Fatal Touch

Thank you for stopping here. Every reading glance is a spark that illuminates this story. The favor of five stars gives me great motivation; the reviews that do not reach five stars are the carving knife that sharpens my edge. Please believe that this world will only become more lush, and the story will not stop abruptly or end hastily. The thread has stretched to more than a million words, and there are more than 100,000 manuscripts in reserve to ensure that the writing is stable and the plot is coherent. Giving yourself four stars and leaving one star blank is not a shortcoming, it is a place reserved for future growth. It is left to the glimmer of light before dawn, to a chapter that has not yet been written but is destined to be touching. The night is not over yet, but the story is still long. I hope I will still be with you around the corner in the next chapter. Sincerely thank you for every suggestion from readers. I have carefully absorbed and incorporated it into my revisions. Now, not only has the work been successfully adapted into a short drama, but its cumulative reading volume is about to exceed one million! This result far exceeded initial expectations. While I was delighted, I also gave myself an encouraging star. Thank you again for every click and companionship!

After reading online articles for so many years, this book is the first to understand the suspense rhythm. The protagonist did not engage in those fancy cheat settings, but relied on detailed preparations to build up the tension - the clues buried in the first few chapters suddenly connected in the middle, and the goosebumps rose. There is no superfluous plot, the criminal investigation line is solid, and the villain's IQ is online. It is not the kind of routine story that can be seen at a glance. The only thing that I didn't expect was that Ma Baoguo would die because of the heavenly book in the end. At first, I thought that Ma Baoguo would provide a stable experience package to the protagonist like the settings in other novels. I can only say that the author's writing and imagination settings exceeded my expectations and 90% of the authors on the Tomato platform. An old bookworm has personally tested it. It makes people put down their mobile phones and want to review the plot. This book is worth stocking up on!

Looking at it so far, the quality is absolutely high even at the starting point. I hope the author can continue to polish the work with great care. Hope to become a god. The first forty chapters were originally well written, but you used the Heavenly Eye Sect to disguise your abilities. Once you attracted the attention of Chuangjie Technology, they would inevitably investigate your background, and then it involved your family, including your father, and the drop of golden liquid that you had been tracing. Then you associated it with your so-called Heavenly Eye Sect's magical power. This is an inappropriate suspicion. I can't stand it all of a sudden. I thought I could become a god. It would be a shame if it didn't turn around.

The setting of Goldfinger is novel and unique, the story is fast-paced and the writing is smooth, making it very enjoyable to read. Some details may be limited by professional knowledge and are slightly controversial in terms of scientific logic. However, since it is a work with Goldfinger as the core, it would be better to leave the setting to supernatural powers to explain more boldly, which would be more self-explanatory. Overall, these flaws do not affect the fun and completeness of the story. The more obvious problem is that in the early plot, the protagonist's words and deeds are sometimes slightly contradictory - he wants to keep a low profile, but can't help but show off his talents; he tries to portray a mature image, but occasionally shows too much youthful spirit, giving people a feeling of being young, slightly arrogant, and slightly disconnected. If the character's behavior can be portrayed more consistently, the overall look and feel will be better. Judging from the current layout and foreshadowing of the opening chapter, it is likely that the subsequent main plot will become more exciting and worth looking forward to. Read the book first, and then come back to catch up when it becomes longer.

This book is the least, and should not be less than 9 points. The overall layout, logic, and storyline are all top-notch choices. You will be immersed in it as you read it. Moreover, the author's writing skills are excellent, and he has a sense of a huge narrative that appears and disappears. Highly recommended by a thirty-year bookworm.

While listening to it, I saw the latest chapter. There was nothing serious about it, and the protagonist was decidedly not a virgin. What attracts me most about this book is the plot. The plot is compact and neat, and each link is connected with another. The author has a really big brain, so I look forward to the next plot [Thinking]

This new online work can be called a textbook of suspense rhythm. It does not equip the characters with sparkling "gold fingers", but uses the simplest details to build a suffocating tension. The first few chapters are still and deep, but in the middle of the chapter, there is a surprise. The foreshadowing of the past is actually connected at this moment, which really makes people's skin tighten. There is no redundancy in the whole article, the criminal investigation context is clear, and the villains are also impressive, which is beyond the comparison of ordinary assembly-line novels. The most outstanding thing is the supporting role of Ma Baoguo. His final death due to the Book of Heaven is really unexpected. I initially thought that he would be the ever-reliable "experience pack" beside the protagonist, but I never thought that the author would have such courage to break the rules. This is the excellence of this book and its rare charm. Highly recommended by old bookworms.

Once you open this book, you will never be able to stop. The plot is like pressing the fast forward button but it is relaxed and relaxed. From the suspense at the beginning to the reward at the end, every chapter grabs people to read on. The author's writing is so magical. There is no redundant description, but it can accurately outline vivid characters and immersive scenes. Reading it is like watching a movie full of pictures. The emotional portrayal in the book is particularly moving. The struggle and growth of the protagonist, the bonds and redemption between the characters are all so real that they can touch the softest part of the heart. I couldn't help but feel sore when reading the empathy points several times. What's even more rare is that the story not only has a wonderful plot, but also contains delicate thoughts about life. There is still an aftertaste after closing the book, and the more you read it, the more profound it becomes. Definitely the most amazing work I have read in recent times. The plot, characters, and conception are all impeccable.

This is the first time I have seen such a shocking plot, with so many ups and downs, that people watching Mission: Impossible were sweating. The macro of the plot is very huge, and the foreshadowing reveals that I feel like my head has been reorganized, and I can look at the previous plot from a new perspective. The roles that appear are reversed again and again. Every character left a deep impression on me, and I could understand each of their positions very clearly. It's so awesome, it's written. So dark, so human! ! ! Sometimes it touches my heart so much that I want to take a break, put down the book, and then come back to read it again, for fear that I will miss the progression of emotional foreshadowing! Read this book! Absolutely amazing! It sucks, run, run, I'm withdrawing my positive review, wc, go, everyone, don't be deceived.

This is a wonderful article with many unreasonable points, but it does not hinder enjoyable reading! The rhythm of the work is tight, the hooks are reasonably placed, the plot is tense and exciting, and the layout is reasonable. It revolves around the main line and develops branch lines, and the characters are successfully created. There are some flaws, but as a refreshing article, it is not a big problem. It seems that there is no brain storage place at the beginning, so just put the brain in the beautiful female neighbor's house! Looking forward to updates! Come on, author

The thinking is thorough, and it's so exciting to watch. There are some novels where the main character is just smart, and the supporting characters are as bad as dogs. This novel is different. The supporting characters are also as good as monkeys, so this kind of duel is very exciting to watch. I finally found the organization. Thank you, the author, for your hard work.

This is a rare good article among the many mindless and romantic articles on Tomato. The writing is average at the beginning, and the plot is a bit stuck, but the author is a talented player, and the writing becomes smoother and smoother. Worth a look.

One-sentence review: It's very beautiful, no peeing spots, and everyone is hungry. He wants to take revenge, and he has been a super-alien, Mission: Impossible, and a fisherman in a three-way melee. Sit back and wait for updates. It has already been rated 8.6 While still being serialized. Awesome!

Very good-looking, definitely written by an experienced author. The shortcoming is that the protagonist is not very powerful. If it were at the starting point, it would at least be a masterpiece.

A 10-year-old bookworm commented that this book is really great. The author's logic is clear and well-organized. I really like it! ! I have never seen a similar plot before, and it was not draggy at all. But isn't it a bit too cruel to torture the protagonist...

As soon as you step into this magical world, you will be firmly attracted by the magnificent world view. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to outline the magical realm full of fantasy. Every setting is self-consistent and full of ingenuity. The protagonist's growth line is not straightforward. In the collision of magic and reality, the pull between fate and self, the arc of the character becomes more and more distinct. The plot is ups and downs but not protracted, the foreshadowing is subtle, and the reversals are always unexpected and reasonable. The text is both graphic and appealing. When reading, it feels like experiencing the confrontation between light and darkness. It is romantic and beautiful, but also contains deep thoughts on human nature and choices. It is a magical masterpiece that makes people immersed in it and will be remembered for a long time.

The character of the protagonist is very in line with my taste. It has the feeling of going from immature to stable. In one day, I saw the latest chapter of Luo Luo Jie. The subject matter is also very novel. It also gave interesting insights into the reasons why the kung fu system that has been passed down since ancient times has become more and more depressed. Overall, I feel that it is a good book worth reading. But the first woman to have a relationship with is the Ninth Sister. I really didn't expect it. It's very good ~

After reading it for a long time, I finally finished it. Let's talk about the advantages first: it has a great imagination and a grand world view, just like the demon clan and world creation technology. Some of the settings of the mother tree are very novel and the conflicts between them; many characters are very three-dimensional, such as Su Qing who is resurrected from the dead, Yun Jiu who has an unclear position, Lao He who is both philistine and slick, but also loyal to the world, Jiang Xiaoqian who is kind and loyal, a genius and cold-blooded scholar, etc. There are also shortcomings, mainly in the protagonist. I feel that he is completely pushed. He cannot control his own destiny and does not have the excitement of a refreshing novel. Maybe the author did not want to write a refreshing novel. The growth line of the protagonist is very weak. Although the protagonist's strength is constantly increasing, he still cannot jump out of the chess game to complete the transformation from a chess piece to a chess player. The author's writing of logical reasoning is very poor and blunt, and there are many holes that have not been filled in overall. The author is too imaginative in some places, and I still need book friends to explain before I can understand it. To sum up, I think this is a good book. It breaks away from the pleasure of traditional cool writing and has a unique imaginative design that makes this book reach unprecedented heights. But some details are still lacking. Let's just say, has the author read "The Spirit Cage"?

Nice. The subject matter is novel, and the further you look at it, the better it gets. The first part is very good, but the second part is a bit unbearable. It's very boring. I keep going around in this circle. The main character is also of low combat power and can't be beaten by anyone.

It's beautiful, very beautiful, the pace is tight but the transformation is also very smooth. Write it well and don't stop updating it. Your book will definitely be rated 9.3 Or above. Go for it, author. You will be the leader of Gaowuxin in the future of Yangshi City. Please don't finish it. I support you.

I read it at the beginning. It's not cliché. I don't ask for good writing. The setting of the plot is exciting enough. It feels good about passionate youth. I've been waiting for a novel like this for a long time. If there is a similar one, can you recommend it to me? I also want to read some serious novels on Tomato, which dominates the brainless liberal arts examination.

This book is unique! The sense of immersion is very strong! The writing is also very delicate and the story is well connected! I really want to catch up! ! ! Come on! ! ! Author!

A very nice novel, a masterpiece among Tomatoes. The protagonist's personality is also very good

Fatal Touch, this book deserves a five-point rating for its two major strengths: The first and most important thing is the protagonist's quick wit. The author's sense of oppression in the dilemma and the description of the protagonist's ability to find a breaking point despite the dual pressure of the environment and psychology are beyond the reach of most cool novels. It's not that other authors can't write, but they can't write so well. The second is the author's imagination. Although it feels like he has written where he thought, I really like the unexpected progress of the story and the overall shocking feeling. But there is a problem that needs to be said: the logic of a small number of events is flawed. Overall suggestion: This book is worth reading when you are in a book shortage or have no interesting books to read. It is worth reading; however, don't be too fussy about it. The best reading experience is to follow the feelings the author wants to express, which is exciting and interesting!

Give four stars I can feel the author's care for this book. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I plan to stop reading this book. At present, overall it is good. There is no problem in giving it a 3.8-4.0 Five-star rating. There is nothing wrong with the plot, but there are a lot of things that I feel could be covered simply. I can feel that the author did not deliberately skimp on the number of words, but wanted to portray and shape the characters through side effects or narration. However, this operation made me feel particularly deliberate while reading, and this feeling occurred frequently in my impressions during the reading. During this period, I read a comment from a book friend: "It feels like it was written by a logical and rigorous student." I agree that the content is good, but the writing technique is still lacking. I see that the author has written several short stories and I don't know if he is still not used to long stories. Generally speaking, the reading experience is a little bit worse. This is a small flaw. There is nothing wrong with the content and it deserves recognition. Come on.

I really watched it all in one breath. It will be updated soon. It is really good-looking. There is no powerful golden finger. The unusual routine kept me guessing what will happen next. Every scene is written so that people can easily relate to it. He is not a pure good person but has a bottom line [blowing kiss]

I've caught up with the latest one, and it's a little boring. It's not a cool novel. Every time the protagonist uses his abilities, it almost always has the opposite effect. Every time he gets stronger, the enemy becomes stronger, forced, coerced, and now he has turned into a monster. I don't know what the plot will be like in the future. I hope it can treat the protagonist better. I like Jiang Xiaoqian. This girl is very suitable as a brother or a partner. Anyone who has such a friend is really lucky. She is the only one who is unconditionally good to the male protagonist. The other characters cannot be said to be bad, they are just not likeable. Now that I think about it, it was depressing for me. I don't know who the father of the hero is. I really want to see this part of the plot.

As a bookworm for more than 30 years, I have read both good and bad classics and passionate ones... Too many novels have whetted my appetite. Generally speaking, novels are basically forgotten after reading them. It is difficult to come across a novel that suits your appetite, has a good plot, and good writing, so I can't help but write a book review. If this state can be maintained, and the plot and fighting power will not collapse, then it will definitely be a masterpiece. Come on, author! Really great! I would like to make a small suggestion. I think the title of the book is still somewhat interesting. If you can come up with a title that is closer to the plot theme or more attractive, the score of this book will definitely be better.

It was one of the first recommended books in the past, but I couldn't read it until the author updated it. I went back to read the previous book The Legend of the Cultivation Assassin, and I have been keeping this book since then. The previous book The Legend of the Cultivation Assassin was also very good, except for the final ending which was a little sloppy and could barely be considered a masterpiece. The author is accustomed to constructing short stories within the existing narrative framework. The rhythm is tight, the writing is exquisite, and the writing power is amazing. He must be the pen of the author who has been writing pornographic articles for many years. The only suggestion is that the author has no expectations for jumping into the world. For example, he can vaguely mention some in the previous article. Appropriate descriptions can build the readers' preliminary understanding, which can not only whet the appetite but also enhance the coherence of the novel. But with the author's writing skills, I believe he can handle it well. All in all, I hope the author will not stop updating and keep writing.

"The End of the Lost Trail: Cause and Effect 404 (Sensual Seduction)" (original title "Fatal Touch") Analysis Outline and Content Detailed Explanation The "The End of the Lost Trail: Cause and Effect 404 (Sense Seduction)" you mentioned is a serial suspense work "Fatal Touch" by Tomato Novel contract author Shunlu Xianyu The core setting alias of "Sense" (also used as a name for multi-channel promotion), the work introduction, core tags, and author information completely match, and it has been authorized to adapt short dramas and animations. The following is a complete analysis outline and precise content breakdown based on the original content. 1. Core positioning and basic information of the work 1. Basic archive project Detailed information Original title "Fatal Touch" Author Shunlu Xianyu (a contracted writer of Tomato novels) Platform Tomato novels Serialization status Serialization in progress (updated to Chapter 492, 1.297 Million words) Core tags Non-traditional multi-element suspense, urban supernatural powers, high-level combat, espionage games, hard-core reasoning, thriller survival Core slogan He is the only tracker. Also, the only one to blame! Surviving a near-death situation to find a way out of the family, the fate of people's hearts is stacked on top of each other! . Breakdown of the core concept of the book title (the anchor point of the core setting of the original work) The keywords you mentioned in the title of the book are all the core world view and ability settings throughout the entire work. The precise correspondence is as follows: Core keywords Breakdown of the connotation of the original setting Core role of narrative Seduction of senses (fatal touch) The core ability system of this work, the core ability of the protagonist. The full name is "Seizing Perception and Trajectory". The basic form is: through body touch, it seizes the traces of biological perception, action trajectories, memory fragments, and causal connections left on the target object; the advanced form can interfere with the target's five senses, predict behavior, and even trace broken causal lines. It is also the core carrier of the horror, excitement, and reasoning logic of the entire work. The core cheat finger that runs through the entire work promotes the detection of all cases and the advancement of the main plot, and is also the source of the protagonist's "tracker" identity. Causal 404 is analogous to the Internet's "404-Page does not exist" and refers to abnormal events/areas/individuals where the law of causality is broken, the trajectory cannot be traced, and the rules of the world cannot be included. All people or things whose traces of existence are erased and the closed causal loop is broken will become "Causal 404", which is also the core source of the strange events and villain's conspiracy in the entire game. Establishing the core framework of the world view, all unit cases and main plots revolve around the "Cause and Effect 404 Incident". The end of the trajectory is the ultimate proposition and the end of the main line of the story. One refers to the final destination of all "Cause and Effect 404" individuals whose tracks have been erased; the other refers to the core truth of the "Causal Experiment" that led to the disappearance of his father and the protagonist's ability; and the third refers to the end point that the protagonist will eventually reach to break the fateful closed loop. Anchoring the main line direction and carrying the ultimate suspense of the work, the forbidden path of cause and effect refers to the forbidden path that breaks the rules of cause and effect in the world and forcibly traces/interferes with the broken cause and effect line. In order to find his family and uncover the truth, the protagonist finally embarks on this path that is not allowed by the rules of the world and is destined to bear sin, corresponding to his identity as the "only sinner". The core source of the sense of fate of the work, the core carrier of the arc of the protagonist. 2. Complete world view setting The work adopts a dual-layer world view of "surface reality + underlying causal rules", integrating multiple elements but being logically self-consistent and without a sense of separation: 1. Surface world: modern urban background, with Linhe City as the core stage, the normal time and space of ordinary people's lives, and the existence of all individuals is anchored by "behavioral trajectories, social relationships, and causal closed loops", which conforms to conventional physical and social rules 2. Underlying rules: The essence of the world is composed of countless "causal trajectory lines". Every behavior of every living body will leave a traceable trajectory line; once the closed causal loop is broken and the trajectory is artificially erased, a "causal 404" loophole will be formed, breeding abnormal events and abilities. Core power system: - Chuangjie Technology: The core villain of this game appears to be a top technology company, but is actually the initiator of the "Cause and Effect Track Experiment" back then. It has been looking for and capturing individuals with the ability to "seize senses" in an attempt to control the rules of cause and effect and realize ulterior plots. - Xuanhe Organization: A mysterious force that is both good and evil. Most of its members are survivors or victims of the experiment. They have various powers. They are hostile to Chuangjie Technology and will use the protagonist for their own benefit. They are an important player in the main plot. - Official special department: a secret agency responsible for handling various "causal 404 abnormal events". It investigates the protagonist in the early stage, and becomes the protagonist's ally in the later stage, promoting the narrative of espionage wars and criminal investigation lines. 4. Core survival rules: Individuals who forcibly interfere with the causal line and create "Causal 404" will be backlashed by the rules of the world and gradually erased from their existence. The protagonist with the ability to "seize sense" is the only one who can trace the broken causal line and complete the closed loop without being instantly backlashed by the rules, that is, the "only tracker". 3. A complete analysis of the core ability system (sense seduction/fatal touch). The ability settings of this game are deeply bound to the plot and characters. There is no sense of suspension. Each ability use comes with a price and plot advancement: Basic ability: The basic passive ability of the protagonist Gu Yian in the hypermetabolic perception state. The brain can enter the "hypermetabolic state" at critical moments, infinitely magnifying the details of the surrounding environment, and instantly completing logical deductions, vulnerability capture, and risk prediction. It is the basis for the protagonist's hard-core reasoning and high-level fighting. Side effects: Brain overload will cause extreme physical exhaustion, requiring continuous replenishment of sugar and energy. Excessive use can lead to temporary blindness, fainting, and even being backlashed by the rules of the world. . Core ability: Seize the sense (fatal touch) The core setting of the whole game is divided into four advanced stages, which completely fits the growth line of the protagonist: . First level: trajectory tracking (beginning - early stage) basic form, touch any object, you can capture all the sensory traces, action trajectories, and breath characteristics of the creatures that have touched the object, and accurately lock the target's location and action route. In the opening chapter, the protagonist finds the missing cat through a yarn ball and locates the missing girl through photos, which are all basic uses of this ability. 2. Second level: Memory reading (mid-term) ability is advanced. Through touch, you can capture the memory fragments left by the target, perceive emotions, and even restore the complete scene at the time of the crime, which has become the core method for the protagonist to solve unsolved cases and reveal the truth. At the same time, you can seize the opponent's perception and predict their next move, forming an absolute advantage in the fight. 3.3. Third level: The ability of causal interference (middle and late) is deeply awakened. It can forcibly interfere with the target's causal trajectory through touch. For example