Luo Xiaohei, Hehe, I Must Live!

Hmm... Generally speaking, I feel that the writing is very good. I personally think it is very interesting, but I still want to give the author some suggestions (don't criticize if you don't like it) First of all, the part describing Blue Brook Town repeats a bit too much with the words in the comics. This may make those who have read the comics feel a little annoyed. I think the author can slightly delete the original words and add more scenes about the protagonist. Then, I personally hope that the author can write more descriptions about the release moves. I think this will make the content more vivid, but this is for reference only. The author will consider it ~ Finally, I always feel that the points are a little bit low. I hope the author can describe more about the protagonist, for example, he can beat up Naga later! Beat me hard! [Punch hard] Well, that's pretty much it, I hope everyone knows~ Ps: If you don't like it, don't scold me. If you don't like it, just pretend you didn't see anything~

Come on! If you can't write anymore, go watch movie 2! Just think it's for me! This book is a wonderful novel with exquisite creation, rigorous plot, and deeply touching emotions! ! ! In addition, I disagree with the idea of ​​eating unlimited meals. As we all know throughout the history of Kinmen, this social means should be used with the No. 24 Man-eating Tree. I believe that with the loving support of Laojun and Nezha, humans will be able to ascend to the spiritual world and defeat the righteous god of subspace. All in all, all in all, I love you 😘

It's good and interesting, and the author updates it quickly, at least one chapter a day. It's already very good among the fanfics I've read (this is the author's first book) ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

I found some novels from a lot of memes🤣

It's very nice, super nice, very modern, very funny, but the ending was a bit unfinished and I was caught off guard [crying] (hint: more extras, I beg you😭)

After I wrote it, I realized that just wanting to write was not enough. There are many, many things to learn. - Hayao Miyazaki

It's pretty, funny and refreshing. It's like it's a pity that there's no heroine.

Not bad, I'll have to look at it again before revising the rating

Aha: Hahahahaha, Aha highly recommends it.

I like this book very much

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Looks good, but a little short.

This is a good fanfic

Beautiful, the more you look at it, the better it becomes

Good, good, good, good

As a fan, you have to change, you have to refresh the new plot in a cute way! We need more drama and fun!

My family, I found another good-looking book called "I Eat Eat Eat Eat". I found a small amount of plot among a lot of memes hahaha

It's very well written and very humorous. Although it's my first time writing it, I really enjoyed it.

It's beautiful, one of the better books I've read.