Beautiful Straight Man, Bewildered by Kissing the Abstinent Savior

The emotional line is not bad, and the characters of the two protagonists are very cute, but the plot line feels that the positive side is too constrained, the general environment is very passive, and there is no one who can make the villain not dare to cause trouble, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch...

It's super good-looking. It seems like the emotional line is quite long (I usually don't like to read this kind of thing), but the plot of this book is very interesting and immersive. The characters are very vivid and it's fun to be the protagonist.

Fragrant! ! ! What a fragrant rice! Teacher, I will always follow you! This article is mainly about double strength. There is no sub-CP in it, so feel free to eat it! The young couple is so sweet! 😋😋 Reading your novel is a hearty and memorable feast of words. Your brushstrokes are delicate and agile, and the narrative is relaxed and smooth. There is no deliberate embellishment, but every word touches people's hearts, making the story vivid and moving. The characters in the painting are flesh and blood, with three-dimensional and full personalities. Every smile, every word and every action is vivid on the page, as if they are standing in front of you, making people unconsciously sympathize with their joys and sorrows. The plot is well-conceived, with hidden foreshadowing and natural twists. It is both unexpected and reasonable, making people deeply immersed in it as soon as they read it and reluctant to put it down. What's even more rare is the warmth and depth hidden in the words. There is no piling up of exaggerated rhetoric, but it can use plain language to outline all kinds of situations in the world, convey sincere emotions, see the true feelings in the subtleties, and show the profound meaning in the plain. Every chapter is full of skills and every paragraph is full of ingenuity, which shows your profound writing skills and sincere original intention of creation.

It's very interesting. This is the first book that I have read endlessly. It's very novel, the setting is super novel, and the two characters are also very interesting. The only possibility is that Zhengfang has too many restrictions. I think the author can relax a little more, Zhengfang's restrictions, otherwise sometimes it will be a bit frustrating. This way it will be better. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

It's so delicious... It's really delicious... It's a buried book. It's really best to follow the author's advice and not read it before or after meals (I've been honest) The rhythm of the whole book is really good... Everyone had such a hard life in the past, so the daily life in the extra chapter seems very delicious. After reading the whole book, I don't expect anyone to have a happy life. I hope everyone can live a good life, and the young couple is also delicious. The love that goes in both directions is really good. I am willing to make changes for each other, even if the lines will always be together. I wish the young couple will always be sweet and sweet, hope everyone will have a good life, and finish with flowers!

It's so painful to follow the serialization. It's almost equal. I really want to take a nap and read the second part immediately. I like this book so much. I don't have the patience to read any book lately, so I just skip it. In particular, there are many unlimited streams where the protagonist's gold finger is very open, and it becomes really boring after watching too many of them. The protagonist of the wife is very reasonable. She has a golden finger but relies more on her own intelligence and agility. She also has a very upright outlook on life. The relationship between Gong and Shou is amazing. They are two super complementary people😭😭😭😭 and they will soon lead the human race in the novel towards a bright future. I also like the copy very much. I feel it can make people think a lot, and the other supporting characters are also very real and vividly portrayed. They are not just tools to promote the plot. Sometimes when I think about it seriously, the real world is very similar to the game world in novels... Although the world is terrible and there are many selfish people, there are still many people who are working hard for the future of mankind. I really like my wife's writing. I will always follow my wife [crying] [crying] [crying]. She is simply my main focus on writing.

It mainly focuses on dual-power unlimited flow. The setting and overall structure are very good, and the writing style and characters are also very good. Some small holes have been dug but not buried, but it doesn't have much impact. The description of the dungeon is relatively simple and the pace is relatively fast. It feels like it could be a little deeper. Gong is super super super charming. His face that is so perfect that even games prefer it is just one of his most unmentionable advantages. He has a cool, calm, indifferent and powerful way of being able to be alone and leading others. You can protect yourself in the game, improve your quality of life within your own capabilities, and lend a helping hand to others when you can. He has a strong but soft heart, and can even tell props and dolls to be careful not to get hurt. In a game where dangers are everywhere and people are unpredictable, he can make many true friends, and the NPCs in the game are more patient with him. But he is not the Holy Father, and he will not be soft on those with malicious intentions. Really charming personality. As for the love line, the character of the savior is indeed admirable, but falling in love with such a person is really a bit tiring. Gong is not straight at all, he is very proactive and always guides others. Gong didn't always have the upper hand. In the early stage of Gong, he competed with others in dungeons and worked hard to grow up. Even if he doesn't receive points, he still has the ability to earn them. Gong obtained the forbidden area props and was notified that he was a target. Shou said that he would protect Gong and asked Gong not to leave him. However, Shou felt uncomfortable when he was betrayed. Shou went to church and felt uncomfortable and asked Gong to go back on his own. The back guard didn't protect Gong well. If Gong hadn't had a golden finger, he would have died. I can only say that Shou is indeed good at attacking, but it doesn't have the feeling described in the introduction.

It's a very good Infinite Flow [crying] [crying] [crying] It's not very scary, and there are so many twists and turns... Everyone has a very distinct image, and the supporting roles are all very heart-warming [crying] Hoshito, Bai Linsheng, Mirror of Life, Summer Solstice, and even Brother Hu and Cheng Uncle... Oh, my heart aches when I see it. I always feel like they need a better ending. [I'm about to cry] I can't stop doing group photos for the rest of my life. It's very touching to see these people selflessly dedicating themselves to others one after another... The young couple is also very sweet! ! ! Oh, the sour feeling in the middle of the awakening period, the young couple must be 99! ! ! Also: Can you please ask for a supporting role in the extra story? [Crying] The two brothers stabbed me to death, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

The writing is very good. He's setting is very attractive. He is inspirational and does not want to enjoy too much. Only by touching love and desire can he maintain a firm heart and save more people. When he meets someone who can attract him, sometimes he doesn't know what he is doing at the first time. The contrast is very good.

It's so good to watch. It's a masterpiece of Infinite Streaming. Those who love to watch Infinite Streaming Two Guys are in luck. The plot is exciting and the world view is complete. The plot development is not delayed. The little succubus x the ascetic priest are set in a fairy setting. It's so delicious. It's useless to say more. Everyone, hurry up and watch it.

The attack should be regarded as the Chaotic Good or Lawful Neutral camp. In the early stage, it is a bystander's mentality. Most of the content is about attacking and passing dungeons with others. The career line is quite smooth and the comfort level is not bad. However, the human lawful camp is quite aggrieved, fighting both internally and externally. Those who care about this may feel a little aggrieved. The character design of Shou is quite interesting. I haven't seen this kind of savior Shou with self-destructive tendencies in a long time. Even if he is tempted by the attack, he still wants to restrain himself, struggling and sinking at the same time. It's delicious. The logic is a bit off in some places. Come to think of it, give me five stars to encourage you.

First of all, I wish the young couple to be together for the rest of their lives. Here are some of my thoughts. The author's emotional line is written very smoothly, and it is a very natural and sweet novel. It is not embarrassing and has no bloody plot. At the same time, there is no problem with the relationship between the young lovers (I have always found the treasure-hunting and the treasure-receiving to be cute). There are basically no surprises in the emotional line of the full text, so those who want to read sweet stories can rest assured. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧ Then the biggest problem in reading the whole book is the description of the copies. The average one is 11 chapters. The design of many copies of the author is very interesting, but it may be the first time for the author to write this kind of subject (or maybe the focus is not this), and the copies are really short! ! ! ! ! The plots of some dungeons in the early stage are very rough and pass by. Sometimes if you read it quickly, you basically have no memory of the dungeon. The description of the dungeon is boring and not scary. Most of the dungeons are the key plot points proposed by Zongbao at the end (but I don't know how he knew about it). There are no suspense points. There are too few descriptions of the clues in the dungeon. The author can fully expand the description. If the description part of the dungeon is more brilliant, it will be shocking and delicious. But if you just read this book as a sweet story, it's totally fine👌🏻. The little couple is very lovable and really cute. Let's stay like this for a long time⌯･3･⌯ಣ Finally, the author writes better and better

It's good to watch. It's good to watch. It's good to watch. It's my favorite book. Its plot setting is really nice. The emotional line is relatively slow, but I like it. It's like a kind of fish, swimming slowly and then quietly floating up. It's not abrupt. I really like their characters. , Hehehe(＠^∇^＠)ノ, despite the low rating now, it's really beautiful, I can't describe it in words＼(^ω^＼)

A very fresh and refined two-male protagonist unlimited flow, especially delicious! ! ! It's written in big letters (*ෆ´ ˘ `ෆ*)👍The growth line of attack in the early stage is the main one, which is really a perfect combination of two strengths. After the dungeon is completed, some emotional scenes between the male protagonists will be interspersed. I think the portrayal of supporting characters is also good. Some supporting characters come off the production line quickly, but I feel they are quite three-dimensional. And how delicious the New Year and the New Year are~ The abstinent New Year and the beautiful New Year And the setting is quite novel✨, the nine palace setting. You can read the article to understand. What you all wrote is great, I hope it can be published in detail I love you so much ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

But it's really good. Each dungeon is full of ideas. The first part was crazy, but the second part felt a bit bland. It ended all at once. The big boss was shocked when he was solved, and then he was offline very quickly. The reason for betrayal was also mentioned in two sentences. Woohoo, you quite like the big boss. And I thought the forbidden area would be very dangerous, and then I saw the little girl holding the doll again after I started to break through the level, but it turned out that it was gone, and I didn't elaborate on it [crying]. The villain group was also wiped out very quickly. One second they were jumping up and down, and then they were gone after a quick brush (of course, it had been planned for a long time for the mirror) And now I'm still a little curious about what Ningyou and Wen Ping (that's Wen Qilin's father) said, and what was the deal between them? I always thought that Ning You liked Wen Qilin, but later on Wen and Chu Tianlu got together, and they were directly opposed to Ning You.

The relationship between Jiang Heng and Helisis is a long-term one. It is natural and will work out naturally. They are equals. Jiang Heng loves life and is sober. Helisis is a savior just as Jiang Heng described. He is upright, selfless, self-denying and respectful. Both Jiang Heng and Helisis are very good people. (Please forgive me for my lack of words, I cannot describe one ten thousandth of them) The other characters are three-dimensional and unconventional. All in all, I really like this book! ! ! Worth recommending! ! !

Most of the first half is related to the written copy. If you have a baby who prefers to watch emotional dramas, it is recommended to start reading from the later chapters. This article is a post-year article focusing on very delicious [shy][shy][shy]

Ok, it's also very good-looking. Well, I stayed up late to read it. I feel that the author has reached a state of perfection, so I will directly give the author a big thunderous blessing and wish you one, one, two, two and four!

It looks good, the appearance description is very good, and the plot is also good. I really like the characters of Hyuk and Jiang [love] [love] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] I like the author

Perfect ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Super pretty! Super pretty! ! ! Beautiful in every sense of the word! ! ! Although the volume is a bit short, it is a very complete book. The world view, logic, emotions, and character creation are all very mature. Oh my god, I love Jiang Heng Helixis's interaction. It has such a cool setting and a good-looking plot.

Coming from the author's last book, I will continue to support the author. Come on, author!

Personal evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it (what the author wrote is still acceptable) I was attracted by the introduction. I like the character of the protagonist very much, but I have only read less than half of the book. What I feel is that there is too much description of the appearance of the protagonist. I know he is beautiful and handsome, but Infinite Flow does not need so much description of appearance. I prefer to read the plot, not the eyes of the protagonist. If there is so much description of appearance because of the need of the plot, then I can't say. The plot and characters of this book are still great.

It's very beautiful, and the dungeon is also very interesting. Jiang Yan's tail setting is delicious, but it disappears after the dungeon is over, emm, but it really feels like a cat and a butterfly. Hebao is the priest who suppresses desires. Hehe, the author writes it very well. I recommend it! ! !

Beautiful! Emotions also progress step by step, dungeons also progress step by step, and Xiaoheng's abilities are constantly getting stronger. Xiaohe is a person who has been planned by his parents since he was a child. He is a saint, but a person with principles. It can be said that he is a very brave person, and he has always been a pioneer and pioneer. Overall, it's very nice and worth seeing.

I was so absorbed in reading it that I forgot to rate it. Just one novel aroused my interest in Mugenliu. The character design is very good! ! ! I finished the chase in one go, the characters are very touching, and my heart warmed after watching the extra episode. No matter what the ending is, they will be each other's destination. Please stay happy forever! ! ! I enjoyed watching the specialness of the two protagonists towards each other! ! ! This is destiny! ! ! [Lick the screen] Emotional lines are interspersed in the plot, and the long-lasting feelings arouse the interest of reading further. Each character is perfectly shaped and more realistic. The characters are depicted with flesh and blood, and the characters are three-dimensional. The settings of the Nine Palaces are very novel, and every character There is no pure good or evil, they are all pursuing their own pursuits, but the methods are different, which makes people feel quite emotional after reading it. [Working on manuscript] [Working on manuscript] The author's writing style is also very good. Some copies silently reveal the darkness of reality and the psychological activities. I feel so happy to read it! ! ! Xiaojiang and the priest please live happily ever after! ! !

Awesome, I really love it! ! ! The logic, plot and character design are really amazing! ! ! Damn, I confess my love for you! I really love it! ! ! The two babies are so awesome, they are really jumping on my xP! No matter which world line they are in, the two little treasures will always meet and fall in love. It is so beautiful! ! ! I hope the young couple can be together happily forever! ! ! !

Only then did I realize that the social beast and the Buddha fell in love on the bookshelf was also a great work [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] I read the two books without knowing it. I liked all the books and it was so suitable for my taste. Overall, there were no surprises and I could not overthink it. I also hope that more people will read this book and eat the fine chaff as soon as possible hahahaha

It's good-looking, the plot is compact, the characters are interesting, and the protagonists and supporting characters are all intelligent.

Very delicious, I really like this setting