The Eleventh Book by Er Ge Er Ge

The writing is not bad, but there are a lot of poisonous points. For example, the ex-wife has been a husband and wife for a lifetime, so she shouldn't be left in the big pit of Li Chunsheng for the rest of her life, otherwise he will succeed sooner or later. That would be too poisonous. Let the ex-wife get some memory fragments from her previous life, and then become a nun for the rest of her life. And Su Sa, I flirted with you all the time, I gave you my first kiss, and the protagonist is with Song Youwei again. Does the author plan to have multiple female protagonists or just one female protagonist? I see that your attitude in the comment area is very ambiguous. I hope there will be multiple female protagonists.

The plot was okay, but the reviewers found it annoying that there was a scene where the ex-wife was almost insulted, and the person who insulted her was not dead yet, so the ex-wife's family fell into a trap and couldn't get out. The author wanted to compare the ex-wife and the protagonist after they were reborn, but it was indeed a bit too much. The ex-wife can only be said to be stupid, but It's not bad. Li Chunsheng is really bad. If you don't die, it will be very uncomfortable. The Xia family was very good to the protagonist in his previous life, but the protagonist seems to have no feelings. If you write that this family was not good to the protagonist in his previous life, then it doesn't matter how miserable he is in this life. Now it is the Xia family that is not good in the plot.

Brothers, I saw Chapter 56. It is true that there are many poisonous points, but the flaws do not hide the good points. I think it is still a great novel in general, not ntr, not ntr. Although the two poisonous points are very poisonous, the plot description is all online. When I look at it again, it is still too little.

I suddenly threw the bubble stone after watching it well, and my ex-wife was reborn. What do I want to do, sing a double spin?

Overall, this book is quite interesting, but I feel that the pace could be sped up a bit. My aunt has already given up on it, and the business could be sped up. After all, it is going to be bigger, and it is still just getting started.

I have one of the few good-looking and interesting period articles. The author should work hard. Who can read this? If foreigners see it, they will think we look down upon it.

There is nothing too exaggerated or outrageous, which is good. The plot unfolds slowly and the language is relatively plain. It is worth watching.

Is this going to be a harem story?! The plot concept is quite interesting. [Learned]

The ideas are clear and the writing is skillful. I hope you can keep writing and don't finish it.

'A good, good, good book to read.