Peninsula: Meeting Across Time and Space

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I have followed so many Korean entertainment novels, but this theme struck me as the only one that stuck out to me. The setting is really novel, and I really enjoyed reading it! My suggestion is that the author appears because of the children, write more parent-child activities between children and parents, use children who have traveled from the future to advance the plot, write more about variety shows, TV shows, movies and life in Korea, and intersperse some Chinese entertainment. I hope it will be mainly Korean entertainment. After all, I am writing about Korean entertainment. I hope the author can keep this rhythm and write well.

I registered an account specifically for commenting. First of all, the narrative is very novel. The protagonist's identity as an immortal cultivator, the child's parallel time travel drama, combined with the introduction, it is almost a fun family ethics drama. It can even be adapted into a short film to replace real people. Secondly, the description words are very good, and the scene description is very good. When reading a novel in this kind of place, you don't want to see undisclosed scenes, but you want to find more explicit and exciting scenes on your own. It's subtle enough and the words are accurate. Some novels are almost up to date and still use ambiguity to describe pink bubbles. Finally, the compactness was too low, so I basically just brushed through it, especially the Love Sect part. The interweaving of Korean entertainment and Chinese entertainment is very suitable, but in reality, there is no need to write several chapters for a few hours of scenes. If the author is familiar with China entertainment, he can focus on China entertainment, and the Korean side can be used as an interlude. If you still want to write about Girls' Generation, you can focus more on the interaction between the children and several members. Basically, the advancement of the plot can be driven by the child falling from the sky. It is expected that when the final answer is revealed, the children from different parallel time and space will force their father to open a harem for the happiness of their aunt and mother. By the way, in view of the description of the inertia of the timeline, the main plot is still recommended to focus on the peninsula's fight against the girlhood era, and the inertia of Function and Crown. This generation of girl groups is more topical. The ups and downs of Girls' Generation, Crown and Function have a lot of conflicts, which is particularly suitable for expansion.

What I've watched so far is okay, but the plot of SNSD is a bit lacking. I still prefer to watch the interaction between Taeyeon and her daughter. I would also like to write more about SNSD and Korean entertainment, and the interaction between Korean entertainment and domestic entertainment. I think it's a very interesting book with a novel subject matter. Why are there so few people reading it? Now that it has been hastily finished, I still feel that it is not finished, the ending is not perfect, and a lot of foreshadowing is useless, but compared to the break, this kind of bad ending is not unacceptable. 2026.8.7 1:09

Anyway, I feel quite satisfied

It's not bad. It's very imaginative and interesting. Keep writing.

What can I say about this? It's quite fresh. At least I'll wait until it's over to see how many kids come back. [Think]

Just write about Korean entertainment, it gives me a headache when I read it inside the band 🐟

Korean entertainment is just Korean entertainment, plus internal entertainment, making it nondescript.