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The male protagonist is a bit awkward One paragraph is too long, please divide it into more paragraphs The characters of Huang Yimei and her father are well created. I hope you can continue to write well. Good luck to the author.

Whether it's time travel or rebirth. Re-recognize myself in a strange and familiar environment, and find out who I am, who I am, where I came from and where I am going! It also highlights the illusion and reality of Huang Yimei (invincible charm)!

There is a strong sense of AI. Did Doubao expand every paragraph? [Awkward laugh]

In the early stage, the emotions were delicate, and the characters' personalities were very substantial. The plot did not follow the crowd and flowed slowly. The disadvantage was that in the early stage, there were too many emotions or interactions between characters, which led to the plot being dragged out. Now that I see it in the later stage, it feels much smoother. There are not so many descriptions. The look and feel is much better, and there is no need to skip the plot. It is a pure love series in female videos, and you need to watch it patiently.

The rhythm is very good, not rushed or slow, and there is no pretentiousness or rush when facing the immortals. Come on.

Not bad, you can take a look

I can accept the literary youth, but the paragraphs are too long, too long. The writing is really beautiful, I really like this style, but the text is too cumbersome.

Okay, I didn't expect that now that I have entered society, I can still recall the feeling of taking Chinese classes [laughs][awkward laugh]

The emotional expression is very good. The only drawback is that the number of words in each paragraph is too long, which can easily cause eye fatigue after reading for a long time.

The details are too delicate, and it seems artificial after reading too much, but the story line is not bad, and the author keeps working hard.

I like reading it, the text reads smoothly and the plot is touching.