I've Already Been Killed, and the System Wants Me to Be a Magical Girl?

I really like the heroine's character. I haven't read the original work. I heard it's too bad. As expected, it's my fate not to read the original work but only to read the fanfic. The heroine is a very abstract girl. Her abstraction often makes me forget that she is a very good-looking girl, and the heroine really has a personality. And the first time I saw a spoiler about the mysterious incident in Cangnan No. 2 Middle School, it was based on the excuse that they were "pregnant". It was so creative! Ye Luoli and Zhanshen are also integrated very well. I feel that the setting is very reasonable. The ability to extract the fairies separately can prevent the fairies from conflicting. The emotional lines are also written very naturally. The heroine has not yet figured it out, but I am more in the cb direction. So far it is good. And I feel that the characters of fairies are not OOC at all. In Ye Luoli's case, some fairies do not like humans naturally. This is normal. The author's setting is very reasonable.

Damn, some of them are very well written, but they are very unfriendly to people who listen to books. The emoticons are really funny! I can't immerse myself in it for half a day before I can hear the drama, and Dada, well, if the author has something to say, please say it at the end, okay? Some of the psychological descriptions are really inconsistent. I listened to them three times intermittently. (I was really annoyed when I heard them.) [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] This is great, I hope this book will become popular [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Also, isn't it written about al-direction? Baili Pangpang likes Jasmine?

The writing is great, and the plot fits the settings of both sides very well. Here I will praise what I think is better. First of all, not all relationships between fairies in Wonderland are so good. Therefore, I hate writing the protagonist as an advanced group favorite, because it is simply impossible. Forcibly writing it out is equivalent to selling it on someone else's head. I just borrowed Ye Luoli's spell settings. Why bother? Each fairy in this book is written separately, so these problems are avoided, which is pretty good. The second point is the most important point. Many fairies actually don't like humans at all, or they don't like humans that much. The kind of fairy that writes the protagonist as the group's favorite, and still helps humans. If I hadn't actually read Ye Luoli's original work, I would have almost been fooled. The protagonist handles it better here. If you have to ask a fairy who doesn't like humans to help, it feels very awkward. Moreover, it is the protagonist who casts the spell, and he only borrows the spells from Ye Luoli's fairyland, which is good, as it can avoid the influence of fairies on human attitudes. In fact, the most troublesome point of combining Zhanshen and Ye Luoli to write this type of article is to integrate the settings of both sides. At the same time, it must comply with the settings on both sides. First of all, in terms of combat power, if it is not adjusted according to actual conditions, it will easily collapse. When the protagonist is weak, some spell effects in Wonderland will be restricted. At the same time, the advanced settings are more balanced. Therefore, some fairy spells must take this aspect into consideration and cannot be cast without any scruples. Secondly, there are many fairies who have no good impressions of humans. It is more in line with the setting for these fairies to choose not to help. Moreover, not all relationships between fairies in Wonderland are so good, so try not to portray group pets. It is unrealistic that everyone in Wonderland dotes on the protagonist. They themselves are dissatisfied, but they all come to help you. How can the protagonist be so dignified? Anyone who has carefully studied Ye Luoli's original work will feel awkward when reading this.

It's very interesting. In addition to the system, when I was threatened by the system in the past, I felt a little aggrieved. I also had to be cheated by the system and my body was gone. Originally there was no compensation or anything like that, but there was also a way to restore my body? But the author changed it, and there are no other problems However, it hasn't improved much after the change, because I don't know when the promised compensation will be paid.

The critical attack at the beginning is quite good, but then the plot is described in detail step by step. It just seems a bit bloated in a long story, but overall it is still good. This kind of fanfic should focus on the charm of the protagonist. Even if I want to write it, For group portraits, the protagonist should be slightly longer. After all, it is considered a fanfic. One experience card for seven days is quite a novel setting. You can skip Duoduo and add oc in appropriate places. There are too many assembly lines and the overlap with the original text is too high, so there is no flow of tweets.

It's a very interesting plot. It's fun to watch and the progress is fast. I like it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Look good, look good, look good, look good

Beautiful, highly recommended, very detailed description

Good-looking, I recommend it. It's a pity that it makes up for everything.

I really like Xiao Zizi's character, I love it so much, but it's just a little bit underwhelming.

It's really beautiful. The character of the heroine won my heart. [Adore][Adoration][Adoration] Heartthrob.

It looks good, mainly because it satisfies my fantasy about God of Killing and Ye Luoli.

The teacher's writing style is still great. This is my first time with this subject matter. It's very novel. Come on [Blow a kiss]

Dear author, your writing is so wonderful and beautiful.

This article really exceeded expectations! The character of the heroine is very vivid and three-dimensional, sassy and interesting, the character is not OOC, and the whole process is very comfortable to read. The subject matter and setting are also super novel, and there is no sense of violation at all. The writing style is very smooth, and the rhythm is just right. It can be seen that the writing is very careful, and it is so well written that it must be given a five-star rating!

It's really beautiful. The author must keep going (๑´∀`๑)

So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! The image of the heroine is also well created, and it's very enjoyable! ! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

It's nice to look at, but the fish's OOC is a bit serious Abuse! A little torture is good, the more torture the better, the more knives and sharp edges the better!

The author is Da Da. The male protagonists include Lin Qiye, Shen Qingzhu, Wu Quan, Wang Mian, Tian Ping, Moon Ghost, Whirlpool, Xinghen, Yang Jin, Cao Yuan, Bu Li, Wu Laogou, An Qingyu, Michael, Lucifer, Han Shaoyun, Zhou Ping, Guan Zai, Lu Wuwei, Mei Lin, Shao Pingge, Nezha, People in the Mental Hospital, Devil Squad, Heroic Spirit Squad? [Lick screen][shy]

Beautiful and interactive

This book is super beautiful! ! !

Super nice and abstract

Not bad, but Anqingyu is a bit OOC and feels bad about itself.

I think it's okay, so I'll give you 4 stars. I'm afraid you'll be proud of one more star. I just want to ask, I hope the main text is cp-free. I beg you, the main text must be cp-free. Also, since we are all in love, can we make girls like the heroine too?

It's super cool. Although it's a big update, it only adds two chapters a day. I hope it will start with ten chapters a day in the future.

Not bad~ The author is also very cute~ But I don't know why the rating is only 7 points~₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎

Super super super nice book.

Very nice, very nice emotional lines, very delicate, I like it

The characters are well created, the writing is delicate, and the heroine can be emulated very well, and the plot is very good.