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[Thinking] The latter part is relatively better at the moment. (Currently updated to Chapter 53) However, I feel that although the previous part is quite true, some of the author's memoirs are not very clear in the way they are narrated. Even if it is a first-person limited knowledge perspective, it would be better to describe some relationships and emotions separately, especially the emotions related to the cinnabar mole. These narrations are mixed with Bai Yueguang's. It's not that I haven't made it clear, but it feels uncomfortable. I hope the author can revise the previous content after updating. Otherwise, I think it will discourage some relatively impatient people, and it is easy to lower the score and be buried. Of course, I hope the author will continue to work hard! The current rhythm is very good. Think about how the previously unmentioned content can be interspersed? How will the three main female characters unfold in the follow-up? (Personally, I think it might be the heroine, but it's important that the group portraits of each character are plump and three-dimensional!) I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Laughing out loud]

Youth is hidden in the evening breeze of the parasol trees, and my thoughts are buried in the depths of the years. "My Perfect College Girlfriend" written by Xi Mengyi breaks out of the stereotype of a sweet campus pet. With delicate and realistic writing, it cuts through the obsession, regret and tenderness of college time, and writes a long and affectionate youth love. The story slowly unfolds from the first-person perspective of Lin Xuan, a young man who fears society. All nine years of obsession are tied to Lin Qingci. Amnesia has severed the past of loving each other, leaving only fragmented memories of childhood happy friends and the warmth of long-term companionship. The sense of fate that love is sealed and separated by a short distance deeply stabs people's hearts. The gentle and persistent school girl Yun Siyu, the mired ex-girlfriend Zhang Xiaoyi, and the lively friend Li Xian, the group of characters are three-dimensional and full, each with their own unique story and regret, so that the plot is no longer limited to a single love, multiple lines are intertwined, and the sense of conflict and atmosphere are full. The writing is cool and delicate, without any exaggeration, and has a youthful and youthful feel. It vividly depicts the daily fireworks on the university campus, the clumsy heartbeat hidden in the heart of a young man, and the tangled struggle of not being able to love. Lin Xun's stammering and shyness when facing Bai Yueguang, his silent and forbearing preference, Lin Qingci's alienation and temptation after losing his memory, Yun Siyu's magnanimous and long-term silent waiting, every emotion is real and palpable, and full of empathy. The rhythm of the interweaving of sweetness and abuse is just right, including the tenderness of being alone in the library and an encounter on the street, as well as the heart-wrenching pull of the entanglement of the ex, the estrangement of memories, and the confrontation in the Shura field. There is no forced blood or sudden completion. It jumps repeatedly between regret and healing, advancing the characters' emotions layer by layer, with hidden foreshadowing. The plot reverses naturally, and the more you read, the more you get into it. This book is not only a chronicle of youthful love, but also a mirror that reflects the worries of youth. We have all been like Lin Xun, who has been obsessed with a person for many years, tossed about in regrets, and hesitated in companionship. Enthusiasm and restraint, miss and rush, regret and redemption are intertwined, describing the cleanest, purest and most difficult youth of a generation. It is gentle and healing but also has a sense of abuse. The atmosphere is awe-inspiring and full of stamina. It is suitable for readers who prefer campus redemption, slow and affectionate plots, and fatalistic plots. They can immerse themselves into this long and gentle youth encounter.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

The author writes very well, with delicate and sincere emotions. But for the heroine. I have some different views, and I feel like this timeline can be changed. Make it easier for this reader to read. Also, do you understand that I feel a little sorry for you? [Laugh][smile]

The picture is full of sense, very good, I like it

Chatting late at night, secretly falling in love, and making up, these are the feelings of youth. If you like campus literature, don't miss it. It's a good read.

So is it single or multiple?

The writing is really smooth and the details are well handled. I'm looking forward to it.

A very interesting and beautiful novel, worth reading.

It's so exciting. I recommend it to my friends to check it out and buy it.

It's a novel of decent quality. If you like Shuhuang, you can read it.

The plot rhythm of the novel is very comfortable, and there is a plot at the beginning

Tomato is a unique one, good reviews are given

It's beautiful, so beautiful that you can't stop watching it. I highly recommend it.

It's really attractive, I like it so much

The lyrical points are kept to the point without being overstated, allowing the readers to taste the energy for themselves.

The worries of a teenager, the anxiety about secret love, and the panic of falling in love are all written down. It is real and touching. The author's writing style is very relaxed. It is a good article.

The pure, two-way love story of youth is relaxing and healing to read, and has a strong sense of immersion.

It's great. I haven't read such a satisfying novel in a long time.

It's so beautiful that I couldn't help but give it a five-star rating.

It's so pretty, so pretty, I didn't expect to see such interesting young people in Tomato.

The writing is very good, the plot has ups and downs and is gripping.

It's great to watch. It's a really exciting plot. This kind of memory-like youth campus is really exciting.

I have been following it. The author writes very seriously, without the word "water"

It's really good. I thought it was some cool novel, but when I went in and took a look, I didn't expect such a wonderful youth story.

The writing is delicate and moving, and the characters are flesh-and-blood.

The characters are very well drawn, and the language, gestures, and psychological descriptions are all delicate and vivid.

The plot is good, the writing is excellent, and the characters are brilliant

The copywriting is good, the subject matter is good, and the writing style is smooth.

The characters are plump and three-dimensional. The author's description is spot on.