A Gentle Joy

There are obvious traces of AI polishing, but I have to say that the subject matter is very creative and interesting. Although it is occasionally embarrassing to watch, I still want to know how the author will arrange it in the future, and hope not to be disappointed. However, I hope that the author can delete unnecessary words when using AI. For example, there is no need to keep "as if..." At the end of the sentence. I really don't understand the purpose of such superfluous descriptions. It is better to write it smoothly in vernacular. The reason why descriptions are needed, I think, is to enable readers to more concretely imagine. When you have a detailed enough understanding of what the author wants to express, appropriate blank space will be better! Personal opinion and reference To give you some barriers: There are traces of AI in many places behind the author, so it is very difficult to read. Many people have commented in the previous comments. I haven't seen the latest chapter yet. I am not sure whether I have listened to the suggestions of the previous people. I quite like the author's second world. It has made great progress. The AI part has been significantly improved. I am very honored to have my comments seen by the author (ꈍ ᴗ ꈍ). However, the first world seemed to have collapsed in the end and I couldn't understand it, so I jumped directly to the second world. There are not many updates yet, but I think it is good! The protagonist's personality has changed slightly, and we look forward to its subsequent development.

Very good writing, very novel plot, the author really writes well😭😭😭 Author, just go and get busy! I will watch the first small world by myself and appreciate it over and over again. I am not sad or lonely at all😭 (just kidding, I still focus on the present life!)

I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's quite well written. However, the whole article feels a bit depressing.

The author's character portrayal is very good. Every time I mention Wang Yixian, I unconsciously return to reality. It is really real and uncomfortable. I always can't help but feel sad. How many girls who have been let down in reality have asked themselves this sentence in their hearts: "When did people start to die?" I still can't let go and want to come back and add a few words. How many girls have forgiven those betrayals again and again because of their children and a series of reasons? After a real divorce, you have to face countless malice and difficulties. Why do girls have to make it so difficult (forgive me for being a very emotional person)

It's so beautiful. I ordered it randomly at the time. I didn't expect to find a treasure. OMG [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KIS S][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

The first world is really beautiful ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧The theme is also very novel, and it fits the image of a robot very well. The whole article feels like a daily article, but the plot advances in silence. I really like this kind of sweet cookie with long flowing water (≧∇≦)/

Immortal product! Based on the gentle running of the program, it gives a slightly suspenseful feeling. It looks good!! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out] After reading the introduction, I thought it was the kind of mindless post with questions. Although the actual content is not brain-burning, it can be said to be very logical. Very interesting!! Everyone comes to see [punch out][punch out] In the second world, she becomes a spoiled wife. The characters in the first world are more attractive if they are tougher. If they violate the procedures, they will become cold and cold. The second world has no human-machine feeling at all. The only advantage is that the speed of the car is relatively high.

It's pretty good-looking, Qing Qing is very charming, but there is too much intrigue between Gong, especially the two with the surname Qu. Everything they do makes people a little disgusted. Maybe it's because I personally don't like yanderes.

It feels so good to see me, so gentle and cute 🥰

It's good to watch. The first world is quite good. Don't be scared off by being married to a scumbag for 7 years. It's actually quite good to watch. From this angle, the subject matter is really good. . . . Due to my preference for robots in the first world, I think the issues mentioned in the comment section are trivial matters. The story between Shou and the scumbag is more like those "scumbag and cheap Shou" types in the early days. However, Shou is not a "cheap Shou". Shou changes "husbands" (real Gongs) every day. They are good, good and good-looking. The scumbag (Wang) gives people a very deep image. It is exactly like the old-fashioned feeling of having sex with others and not caring about "Shou". In the end, he repented and started chasing his wife in the crematorium. The image of Shou is cowardly and disgusting🤮