feel that the writing is much better than Clow Card. The protagonist is a standard academic type, and some of the details are really good. Come on, this book must hold on, and don't develop into a brainless genre with writing.

It's good to watch. I haven't seen an academic protagonist in a long time. The character creation in the original work is also very good and not mindless. I hope to see the protagonist gain more knowledge in the magical world and change and improve this fairy tale world [Like]

A very good hp fanfic. The protagonist is a peer of the old bat. It does not rely on the so-called plot but borrows hp's world view, mixes it with other magic systems, and combines the magic system of Western Fantasy with hp's very well. It was fine when I kept reading, but when I read through two pages a day, it became a bit dull. I felt that the writing was very bland and made me uninteresting.

It's a very interesting book about the male protagonist's exploration of magic. If you like career-minded protagonists, this book is suitable for you. It belongs to the Invincible Genius genre, but it focuses on exploring the upper limit of magic. The basic plot follows an original route, with some original plots interspersed here and there. The male protagonist and Lily Snape are childhood sweethearts. They have been taught magic to hone their minds since they were children. Both of their characters have been corrected for the better. It is conceivable that the subsequent development will definitely not be as tragic as the original work. Moreover, the male protagonist is very protective of his shortcomings and is good at taking precautions before they happen. He has both brains and strength, and he is quite at ease. If nothing else, he should not be cruel at all. As long as he wants to save anyone, there is basically no one he cannot save. In addition, Dumbledore seems to be grooming him as his future heir. I have read the latest 149 chapters so far.

There's nothing wrong with the article... It's nice, I love reading it. A little problem, if the author could see [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] the male protagonist is listening to the Lolita sound in the book! ! ! [Covers face] Very divisive! 6-9 Years old. Lolita who is definitely no more than 10 years old. A little loli confronts Manus. I don't know if the author can set it~

The image of the protagonist's genius is well created. It is not the kind of genius that is only reflected in the settings. The author uses performance to reflect the protagonist's genius rather than relying on the author's own words or settings. The system is basically an expansion library except that it has not appeared at the beginning. It is used to expand your knowledge and learn the magic of different systems. The images of Snape and Lily are basically OOC. The influence of the protagonists since childhood is definitely different from the original work, but they are also very good-looking, and the portrayal of the two people's images is quite interesting. It is a daily scientific research article. The protagonist basically spends time dancing in the early stage. Now entering Hogwarts is daily life and scientific research. The setting is quite rigorous, at least there is no obvious self-contradiction. It looks very good. The last time I saw the genius protagonist in Tomato, he was able to express himself very well, which was Lao Yi. I've read too many Harry fics that are the same, but this kind of Hogwarts fic is quite interesting and well written. For me, this novel is quite good and worth recommending

A good-looking and very rational protagonist. The author puts forward a very mature and self-consistent view on Harry Potter's power system. At the same time, he retains a lot of interesting plots in the rational narrative. I highly recommend it. To add a pertinent note, it is considered a slow hit among the current Tomato mainstream, but subjectively I can say that this rhythm is very good. Anyway, I personally don't find it boring or repetitive.

It's super good-looking, it's more of a theoretical research type, if you like to read and push the plot, I suggest you don't read it if you follow the main storyline. If you don't read it, please leave a star in the review. I really love this kind of novel that studies the inner theory of magic and searches for the essence of magic! ! ! Teacher, I will always follow you!

I really like it, I really like it. It is not a heartthrob story, nor is it a simple love story, nor is it a hateful protagonist who grows up and works as a nanny for a trio to eliminate any hidden dangers. It is a simple career-related story. I completely got the HP story I wanted to read. I must give it a good review [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The protagonist is a standard Little Eagle, and there are not many conspiracy theories. The transitions and characters get along harmoniously. Even if there are some problems, the protagonist is definitely not the one who suffers. She is comfortable. It's a bit uncomfortable to have no CP, and the author doesn't seem to know how to write emotional dramas. Moreover, the protagonist and Lily in the article are really good at smoking. Sipu's childhood experience is much better. Even if they are friends, their level of happiness is almost the same as when Lily was in the original novel. [Thinking] [Learned] [Learned] Even if I can't write the main text, can I make a side story? [Thinking] Really good kiss [Admiration] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]

The logic is clear, and the power increase is also very reasonable. If it is written like this, it will be another excellent fan work. However, the plot development is slow and there are few updates. If it is written like this, I don't know if it will be able to develop to Harry's appearance in one million words. I can only say that the future is promising.

This is an academic Harry Potter fanfic, somewhat similar to the Gray Wizard. The setting of the protagonist from the DND system also reminded me of the Unforgivable Curse Immortal from the same site. However, the protagonist of this book takes a decent route and is not as neurotic/crazy as the above two books. Such academic protagonists are very rare, and I didn't expect to find one here. The starting point of the parent generation is very good, because this era is fresh to readers, and the plot of training Snape and Lily before entering school is very interesting. However, there is also a problem with the parent generation, which is that it requires a lot of plot support. The author also spent some thought on this aspect, but the plot after enrollment is still relatively bland. Although the protagonist has studied many magic systems, he is relatively low-key and has few plots to reveal his sage in front of others, so the reading pleasure is slightly lacking.

It's good-looking, but there's one thing that many fanfics can't do. This book is simply written based on the background of HP, rather than relying on foresight to get through the plot like other books. In fact, you will get bored after reading too much of the main plot. It is often more attractive to deconstruct and reinterpret a world view and participate in it in your own style.

The writing is really good. There are more theories in the early stage and less of the plot, but it gets better later on, and Snape's description is also good. Even Lily is also in this part. I don't seem to see the author's description. I read it in one go. Anyway, it is very well written. It is exactly the type I want to watch. The character description is also very good. I don't know what the author will write in the future. I'm looking forward to it, but I hope the author can update it more. It's a bit unreadable😭

The writing is very good, step-by-step, and there is no development of cerebral hemorrhage. The protagonist's way of dealing with people is quite mature, and it is comfortable to watch.

Super pretty! This style, character design and writing style are the only one in Tomato fan fiction. Ever since I read the author's other Harry Potter fan fiction, it has been difficult to read other fan fiction. I have been in a book shortage. I didn't expect to find the author's new book [Adoration] at random today. "Do you also think what I did was right?" "How I think it is not important, what is important is, madam, do you think you did the right thing then?" After the identification, the protagonist is a succubus, and the personality charm is [like]

This book is very interesting to me. The theoretical knowledge is rigorous and the author's setting is very consistent with the original work. I have read half of it and haven't found any obvious poisonous points. There are good and bad articles about daily life. This is a matter of opinion. The ups and downs of the plot are not that big, but I can feel that the author is looking forward to the long term. It was written in order to lengthen the plot and make it more enjoyable. It will inevitably be affected. The theoretical explanation takes up a part that should not be occupied. However, I personally can accept it. What you see in this kind of text and pictures is the protagonist's research and development of various magics, and this book is very good at writing this. , The protagonist is a magic god from another world. He accidentally entered the wizarding world while fighting with the system owner, and robbed part of the system. The latter system basically takes up little space. Those who don't like system articles can also join. The main point is the protagonist's research and development of various magics. The author is very generous in this regard. Any magic in the system is a system. The protagonist's original world is a magic god, and he is particularly good at research and development, which will make the development of magic infinitely more exciting. Regardless of the space occupied by the theory at the beginning, you can read it. It is recommended.

The magic system of many books has been well sorted out, and the core of magic in the HP world - beliefs and symbols - has been deduced using a relatively rigorous line of logic. Here you can see the text magic of symbols and cognition, the rigorous and theoretical arcane system, the air magic of black and white balance, and the soul magic involving the essence... A high-rise building, if you like to build a magical world in your mind, you can't miss it.

It's super good-looking. Different from other derivative works, this work is not limited to showing the original knowledge and culture of the Harry Potter world. It also boldly adds a lot of new magic and even explains the origin of a logically clear world. Love it, love it [Adore]

The language is concise, without too many bad sentences. It vividly depicts a mage from the native mage world, and his thoughts on HP system magic evaluation. The only shortcomings that are not considered shortcomings may be the lack of the materialist historical perspective of contemporary Muggle thought, and of course the specific mathematical system used in the spell model.

It takes about 30 chapters to understand the best part of this article, just like eating a croissant and taking a bite of the bread from one end, and then you can get the filling in the second bite. Of course, I have only read Chapter 54, but I think the author handled the transition from 7 to 9 years old very well [Thinking] Let's take a look again

Nice! ! I hope that this book will focus on the hp/magic worldview in the end. Although it is a very open-ended type, it does not appear to be very fragmented/competitive. The protagonist slowly explores and studies the magic of this world and it seems quite interesting. Www

It's a very good book. Although the plot is a bit bland, it is still very enjoyable. The dialogue between the characters does not look awkward and is very pleasing to the eye. The protagonist is very good in life, has goals and is organized. The plot logic is smooth and full of details. The author is still very good. I saw this book on Tomato. It is really good. The above is just my personal opinion, don't refute me.

It's really good, and it's beautifully written. I remember it must have been five or six days ago. I was reading something else. Anyway, I had finished reading it at that time. This is the fourth to fifth time I have read it. The updates are so slow that I have to save for two or three days each time. Only if you dare to look, otherwise it will be gone before you see it.

The writing style of this article is really good. It is a daily HP magic novel with no obvious poisonous points. Unfortunately, in the vast number of uneventful chapters, readers may feel tired and bored, and lose the motivation to continue reading. Personally, I think this article is above average. I can't say it's brilliant, but I can read it.

Keep it up, at least the protagonist's character and plot arrangement are good. The background is Snape and Lily's generation. It's quite interesting. At least it is considered a masterpiece in Tomato. I will keep following it as long as I don't watch it. To be honest, at least until now, apart from being updated, there are no major shortcomings. This book is amazing and it can be considered a good HP fanfic.

It has a very interesting story background. Harry Potter already has a huge world background, and another world is being added, with an even larger system of calculation rules, etc. It makes my blood boil. Just watching the male protagonist chatting with Dumbledore gave me goosebumps. It was very enjoyable to watch.

Super nice novel! The main trio are also very cute! The jack-of-all-trades protagonist, Lily with high combat power, and the sunny version of Potions Master Severus, everyone has a bright future! The teacher must be updated to the age of children!