Changing the World, Starting with the Horse Talisman

The author is really capable and writes crisply and neatly It's so long-winded before the game… The latest two chapters begin to bring wisdom Come on, just write like this, you will make greater and greater progress

It's very cool. Let's put aside whether it's logical or not. I have to say that the author knows how to feel cool. Please update more. I don't quite understand the purpose of having a plot where a little girl is recognized as having super powers. Is it foreshadowing? Will I start not eating beef later? Or is the protagonist going to attack this child? But should I say that the plot of the little girl discovering that she has magic is a bit blunt, and it was revealed inexplicably, and I was confused 😂

The content is really good, especially the part about 100 meters. If you stayed up late at night to read it, I suggest the author change the title of the book, because at first the title felt like a passing novel. Fortunately, I couldn't find the book to read in the middle of the night, so I clicked on it and read it. I retract my comments and add a girl who helped in the previous article. I don't understand why this girl is added in the follow-up. Sometimes there is no need for any foreshadowing. Just a character and a unique story appear in the picture. But I don't understand why the author adds this girl in the follow-up. Taking back the previous five-star review, after adding this one, the perception has dropped a lot. It would be best to change the chapter.

It's pretty good, keep this rhythm, but the fun points in the later stages and the fun points in the middle need to be subdivided. For example, sometimes it depends on the protagonist constantly polishing himself and breaking through. Some of the cool points are that the protagonist relies on various technologies to improve himself and uses various genes and pharmaceutical injections. Some of the fun points rely on the skills honed by the protagonist. These are the cool points of this book, it all depends on how the author writes it.

Nowadays, there is a sports-type cool article. There is no pretense or slap in the face in the whole film. The level of coolness is ups and downs, one after another. There is nothing embarrassing, and the occasional small mistakes are not covered up. The overall plot has no logical conflicts, Without any forced pressure, huge water, forced shock, forced ridicule, If you do it well, things will fall into place, and you will feel good when you should. The summary is good. I personally judged it to be more than grain and grass.

Let's not talk about those people who eat and look ugly. It's easy for you to expose your secrets.

So pretty, so cool Sorry, if Jiang Tingyu is the heroine, then I will just eat a piece of it

This is definitely one of Tomato's most enjoyable books. The author not only teases the protagonist, but also pays attention to a certain degree of logic and excitement. If this is a short and medium-length novel, it will definitely be satisfying. Long story is not enough

Yes, it gives me a lot of satisfaction. I'm basically moving forward without any twists and turns. I hope I can stick to it. The introduction of that woman was a bit inexplicable.

I hope the author can work hard. It looks okay. Just don't create useless things. It would be good if the protagonist has horse spells. After all, the athletes who left have brought honor to the country. In the future, they can consider bodybuilding. It is comparable to Ronnie Coleman. I believe it will look good then. Football will also be fine. There is no one else to add this girl. Pure and redundant. The front is fine. Just skip to the back to watch. Finished.