Snowbound in the Deep Clouds

I have grown up reading this book. I have read the first three times. The author is very considerate and careful. He is a gentle novice. He also really listens to advice. If he finds something wrong, he will correct it. If it cannot be corrected, he will make a big change. Now he has changed 40,000 words, so you can rest assured. I personally feel that the author's writing style is quite good, and his accumulation of knowledge is also very profound. It would be better if the rare words could be given pinyin. I felt that the rhythm was a bit fast in the early stage, but I revised it in the later stage. The content is sweet, and there are many passages that really poked me. The characters in it are basically good babies. The master and apprentices, including the uncle who is currently appearing, all have their own sufferings, but they overcome them in their own way and influence the people around them and change each other. This can be reflected in the master and apprentice. I like Xiao Yunshu very much! Like it very much! A little bit of kindness from his master will make him happy for a long time! He is a proud puppy with low self-esteem! I am an unwavering disciple!!! In the words of Master and Ye Xiaowu, one of my favorite teachers said, "Love has no reason and does not distinguish between right and wrong. Even if it is wrong, it will be knowingly committed." They know each other's shortcomings and are willing to go out little by little for each other. They hold the hand of their lover and want to move forward. In their eyes, the other person will have a sense of accomplishment and be happy every step of the way! Finally, I would like to say something to the author. I hope the author is safe, happy and in good health. While ensuring the quality of the novel, you must also take care of yourself. I will be your most loyal reader. You deserve my best praise and I am proud of every step you take!

I have read too many articles about masters and apprentices, but most of them are about apprentices attacking below and committing crimes above. I accidentally saw this one about master attacking, and I jumped into the trap decisively. The first few dozen chapters were very interesting to me. The master's character was particularly touching, which made me feel inexplicably happy. At first, the master regarded the apprentice as his own property and imprisoned him in the cage he made for him, so that he could only rely on himself. Later, he found that he was already trapped in it and could not extricate himself. The author wrote the master's inner struggle and the tug-of-war between the two very well. However, many descriptions in the article are too repetitive, and in the middle and later stages, the relationship between the master and the apprentice is always close and distant, and the last layer of window paper can never be pierced. Maybe the author also wants to write that kind of step-by-step feeling, but it seems a bit too boring to me. I didn't read this article for a week or two, so I can't recall many of the insights I gained from reading it now 🤦

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good 😘😘😘

Nice! Very nice!!! The character of Master is so good, he is as scheming and gentle as a fox, and as affectionate and possessive as a wolf!

I won't allow anyone to see such a beautiful thing and I will push it! 😄😄

It's so beautiful, the story has a rigorous framework, and it reads very smoothly. It's simply a fairy tale.

A little bit bad

Recommended, good looking

The author has something 😳 delicate and overly natural, pure love God of War