Meng Yan************

I really like the author's hard-core cultural heritage. The descriptions and comparisons of some scenes are so lifelike that it makes people feel like I am watching this scene. Maybe I have watched too many fast-paced variety movies. The author's description of Guan Guan has a strong sense of separation. The original Guan Guan has a cultured family background and ability, but he is still living in a small rental house. He clearly feels that 2282 does not pursue the plain and warm friendship she pursues, and refuses to leave. She obviously wanted to stay away from the social life of her original family, and because she and Meng Yanchen went on a blind date to go back to a familiar environment, they got together without a few paragraphs of description. They said they were young people, but it actually felt a little awkward. Qiu Yingying had conflicts with Guan Guan many times compared to the original work. Guan Guan was compatible with her (pity) many times. She tolerated her and felt more tired than the workplace, like a battlefield. I can understand the author's desire to describe the changes in Guan Guan's growth who lives in 2202. But it is clear that a capable family is better than the original work. I have the ability to live out on my own, but I have to suffer from tedious things every day. I am often criticized by Qiu Yingying's stupid logic. Maybe the author is describing that Guan Guan feels that the spiritual class is different, and he feels that he is being lowered by arguing with her. In fact, readers feel very frustrated after reading it many times, a very strong sense of separation. The only thing that makes me want to continue reading is that the author's writing is really good, and Meng Yanchen eats with Guan Guan. Being yin and yang by Sister Bai Zhou and Brother Jia Jia, Meng Yanchen defended these two points without hesitation.

Everything else is fine, and the author's writing style is also very good. I just don't understand why he should stay in Ode to Joy at all.

Can be seen. The relationship between Guan Ju'er and Meng Yanchen is more natural and smooth. Guan Guan's family background: The author has a large personal background, and has a very powerful family background! And this is the first CP fanfic I've seen featuring Guan Ju'er and Meng Yanchen! (PS: I unconsciously put the character played by Chen Yao in "The Story of the Rose" into Guan Ju'er, the cool beauty of Kochi) in this story. The Five Beauties of Ode to Joy, except for Qiu Yingying who left Ode to Joy, everyone got a very good ending. The author also added some other TV story characters, as well as more personal settings, such as Han Ting and Fang Xiaoran from "Asking the Heart" who are a couple, and Lin Luxiao from "You Came from the Fire" (Nan Chu also has a little plot). Everyone will be very warm and good friends! In the previous chapters, the author was not used to dividing it into paragraphs. Later, he probably realized that long paragraphs were inconvenient to read and solved this problem. So if you find it inconvenient before, you can look back later! It is true that sometimes there are too many details and psychological descriptions, and occasionally it feels like reading prose. If you prefer to read the plot directly, you can choose to skip reading at the right time, and it will not have much impact. However, through these psychological descriptions, we can indeed intuitively feel the changes in Guan Ju'er's whole person. She is becoming more and more natural and peaceful. There may be a bit of restrained loneliness at the beginning, but gradually the picture begins to soften due to the changes in her own mentality and abilities. So this article is actually developed more from Guan Juer's own perspective. I can really feel the changes in the plot through Guan Juer's state. The second half is actually a bit more of a group portrait. It feels like a very, very, very ideal state of friends. Everyone really feels like a family. Suitable for killing time in your spare time and reading before going to bed. (Finally! Meng Yanchen is really a great male protagonist! I am still obsessed with him! Different fans are obsessed with him and can't help themselves!)

Very beautiful, but when will it be moved from 2202?

I like this setting very much. Regardless of OOC, I just watch it as a new storyline. The only uncomfortable thing is that I don't know whether it's because I used AI or the way of expression is relatively fixed. It feels like the same sentence structure is used in every plot, which is a bit uncomfortable.

Great writing style

Beautiful, well written

I think it looks very good, the author writes very well