[No cp] [Micro abuser] [Fixing mine points, plot, regrets] [Added settings, but based on the original world view] [Complete the world view] [HE? ]
Alastor: I like watching him break defenses, it's a lot more fun than watching other people suffer.
Charlie: Although he always avoids group activities and wanders alone in the shadows, I believe he will be redeemed!
Vicki: He deserves a second chance.
Angel: Someone who blushes is much more interesting than a cold-faced lizard.
Hasker rub: Like a layered cocktail, with the upper layer pretending to be sweet and the bottom layer being truly bitter.
Neferti: He is helping me conduct the Cockroach Chorus! Although I vomited halfway through the command...
Lucifer: Interesting soul cocktail... But since he didn't ask, I can't be bothered to tell.
Vaux: Useful employee, but always unplanned. Every word that came out of his mouth sounded like a strange expression.
Valentino: Don't mention that bitch! Just hearing the name makes me wonder!
Velvety: He is very straightforward, but his dressing sense is really disastrous.
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Reader comments
They say mud can't hold up a wall, but I never feel bad about myself. I just blame others for not supporting me hard enough. As long as you hold it hard, you can definitely help it up. Then again, the mud is so good, why are you helping him?
......... I was in a bad mood and felt better after saying this.
What was the original intention of writing this book? What was the inspiration? How to achieve HE with such a "dark" theme? What does the salvation of hypocrites mean? What is the most evil seed? Will you continue writing? What is the meaning of if line writing? Want to change the plot? How to change it? What is the basis for writing your current book? Will the story end in season 2? Can I dance most of the time?
1. The original intention is to write "my own" story.
2. Inspiration is the "experience" of blood in life
3. Non-traditional HE (?
4. His redemption is unconventional and full of intense pain. Only after experiencing one or more mistakes or regrets do people feel that they have been involved in the matter, and only then do they know how to achieve "redemption" through "correcting mistakes"
5. It will appear in the later stage, the core of the story, and the main text has not appeared before.
6. Yes
7. "Just feel good and that's it" (no). Satirical to reality. Increase interaction. How would they fare in another world?
8. Change
9. Mainly correct loopholes to make your reading more coherent. But what is bound to happen and seriously affect the main line will not be changed.
10. Based on the pilot episode + season 1 + season 2 (+ the author's interpretation for all readers). Therefore, if there are any differences between the third and fourth seasons that are significantly different from the author's, please regard them as my personal creations.
11. If there is any, and it is very different from the plot (setting) of the third and fourth seasons, a parallel world will be opened on the original world line and a new chapter will be opened.
12. Jump without contact. The emotions of the characters are based on daily interactions.
13.……
There are other questions you can ask on this thread, but those involving spoilers will not be answered.
I have been reading this book for two months, so I would like to post a review. I really like the author's book.
What impressed me deeply was the emotional scene between Cat and Spider, which was very delicate.
The protagonist has a dual personality: one is gloomy and world-weary, while the other is lively and gets into trouble. He and Alastor have an unknown hatred, and he and 3v have some intriguing mutually harmful relationships. The sadistic protagonist, the story is both sharp and sweet, and the writing is superb, making people laugh and feel sad at the same time.
The plot has now reached a relatively climax period, and blind guessing will produce a huge turning point.
The if line is super sweet, who knows? It allows you to understand another development of the protagonist in the parallel world, the extreme tension between Lao Yue and Lao Ah, the writing is very tense!
It's quite interesting. I suggest the author strengthen the protagonist's strength.
Among inn fans, this is a hidden treasure. There are no forced plot transitions, the details are handled naturally, and the writing is very online. What's more, the author updates the article very frequently, and the if line is very delicious. I'm looking forward to the prologue or other extras [blowing kiss]
Originally, I was intrigued by the protagonist's world-weary character who has no regard for his own life. After all, I really can't resist this kind of illness. Later on, the plot deepens and I gradually look forward to the direction of the story that will be changed because of him. The author's writing is online and the description is very delicious😋. It's delicious for me. It's so satisfying for this sadist.
The writing is excellent/the subject matter is fresh/the characters have no OOC and the overall quality is high. It is a rare high-quality Hell Inn fanfic, but it did something that I am quite outrageous about.
In the chapter 59 Space of Consciousness, Samuel proposed the hypothesis
If angel steel can crush all souls, then the souls of angels and demons may be "equal". If so, how can angels arrogantly kill in the name of """ and "Great Purge"?
The author should want to integrate the plot of vvn to point the contradiction to heaven, or to ridicule heaven, and also make the protagonist more similar to Allah because they are essentially the same kind of people.
But I don't like it very much. The word "why" is sarcastic or I really don't know, but I am more sarcastic, but they are not equal in themselves.
But most of the demon-slaying angels just follow Sera's orders. They don't understand the ascending system of heaven and hell. In their eyes, the souls in hell are unforgivable sins. If we ordinary people realize that smart people like Yormuir can't think of this, how can we not think of it?
I think maybe the words after equality can be removed, and I won't explain too much [Salute]
I dare say this is the best fanfic I have read so far! It's really immersive and the content is also very valuable. It doesn't feel anti-social. It just reflects reality. The if line doesn't ruin the character at all. Xiaolu's promotion is completely acceptable! And the main character is really cute. ˃ʍ˂Muir is also so cute. I don't know why it's not popular. Anyway, you should watch it more and more🥺🥺🥺🥺
He turned around——
——Then he saw it.
How would Samuel describe that moment?
Alastor stood there.
Standing in the doorway of the phone booth.
He didn't know how long he had been standing there.
Alastor said nothing. He smiled. He didn't move.
Like a carefully carved stone statue that has been waiting for thousands of years.
The moonlight leaked from the edge of the clouds and fell right on his face. That face was still handsome, still gentle, still wearing his usual, impeccable smile.
But his eyes.
Yomuel saw it.
The pair of eyes that should have been blurry in the darkness were now emitting an extremely weak but unmistakable scarlet light.
No, Alastor smells like a man. [Smile] It killed me! [Petrochemical]
Author, your book is the most beautiful book I have read in the past four years. It is the most beautiful book and the book that best suits my needs. It does not seek speed or high quality, but only requires continuous updates.
Thank you to the author. It turned out that I suffered from demon body, origin stone disease, Pamish infection, rainstorm syndrome, vocal cord infection, collapse syndrome, abstraction, money infection, radiation infection, cyberpsychosis, fear of poison gas inhalation, homesickness, urban disease, distortion, slow shock, living in a household, anentropy, witch transformation, madness, Honkai disease, loss of control of extraordinary beings, hypothermia, card. Germs, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, parasitic infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life program corrosion, subspace corruption, Moon Mania, I feel so good after reading your novel, can you update one more chapter?
Lu Tui, after reading so many inn fanfics, this ala makes me not feel OOC at all, and unlike other fan fictions that ignore ala's asexual setting and add some inexplicable emotional lines, Lu Tui is very friendly (especially the if line Xiaolu and the bond between the prisoner), Lu Tui expressed that he is very satisfied after reading it, and strongly recommends it!
Please! Is it okay to update ten chapters a day? I really didn't expect it to be so beautiful, and I really didn't expect it to be so little. I beg you, I beg you, can you be more diligent? Please, please
It's well written, and it's rare to see a Hell Inn fanfic that doesn't involve pornography T T. The writing is okay, and the characters are well drawn. In my mind, it ranks among the top Hell Inn fanfics, but the side story is too long. . . Although the extras are also delicious, I still want to read the main story.
Ahhhhh! This book has a high status in my heart, it's very interesting! I like it very much! I hope the author will not stop updating [Adoration]
Good looking toot Good looking toot
Ok ok ok
Not bad, the plot is very interesting, please continue to work hard!
It's very, very beautiful, and I highly recommend you watch it! The plot is really interesting! It would be a pity not to read such a beautiful book૮₍♡♡₎ა
I actually forgot to rate it again. Uh, I'm so angry. It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful.
I really like the author's writing style
The author's writing is really awesome. Klass
Thank you for watching ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧, the author, please give it a try! !
They say mud can't hold up a wall, but I never feel bad about myself. I just blame others for not supporting me hard enough. As long as you hold it hard, you can definitely help it up. Then again, the mud is so good, why are you helping him? ......... I was in a bad mood and felt better after saying this. What was the original intention of writing this book? What was the inspiration? How to achieve HE with such a "dark" theme? What does the salvation of hypocrites mean? What is the most evil seed? Will you continue writing? What is the meaning of if line writing? Want to change the plot? How to change it? What is the basis for writing your current book? Will the story end in season 2? Can I dance most of the time? 1. The original intention is to write "my own" story. 2. Inspiration is the "experience" of blood in life 3. Non-traditional HE (? 4. His redemption is unconventional and full of intense pain. Only after experiencing one or more mistakes or regrets do people feel that they have been involved in the matter, and only then do they know how to achieve "redemption" through "correcting mistakes" 5. It will appear in the later stage, the core of the story, and the main text has not appeared before. 6. Yes 7. "Just feel good and that's it" (no). Satirical to reality. Increase interaction. How would they fare in another world? 8. Change 9. Mainly correct loopholes to make your reading more coherent. But what is bound to happen and seriously affect the main line will not be changed. 10. Based on the pilot episode + season 1 + season 2 (+ the author's interpretation for all readers). Therefore, if there are any differences between the third and fourth seasons that are significantly different from the author's, please regard them as my personal creations. 11. If there is any, and it is very different from the plot (setting) of the third and fourth seasons, a parallel world will be opened on the original world line and a new chapter will be opened. 12. Jump without contact. The emotions of the characters are based on daily interactions. 13.…… There are other questions you can ask on this thread, but those involving spoilers will not be answered.
I have been reading this book for two months, so I would like to post a review. I really like the author's book. What impressed me deeply was the emotional scene between Cat and Spider, which was very delicate. The protagonist has a dual personality: one is gloomy and world-weary, while the other is lively and gets into trouble. He and Alastor have an unknown hatred, and he and 3v have some intriguing mutually harmful relationships. The sadistic protagonist, the story is both sharp and sweet, and the writing is superb, making people laugh and feel sad at the same time. The plot has now reached a relatively climax period, and blind guessing will produce a huge turning point. The if line is super sweet, who knows? It allows you to understand another development of the protagonist in the parallel world, the extreme tension between Lao Yue and Lao Ah, the writing is very tense!
It's quite interesting. I suggest the author strengthen the protagonist's strength.
Among inn fans, this is a hidden treasure. There are no forced plot transitions, the details are handled naturally, and the writing is very online. What's more, the author updates the article very frequently, and the if line is very delicious. I'm looking forward to the prologue or other extras [blowing kiss]
Originally, I was intrigued by the protagonist's world-weary character who has no regard for his own life. After all, I really can't resist this kind of illness. Later on, the plot deepens and I gradually look forward to the direction of the story that will be changed because of him. The author's writing is online and the description is very delicious😋. It's delicious for me. It's so satisfying for this sadist.
The writing is excellent/the subject matter is fresh/the characters have no OOC and the overall quality is high. It is a rare high-quality Hell Inn fanfic, but it did something that I am quite outrageous about. In the chapter 59 Space of Consciousness, Samuel proposed the hypothesis If angel steel can crush all souls, then the souls of angels and demons may be "equal". If so, how can angels arrogantly kill in the name of """ and "Great Purge"? The author should want to integrate the plot of vvn to point the contradiction to heaven, or to ridicule heaven, and also make the protagonist more similar to Allah because they are essentially the same kind of people. But I don't like it very much. The word "why" is sarcastic or I really don't know, but I am more sarcastic, but they are not equal in themselves. But most of the demon-slaying angels just follow Sera's orders. They don't understand the ascending system of heaven and hell. In their eyes, the souls in hell are unforgivable sins. If we ordinary people realize that smart people like Yormuir can't think of this, how can we not think of it? I think maybe the words after equality can be removed, and I won't explain too much [Salute]
I dare say this is the best fanfic I have read so far! It's really immersive and the content is also very valuable. It doesn't feel anti-social. It just reflects reality. The if line doesn't ruin the character at all. Xiaolu's promotion is completely acceptable! And the main character is really cute. ˃ʍ˂Muir is also so cute. I don't know why it's not popular. Anyway, you should watch it more and more🥺🥺🥺🥺
He turned around—— ——Then he saw it. How would Samuel describe that moment? Alastor stood there. Standing in the doorway of the phone booth. He didn't know how long he had been standing there. Alastor said nothing. He smiled. He didn't move. Like a carefully carved stone statue that has been waiting for thousands of years. The moonlight leaked from the edge of the clouds and fell right on his face. That face was still handsome, still gentle, still wearing his usual, impeccable smile. But his eyes. Yomuel saw it. The pair of eyes that should have been blurry in the darkness were now emitting an extremely weak but unmistakable scarlet light. No, Alastor smells like a man. [Smile] It killed me! [Petrochemical]
Author, your book is the most beautiful book I have read in the past four years. It is the most beautiful book and the book that best suits my needs. It does not seek speed or high quality, but only requires continuous updates. Thank you to the author. It turned out that I suffered from demon body, origin stone disease, Pamish infection, rainstorm syndrome, vocal cord infection, collapse syndrome, abstraction, money infection, radiation infection, cyberpsychosis, fear of poison gas inhalation, homesickness, urban disease, distortion, slow shock, living in a household, anentropy, witch transformation, madness, Honkai disease, loss of control of extraordinary beings, hypothermia, card. Germs, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, parasitic infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life program corrosion, subspace corruption, Moon Mania, I feel so good after reading your novel, can you update one more chapter?
Lu Tui, after reading so many inn fanfics, this ala makes me not feel OOC at all, and unlike other fan fictions that ignore ala's asexual setting and add some inexplicable emotional lines, Lu Tui is very friendly (especially the if line Xiaolu and the bond between the prisoner), Lu Tui expressed that he is very satisfied after reading it, and strongly recommends it!
Please! Is it okay to update ten chapters a day? I really didn't expect it to be so beautiful, and I really didn't expect it to be so little. I beg you, I beg you, can you be more diligent? Please, please
It's well written, and it's rare to see a Hell Inn fanfic that doesn't involve pornography T T. The writing is okay, and the characters are well drawn. In my mind, it ranks among the top Hell Inn fanfics, but the side story is too long. . . Although the extras are also delicious, I still want to read the main story.
Ahhhhh! This book has a high status in my heart, it's very interesting! I like it very much! I hope the author will not stop updating [Adoration]
Good looking toot Good looking toot
Ok ok ok
Not bad, the plot is very interesting, please continue to work hard!
It's very, very beautiful, and I highly recommend you watch it! The plot is really interesting! It would be a pity not to read such a beautiful book૮₍♡♡₎ა
I actually forgot to rate it again. Uh, I'm so angry. It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful.
I really like the author's writing style
The author's writing is really awesome. Klass
Thank you for watching ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧, the author, please give it a try! !
So pretty, full marks! ! ! ! !
Nice! Come on, author [like]
Needless to say, it's super pretty! ! !
The writing is good, worth reading
Alastor is so handsome [angry]
Very interesting novel
Not bad, it's my favorite type
I kind of want to eat narcissus [blowing kiss]
The writing is super delicate.