I Have Never Seen the Ancients Before, and I Have Never Seen the Newcomers Since.

The author is really capable and writes crisply and neatly It's so long-winded before the game… The latest two chapters begin to bring wisdom Come on, just write like this, you will make greater and greater progress

It's very cool. Let's put aside whether it's logical or not. I have to say that the author knows how to feel cool. Please update more. I don't quite understand the purpose of having a plot where a little girl is recognized as having super powers. Is it foreshadowing? Will I start not eating beef later? Or is the protagonist going to attack this child? But should I say that the plot of the little girl discovering that she has magic is a bit blunt, and it was revealed inexplicably, and I was confused [laughing and crying]

It's pretty good, keep this rhythm, but the fun points in the later stages and the fun points in the middle need to be subdivided. For example, sometimes it depends on the protagonist constantly polishing himself and breaking through. Some of the cool points are that the protagonist relies on various technologies to improve himself and uses various genes and pharmaceutical injections. Some of the fun points rely on the skills honed by the protagonist. These are the cool points of this book, it all depends on how the author writes it.

Let's not talk about those people who eat and look ugly. It's easy for you to expose your secrets.

This is definitely one of Tomato's most enjoyable books. The author not only teases the protagonist, but also pays attention to a certain degree of logic and excitement. If this is a short and medium-length novel, it will definitely be satisfying. Long story is not enough

The content is really good, especially the part about 100 meters. If you stayed up late at night to read it, I suggest the author change the title of the book, because at first the title felt like a passing novel. Fortunately, I couldn't find the book to read in the middle of the night, so I clicked on it and read it. I retract my comments and add a girl who helped in the previous article. I don't understand why this girl is added in the follow-up. Sometimes there is no need for any foreshadowing. Just a character and a unique story appear in the picture. But I don't understand why the author adds this girl in the follow-up. Taking back the previous five-star review, after adding this one, the perception has dropped a lot. It would be best to change the chapter.

So pretty, so cool Sorry, if Jiang Tingyu is the heroine, then I will just eat a piece of it

I hope the author can work hard. It looks okay. Just don't create useless things. It would be good if the protagonist has horse spells. After all, the athletes who left have brought honor to the country. In the future, they can consider bodybuilding. It is comparable to Ronnie Coleman. I believe it will look good then. Football will also be fine. There is no one else to add this girl. Pure and redundant. The front is fine. Just skip to the back to watch. Finished.

Nowadays, there is a sports-type cool article. There is no pretense or slap in the face in the whole film. The level of coolness is ups and downs, one after another. There is nothing embarrassing, and the occasional small mistakes are not covered up. The overall plot has no logical conflicts, Without any forced pressure, huge water, forced shock, forced ridicule, If you do it well, things will fall into place, and you will feel good when you should. The summary is good. I personally judged it to be more than grain and grass.

Yes, it gives me a lot of satisfaction. I'm basically moving forward without any twists and turns. I hope I can stick to it. The introduction of that woman was a bit inexplicable.

Very good, very complete and refreshing article, not bad, not bad, the author is very good. But if this continues, it may become homogeneous, and we must find a way to change things. After all, long-form fantasy online novels will also have similar pain points, which is to keep copying and changing the soup without changing the medicine. But for now, at least four or five more can come.

The first impression is good. I don't see any particularly bad points. There are no vulgar plots for the time being. The characters currently appearing are basically normal people. The protagonist's current behavior is very decent. I'm waiting for the follow-up.

Okay, I've read your previous books, but this one doesn't require eunuchs.

The writing is quite good, Hajisaku [laughs], you must be an old guy who slipped over from somewhere, right?

An ordinary world, I thought it was just an ordinary world with the existence of extraordinary factors.

Although there is no very surprising content, it is still very good as a novel that can be read when you are bored in your spare time. I recommend it to people who are in a book shortage and can read it when they have nothing to read. If you follow the plot normally, the score should be around 8 points.

A very good and refreshing article, it can be regarded as a small masterpiece among tomatoes, thanks to me Sifeng😋 Don't talk about AI. Now the tomatoes are all AI. At least it looks quite comfortable. Although it is a bit poisonous, it is well covered up by the coolness. The flaws are not covered up.

It looks good, but I don't know why the author would add someone who knows he has extraordinary abilities at the end. It's quite baffling [smile]

Yes, it's very nice, but now it's always a matter in the sports circle. In the future, we can link up with the entertainment industry, such as talking about love with Da Tiantian, and cutting off Zhang Jike's

Come on author, your writing is really good, I enjoyed reading it. I specially give five stars to cheer the author on.

The author's attitude is not perfunctory. He has carefully checked the information and has his own considerations. The transition of the plot is also good. The most important thing is that the subject matter is very suitable for me [laughs]

Qualified Sports Articles

It feels ok, but the AI ​​didn't feel it. Maybe I turned the page too fast.

I'll wait for you to finish the marathon update and then read it. Remember to reply to me after the update [laughs]

Hahaha, it's fun to change flavors and see different types occasionally [laughing]

Overall it's pretty good, but there are too few updates and the progress is a little delayed.

This book must have been significantly revised, and the writing style is now good. This is a well-written pretense article, suitable for readers who like to read pretense, especially those who like to show off in front of others.

It's good-looking and a good sports article.

Good-looking, hot-blooded, and a great level of cheating! Highly recommended!

It's very beautiful. The author wrote it carefully.