Xumi Nine-Story Pagoda and the Light-Retracing Ring

I have read more than 500,000 words, and overall it seems to be a very stable derivative of Zhe Tian. The settings of protagonist Wang Zimo's light-tracing ring and Xumi nine-story tower at the beginning are not obtrusive, and integrate well with the worldview of the original Zhetian work, without forcibly changing the plot. He does not steal Ye Fan's core opportunity, but becomes a comrade-in-arms with Ye Fan. This independent growth line that is not dependent on the protagonist looks very comfortable, but the description of the practice in Lingxu Cave in the early stage is a little slow.

The writing style is above average, without fancy rhetoric, but the descriptions of battles and scenes are very graphic. For example, the plot of people aging in the ancient forbidden land and picking fruits on the sacred mountain can remind people of the atmosphere of the original work. The passage where the protagonist and Ye Fan discuss their spiritual practice experience is also very natural. It is not a forced CP, but a mutual inspiration between real comrades. This is very realistically written.

The overall reading experience is very smooth, there are no particularly big flaws, and there is nothing particularly surprising. It is a long-lasting read. The protagonist's cultivation speed is not a cheat. From opening up the sea of ​​suffering to steadily approaching the realm of the life spring, every step is foreshadowed. The help of the holy fruit and the divine spring is also in line with the logic of the original work. I just occasionally felt that the description of the protagonist's psychological activities was a bit too much, and it would be more compact if it was streamlined.

The growth line of the protagonist is very clear. From the beginning of suffering to the steady cultivation, every breakthrough is reasonable and reasonable. The comradeship with Ye Fan is not deliberate. It does not steal the spotlight from the original protagonist. Instead, it writes a new story in the original world view. The logic is online and the characters are vivid. It is not a brainless novel at all.

The protagonist's character is very likable, decisive in killing and low-key and calm. His unassuming personality is different from the protagonists of many cool novels. The main goal of finding the Nine Secrets and opening the Xumi Pagoda is clear, interspersed with plots of fighting ferocious beasts and questioning one's mind, which is relaxed and relaxed. The only drawback is that the supporting characters are slightly weak. The elders of Lingxu Cave and the disciples of Taixuan Sect have no memorable points. Most of the writing is focused on the protagonist.

My evaluation of this novel is: it is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. I recommend that friends who love reading give this novel a try. I believe you will also be attracted by its charm.

There is no tool man role. The logic is clear and not confusing, the settings of the Nine Secrets and Magic Weapons are reasonably developed, the writing is smooth and not stiff, and the reading is very smooth, without any awkward feeling of being forced to be happy.

It looks good, [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]! The writing is really good. The writing is beautiful and the plot is exciting. I must give five stars to support DaDa. I hope DaDa can continue to work hard [like]

It's quite interesting, but why are there so few people? Something's wrong [what]

Not bad, this kind of writing is not new.

The world view is really grand, and the author's main plot is also wonderful, with ups and downs!

It's very real, and it brings me back to the feeling of watching Zhe Tian, ​​although it's different from the main plot.

It's so cool. I haven't changed the main line of covering the sky.

The writing is quite good. Anyway, just read whatever suits your taste. It is really not easy to find a book that suits your taste in the vast sea of ​​books!

When the literature on cultivating immortals reaches the level of civilization's survival, the pattern opens up. Facing the ultimate threat of Guixu, the protagonist's choice demonstrates the unyielding dignity and glory of life in desperate situations.

Da Da perfectly grasped the balance between "feelings" and "innovation", which not only allowed me to relive the passion and emotion of Zhetian, but also brought a new grand pattern with "Return to the Ruins" and "Tinder Plan".

The plot is tense and relaxed, with the shock of Mars, the fame of the ancient road, the bloody battle and turmoil, the awakening from sleep, and the preparation for the war for thousands of years. The rhythm is very well controlled, and there are no peeing spots throughout the whole process, which makes people want to stop.

I was attracted by the cover. It's so beautiful that I couldn't stop watching it. The characters are very good and the plot is also very exciting. Can you please write more about it?

The world of this book is alive! Not only is the protagonist flesh and blood, but the growth of the Starfire Alliance and the alliance with the people of the Starskeleton make the entire universe full of vitality and details, making it full of immersion.