[Farming + system + adventure exploration + no cp + tire wear]
There will be less farming content in the early stage! Prefer to upgrade to fight monsters
In the barren northern wasteland, the girl Leila is the daughter of a sharecropper who is stingy with bread. She has no mentor, no staff, and her only magic lies in a strange affinity for crops. When the empire faced famine and the mages above were helpless, Laila leaned down to the earth and injected life magic into the soil. The ears of wheat surged like golden waves, and the vines turned into emerald walls. She single-handedly transformed the wasteland into a mythical land of fertility, thereby announcing to the world that the first and only "farming magician" from the land was crowned.
This is my first time writing an article, I hope you all can support me!
Reader comments
Overall, it's very good [send my heartfelt thanks]. It's really awesome if it's your first time writing a book [laughs]. Come on! Come on! Come on! [Love]
Personally, I feel that the hatred and driving force in the writing are a bit thin (I hope my words will not affect the author's big ideas [love], it's just a personal feeling).
I feel that there can be more resentment towards the classes in this world and the inaction of officials, because the world is relatively equal in the past, and the different systems of the two worlds will definitely not adapt to each other, and there will be conflicts.
This is still a miscarriage, and I encountered a sudden disaster when I was a child. I can be more mature and bold, and I can add a little more injustice in the harm done by nobles to other ordinary people in daily life. At present, the society is generally relatively peaceful, but the magic, nobles, strength and weakness are also written in a strong way.
And what drives the heroine forward is just destroying her home, killing her parents, and hatred rolling in. I wrote this many times, and it feels like she can have different psychological makeup in different situations at different times. There can also be a mixture of various emotions such as fear and unwillingness, and finally the desire for power and becoming stronger, and gradually thinking more lofty, what do you want to protect, what kind of person do you want to be, and how do you do it.
The writing is good. But after assassinating the team leader, I feel that the heroine can draw her life force to kill innocent people indiscriminately? This involves my own poisonous point. But it's still a good write-up of 5 stars.
The author definitely has a talent for writing novels, and I hope to continue writing. It's more like an adventure novel than a farming novel. The protagonist's repeated aggressive adventures and rescuing people for no reason may be regarded as poisonous points, and we hope to improve it in the future. Even if it is said that the protagonist wants to form his own force, I think it is more reasonable. The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying the treasure. I don't believe that all those who receive help will not be stabbed in the back.
This book will definitely be a hit. The writing and plot are top-notch, and it's very interesting to read.
The plot is good and the writing is also very good. I like the character of the heroine's baby [Blow Kiss] Come on, author, I read this book blindly and I didn't expect it to be so good without making mistakes.
Well written! Like
There is very little farming content
Ten chapters a day, okay? Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this
Overall, it's very good [send my heartfelt thanks]. It's really awesome if it's your first time writing a book [laughs]. Come on! Come on! Come on! [Love] Personally, I feel that the hatred and driving force in the writing are a bit thin (I hope my words will not affect the author's big ideas [love], it's just a personal feeling). I feel that there can be more resentment towards the classes in this world and the inaction of officials, because the world is relatively equal in the past, and the different systems of the two worlds will definitely not adapt to each other, and there will be conflicts. This is still a miscarriage, and I encountered a sudden disaster when I was a child. I can be more mature and bold, and I can add a little more injustice in the harm done by nobles to other ordinary people in daily life. At present, the society is generally relatively peaceful, but the magic, nobles, strength and weakness are also written in a strong way. And what drives the heroine forward is just destroying her home, killing her parents, and hatred rolling in. I wrote this many times, and it feels like she can have different psychological makeup in different situations at different times. There can also be a mixture of various emotions such as fear and unwillingness, and finally the desire for power and becoming stronger, and gradually thinking more lofty, what do you want to protect, what kind of person do you want to be, and how do you do it.
The writing is good. But after assassinating the team leader, I feel that the heroine can draw her life force to kill innocent people indiscriminately? This involves my own poisonous point. But it's still a good write-up of 5 stars.
The author definitely has a talent for writing novels, and I hope to continue writing. It's more like an adventure novel than a farming novel. The protagonist's repeated aggressive adventures and rescuing people for no reason may be regarded as poisonous points, and we hope to improve it in the future. Even if it is said that the protagonist wants to form his own force, I think it is more reasonable. The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying the treasure. I don't believe that all those who receive help will not be stabbed in the back.
This book will definitely be a hit. The writing and plot are top-notch, and it's very interesting to read.
The plot is good and the writing is also very good. I like the character of the heroine's baby [Blow Kiss] Come on, author, I read this book blindly and I didn't expect it to be so good without making mistakes.
Well written! Like
There is very little farming content
Ten chapters a day, okay? Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this