I Asked You to Play the Song of National Subjugation, and You Played the Torrent of Steel?

A novel is a novel, not a literary work. The most important thing is the three elements of the novel. You can have some embellishments, but not too much. For example, when the author wrote "March of Steel," he wrote half a chapter about a drumbeat. We are all ordinary people, and we just have fun reading novels on Tomato. Writing like you will prevent readers from feeling how mature or skilled your writing style is, and will only feel that it is too wordy and procrastinating. Another problem is that the system will erase the protagonist. This kind of system novel is mostly found in female pornographic novels, and is generally not welcomed in other types of novels, because most readers will unconsciously make themselves into the protagonist of the novel when reading the novel. Such a protagonist will only feel that he is being coerced and forced, like a puppet. There can be punishment, it can be social death, or some other punishment, but when it comes to life, this kind of time travel is better than not wearing it at all.

Except for Iron Torrent, why can't I find any other songs? Where did you find the author?

I agree with Xinghe Tangmian's view

Good luck to the good-looking author

Very nice, keep writing

Yes, but why no one