A Strong Man in the Ninja World, but He Has Always Been Beaten by His Mother

It's so beautiful and I love watching it. Every couple is so cute. Mom, this little Yu Lie has really become Xiao Yu's Bai Yueguang [Crying] [Crying] Quan Nai and Xiao Yu are also delicious. Tobijian and Xiao Yu's research on chakra makes them cherish each other. It's a pity that because of the hatred between the two races, Tobijian can't express his feelings (Tobijian is really a good man, I love him) Ban, rise up, I can't imagine the scene where Ban saw Xiao Yu coming back from the dead, it must be very delicious😋. An explosion of protectiveness and possessiveness Obito, please rise too. Although Xiao Yu regards him as Lie's substitute (actually not), I want to see "Who are you looking at through my eyes?", And I can't bear the pain because I want this kind of emotional pull [laughs] Kakashi, you should also keep up. Personal guidance from the reborn Xiao Yu is rare. Cherish it and don't let Obito steal Xiao Yu's attention. Yes, that's right, our Xiao Yu is the succubus of the ninja world. She is strong and beautiful, so beautiful and powerful. Who can see it without pity or wonder [][] tied it in one breath, it is so beautiful

The rice is so delicious, and the grandmother is very good. My favorite part is the scene where the protagonist is sad in front of his friend's grave, pinching the protagonist's face and roughly wiping his tears. This kind of widow's sense of betrayal in front of the grave is really refreshing [Like] [Like] [Like]

Woooooooooooo delicious. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooontdytle-doingsssssingssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss . . . The protagonist is also very strong. . The last few chapters of the first unit, give me the knife...! Looking forward to the Shura Field later! [Although I'm always in Shura Field] Yu kowtows with everyone, it's so delicious! Very good at writing! Hey, Memoirs of a Dead Wife! ! ! ! Resurrection my love! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm at it so far, I'm ranked number one the most! The shocking kiss before death, and the words he elicited later due to the system's [physical problems] were not as good as his hey hey hey hey hey hey hey. Needless to say, Madara's scenes made me go crazy and forget about love. . . In the end, they died like a couple dying in love! ! Izumi. . My cute tea-scented kitten. . . Tobirama,. Forget it but have to say it. . . Uhhhhhhhhhhh! Although unit 2 has opened a new vest, hehe, the power of grandma continues to activate! Although there is a new Obito, Kakashi. . . .，， At last! Modo Modo! So delicious! This is the first time I write a long review in so many years!

"The ninja world who definitely knows how to be a mom vs. The man who definitely doesn't want to be a mom"

There is no one in Hokage that depicts the best battles among foreign persimmons. The protagonist is strong but not cheating. There are emotional lines but not forced. Each emotional line is described. The protagonist's smile before revealing himself and the scene before Izuna Retsu's death are really tearful. Each scene is very delicate, not frivolous, inexplicable abstract, and has real own strength. Lie's death was so good that I cried and felt happy. I'd like Quan Nai to come back in the future😋 Moreover, the protagonist didn't feel cheated when he fought against an army of 40,000. It was really the result of the protagonist's hard work and efforts! ! Everyone will be well in the future! (Crying) I can't forget Sengoku F4. I can't forget Tobirama's sight and concern for the protagonist. I can't forget Izuna's death. I can't forget Retsu's kiss. Come back, okay? (Crying) The back is not as delicate as the front, which is weird

It's very original and the content is not boring. However, some issues still need improvement. The protagonist Yu is very vivid, but it feels like he doesn't want to really watch Naruto's time traveler. For example, he doesn't know about Black Zetsu. But Yu's death was very surprising. Tobirama's portrayal is also very good, but Hashirama is relatively unsatisfactory. Retsu's proportion is really large, while Izuna's is pitifully small, and it seems that it hardly affects Yi. Madara also thinks that even if Yi knows that the other person is not dead, it is normally impossible for him to have no feelings about his injury, right? 👀This is my own understanding, and the rest is for the author to fill in. Finally, I am looking forward to the follow-up, so don't stop updating! 👍🏻

One of my favorite articles ♥ The author reminds us mothers that the original intention of the character "Mom" is to make him loved by more people. He has his own will and is not a puppet manipulated by the plot. Family and friendship are indispensable bonds between people.

It is really a well-written fanfic. The protagonists, Retsu, Madara, Izuna and Tobirama, are all very easy to relate to. While the emotional development of the characters is not outstanding, the OOC characters are not outstanding. In my eyes, the characters' blood and flesh are written out. The development of the story is also relatively logical. While creating a new story, the author also retained the original major event nodes, so that he did not deviate from the main line and allowed his story to be expressed delicately. Random Thoughts: The chapter where Izuna and Retsu died was really brutal, and the protagonist's coma afterwards was also uncomfortable. The protagonist dies and Madara dies as well. Although they are all fake deaths in the plan, it is still quite embarrassing. Seeing this, I really feel that Hashirama is not a thing (is it putting the cart before the horse or is Madara and Yu not important enough). Uchiha, who valued love and justice, died in the hands of his best friend, and Yu, who guarded the flames and broke through the darkness, fell on the eve of dawn. I want to ask: Will Yu's identity return in the future? Will you continue to use it after returning? Can the recent ending be he? Although Dao's are attractive, I want to see them happy. I hope the author can continue to write well like he is now. I am really afraid that he will suddenly run away or end the story halfway through the writing. After all, most fan fiction is like this, but it is really rare to have a good writing style that is also to my liking. I hope the author will write better and better, and Yu and Uchiha will also get better and better.

Feiyu99! ! Feiyu99! ! ! ! 😭😭😭😭😭 Feijian, you must cling to Xiao Yu! ! ! The author's description of emotions is super delicate! ! I read the description of Tobirama and Yu over and over again! ! Especially when Tobirama met Yu's eyes on the battlefield and knew that Yu was an Uchiha. It's really cool! It's so cool! It's so cool! ! ! There is also Tobirama's shock and joy when he saw Yu using the space-time ninjutsu, and his regret and regret when he thought he had found his soulmate but found out it was an Uchiha. Senju and Uchiha are destined not to be close friends What touched me the most was Tobirama's shock, disbelief, and sadness when he learned the news about Yu's self-destruction. Although his heart was in pain as if it was being torn apart, he couldn't express his sadness because of his identity. Woo hoo hoo, I'm crying to death! ! So the teacher's grasp of emotions is really delicate! All in all, this is a good book! Xiaoyu has a good time with everyone! ! Of course, my favorite is Fei Yu. Because I like the kind of restraint, forbearance, twisting, entanglement, struggle, love mixed with hate, and the kind of emotion that cannot be seen clearly in one's heart! I think if they hadn't been born into naturally opposing families, they would have become very, very good friends. The bond that shouldn't exist has accidentally become a red thread connecting the blood of two people by a river. I'm really looking forward to seeing Yu's reaction after Tobirama is reincarnated by the dirty soil! Is it the joy of finding something lost? Or is it the anger and melancholy of being deceived again? Of course, the most important thing is to see how the author writes! Really looking forward to it! ! ! Author, please update! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Liehe and the protagonist are so delicious. I will always support this couple... I am especially curious whether this is a no cp or 1v1. The author's feelings are very delicate and I will directly tie them. Wow...

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I like Zhu Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so arrogant, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." His indignation will be beaten to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are very good!

It's very good-looking, very good-looking. I like the slightly curved feeling of a straight man, but I feel that the original character creation is a bit weak, especially Hashirama. Now it's a little boring, but it's also very good-looking^ω^ I'm looking forward to Madara's expression when he knows that the protagonist is still alive (reincarnated). Don't stop updating, don't stop updating, please

Ah, the smell of meat and rice is what adults should eat! It's a pity that there was no big Shura field in the end [cry] [cry] [cry] I think Black Zetsu should have just teamed up with the villains to open a Shura field [cry] [cry] [cry] I can't imagine how happy everyone would be together! [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] It is indeed a bit unexpected to become a god to protect the world, and the side story is also good. Madara should really go straight to it, and then directly extubate in order to prevent himself from aging. Tobirama's words of constant restraint are really good, sober and painful, it is very consistent! You should dare to attack decisively when you return to the field again. Without Shura Field, there will be a real storm and weep [cry][cry][cry] Be loved forever. If you don't enter, it's nothing but a close friend's kiss! ! ! ! !

The author writes very well, and the writing style is really good. I really like it, but after Uchiha Retsu died, his stamina was a bit too much. I really like the bond between him and the protagonist, and the protagonist's relationship with Obito later. Bai Yueguang is Bai Yueguang. I really like the character of Uchiha Retsu, but because of his too much stamina, it always makes me feel uncomfortable when I see the protagonist and Obito getting along. Naturally, I really like Uchiha Retsu. The author used simple writing to outline a character with flesh and blood and bright colors. The white and black little sun is only special to the protagonist. I like this setting very much, but because I like it so much, I hope Retsu is the most special. But when I see the relationship between the protagonist and Obito, I have to be moved by Obito. Obito is like a hot-blooded idiot. Rampage, but broke into the protagonist's heart, but the relationship between Obito and the protagonist always gave me a sense of familiarity. I found that I really can't forget Uchiha Retsu. The author really created it so well. I know Retsu can't be replaced. I hope he is the most special. But I also like Obito very much, and I don't want Obito to be wronged. But as a character who appears at the beginning, I support Retsu more, or support the one who is willing to do everything for him. The protagonist Retsu sacrifices everything, the little boy of the Uchiha family who is white and black. I know that maybe other characters can do this for the protagonist, but Retsu is Retsu, our little boy ghost Retsu. I am really happy to read this article. This is a very well-written Naruto article I have seen. The Sengoku chapter is my favorite, but the stamina is really too great, and there is no way to get rid of Uchiha Retsu's death.

It's great. I love watching it. I switched to two mobile phones to watch it in one night. It's so cool! It's been a long time since I've seen such heartfelt fan fiction [laughs] The description of the bond made my eyes light up again and again, and the writing style is so good!

I just finished reading the first unit. The author and teacher wrote it well. Getting along with everyone is also gradual. Yi and Lie did not expect that they would be stabbed again at the end [crying]. Although I didn't click on it at first because of the title, it turned out to be really good.

The plot attracted me to keep watching, and it turned out to be Dao... Dao... The abominable Black Zetsu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [crying] [crying] [crying], [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] Even after they kissed each other, the hero didn't even doubt it, ugh

Overall, the writing was enjoyable. The following are purely personal subjective feelings (it provides a reference for sisters to select articles based on their personal preferences/points of interest. If there is any disagreement, there is no need to specifically refute it. At the same time, [KISS] spoiler warning [KISS], the above is superimposed): Before Suspended Animation, the story about mammies was very good, the creativity and plot design were good, the Shura field and the inner descriptions of the characters were also good, the protagonist was very strong, and the part about the special physique was even more impressive [heartfelt]; After the suspended animation, things changed a bit. I know the author may have wanted to bring Kakashi/Obito into the Shura field, but the overall feeling of reading it was not as good as before. (First, I personally don't like the concept of reincarnation in suspended animation, and those who speculate that the protagonist is reincarnated do not think that the protagonist has the memory of the previous life... Because I subjectively feel that memory and body are indispensable for calibrating a person, and memory is more important, so when others treat the reincarnated protagonist, there is always a feeling of substitute literature, which is a bit uncomfortable, but the author gives There is no reason to have to fake death, so the family prepares meals according to the situation; secondly, the handling of the main plot and main characters is a bit awkward. The creativity is very good, but I can't think about it in detail many times, but if you just want to read the mama's story, it can be said to be of high quality; thirdly, sisters who can't eat physical sex should consider it carefully. The separation between yin and yang is really hurt [crying], Tobirama is really fragrant. Does anyone understand me [sending heartfelt]) Summary of belike: Before suspended animation, the content can be read over and over again. After suspended animation, I basically just jumped to the erotic plot to watch. It is a good book. Every book has its faults, but there are not many teachers who produce Xiangxiang Mommy's rice for love. I am grateful to the teacher for producing Xiangxiang Mommy's rice [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

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The CPs we can eat while reading this book include: Retsu × Yu Madara × Yu Izuna × Yu Tobirama × Yu Obito × Yu Kakashi × Yu Itachi × Yu Shisui × Yu. As well as Minato and Kushina's couple rice bowl, Madara and Izuna's brother rice bowl, Retsu and Obito's White Moon Stand sandwich, Obito and Kakashi sandwich, and the greatest! A Mo × Yu's great Narcissus! ! ! ! ! You can also eat some other things hehehehe

Good-looking, very good-looking, Lie is Bai Yueguang

Beautiful and delicious😋 Cold on the outside and hot on the inside, I'm a beautiful woman The arrogant, cold-faced, poisonous-tongued grandma We Lie is Bai Yueguangzhenggong [Like]

Really super pretty. The character design of the protagonist is also very good ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧The extra is really delicious, you can enjoy the delicious food like this 😋 It directly satisfies all kinds of hobbies, whether it is the upper year, lower year or narcissus, they are all particularly delicious ૮₍ᵔ⤙ᵔ ₎აThe male ghost puppy🐶 is also delicious! 😋There is a bit of passion in the book, which really impressed me xp😍I declare this is my favorite book! (=^▽^=) (OS: Even though I don't know anyone, I cook whatever I like...)

Okay, okay, okay√√ I don't really understand the changes in the protagonist's personality. I feel like he's not the same person before and after. But the overall plot is good√

I really like the author's description of the fighting scenes. It's very capable and graphic. The plot is reasonable and logical, not procrastinating and coherent. The emotions are smooth and well-written. The main reason is that the title of the book is really misleading. At first, I thought it was some kind of weird novel (don't scold me). I got curious and came in. It's actually very well written.

Really well written. I don't know who has the highest score. If I can give it 10 stars, I will give it 100 stars. No doubt about it! The emotions are particularly rich, and the plot description is particularly gorgeous. There is no cliché, and there are no retarded plot points. What may be a little bit poisonous is the protagonist's indulgence towards the people around him. But this also portrays the emotional aspect better (｡･ω･｡) The most giftable book on the tomato scale [laughing and crying]

Ahhhhhh! ! Author, you write beautifully and your emotions are so delicate! Author, I will follow you forever (♡⌂♡) It smells so good. I finally finished it. I can't let go. Author, I love your other book too. I must read more. Don't take a break (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging, can you please add Hatake Sakumo to the list? I really want to eat the father and son rice bowl [Adoration]

Well, it's probably just that she's pretty and Yu is cute, right? Yes, Yu is very cute. This Liebai is black. Tobirama: I will always keep an eye on you...👁️👁️Madara is a little bit royal. Yu, you are actually eating meal replacement. Just wait to be investigated! Looking forward to falling off the horse hehe [Adoration]

This book can be regarded as a heartthrob, but the main character has only had sex with his own doppelgänger from beginning to end. Anyway, the relationship is very complicated. I originally read him as a sweet story, but it turned out to be a bit sadistic. I thought they would be resurrected in the end, but the result was not (╥ω╥`) so read with caution.