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The author can seriously accept readers' opinions and modify the plot. It deserves a 5⭐ The red flags discussed in the comment area, such as the scene where the female protagonist pretends to be a male and female couple at the beginning, and the CP of Aoyagi No. 1 Have all been deleted. The author's humble attitude makes me feel that she is worthy of being a female author. She is generous and humble. I still remember that I once made a comment on a male up's video because I mispronounced a word, and he immediately got angry and pulled me out. This was so disrespectful and judgmental. Moreover, I also read the author's previous articles and found that the new book is obviously improving in terms of words and core ideas, so I am willing to support more such authors, and hope that such works can be made into short dramas, instead of flooding the market with male-oriented scripts.

It's pretty cool. The level up and the male protagonist's favorability have increased very quickly. There is currently no plot to abuse women. The highlight is that there is a plot where the heroine and the hero pretend to be a couple, and the romance is adulterated. Although it is not much mentioned, there is actually no need for such an arrangement. In a novel with a heartthrob heroine, there should be no audience for knocking off the boy. Another weird point is that the deputy CP was too unresponsive. At the beginning, the man seduced the heroine and wanted to be accepted by the heroine. He thought he was a one-shot heroine, but suddenly he and the heroine fell in love with each other. The perspective of the female supporting role is also awkward, just like taking over. I originally thought I could bear it by skipping it, but as a result, these two scenes have become more and more frequent. I'll wait and see, fearing that the trend will be wrong in the future. According to the sister who commented on the review, the author changed the article after being persuaded. The male and female couple changed it, and the sub-CP was deleted. I haven't re-read it yet. I'm afraid that people will miss it if they don't read the review. So I'd like to add that you can read it if you don't mind. The female protagonist's food is still very good, and the male protagonist basically gets it for free.

It is suitable for real heroines to watch. There is no spoiled wife literature, it is a purely enjoyable version, and there are no surprises. The pull between the heroine and the male protagonists is very exciting. The heroine always occupies the dominant position. There is no frivolous plot and the fragrance of meat is overflowing. Some details in the article, such as "boy", "virgin" and "girl", etc., Deeply impressed me. The female protagonist is career-minded, while the male protagonists are love-minded.

I want to watch it, but I'm so surprised by the sub-CP, especially the man who is the sub-CP is still the heroine's pet. Didn't he find ways to be the heroine's pet earlier? Why is there a cp? It's so hard to beat, but I really want to watch the heroine 1Ⅴ6. I just want to see the heroine. I can't forget the two sub-CPs. Who is still stressing, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

A very beautiful story about a female protagonist [Sending Hearts]. The author uses words that are precise and non-degrading to the female protagonist. Female-oriented novels. I really like watching this kind of heroine who is dedicated to cultivating immortality. The male protagonists all have their own merits, but the female protagonist is the backbone and is an example that men from all walks of life should follow [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss] I hope the author's rating will be greatly improved! ! ! Come and support everyone! ! ! Big cheers to the author! Not enough to watch

It is very good-looking, with more than 120 chapters. There are currently no surprises. The wording is completely female-oriented. The heroine is very subjective. The emotional part is very accurate. The writing is slightly weaker in terms of cultivating immortals and upgrading, but overall it is very good-looking! The low rating seems to be a deliberate bad comment from the bro or the rating has just been opened. Good luck to the author👏

It looks great, and there are no more surprises now! Everyone likes it very much, just like this excellent graduate heroine who seems to be sentimental but is actually ruthless. [Send Heart] [Send Heart] contains various vocabulary about equality between men and women, which is also very good [like], and I prefer the heroine to be emotionally dominant. The female gaze angle also pokes me, men also have the power to be beautiful!

Nice! I originally thought that the male protagonists would be reborn to take revenge on the female protagonist, but in the end they were all in love and excused themselves. At chapter 40, the female protagonist has already slept with the two male protagonists. A super cool story, with a great heroine, and a fairy tale.

Delicious! If you like this kind of perspective of appreciating the male protagonist, a grown woman cannot wrong herself, not even a little scheming. And eating meat is unambiguous, it should be a big deal ´༥`The emotional lines of the supporting characters are basically covered in a few words, it is a bit subtle but okay, it does not affect it, it is experienced from the perspective of the heroine, so it is not objectionable. It's a very cool female-oriented perspective, with a clichéd library and a powerful figure. The elders and possessed souls don't deliberately emphasize their gender. It was so cool to find out later that they are women. The author will update it soon! Don't be tired and don't rest.

After reading it, I commented that the writing was smooth. I have always been worried that the strong woman is stronger than the man, but it is not the case. The female protagonist is above them (not Ah Q's spiritual victory method). I am very satisfied with the big golden finger. This is an orthodox and refreshing novel. I rarely read this kind of Hehuanzong literature [get it] and it feels pretty good. It has a good career and a good harvest, and the heroine is the biggest winner! 🎉

This is the real cool story about a heroine, it's so cool, it's just to my taste. I particularly like the character of the female protagonist. It's so cool to control the male protagonists. The names of the male protagonists are also very nice. The content is very rich and the context is really wonderful. The author really tries not to abuse the female protagonist a little bit, but it's really fun to abuse the male protagonist. The author really writes it very well!

It's absolutely amazing, my favorite novel this year. It doesn't abuse women at all, and it won't make the heroine feel aggrieved. There are also strong supporting characters who are basically all women. It's well received 👍 and the heroine's career line accounts for a large part. I like to watch the process of the heroine's cultivation and promotion. I read it after the author revised the article, so I think the current book will have no flaws at all, and everyone can read it with confidence.

Immortal product. How can one cultivate immortality without being greedy? This sentence is good, because combined with her IQ and character, the heroine is really ruthless and her goal is very clear, which is to become an immortal. So the emotional changes of other male protagonists and male partners are not very important. Anyway, on the great road, they can be discarded. After achieving the great road, are you afraid of not meeting beauty? The male protagonist is just a proud man who is in the stage of cultivating immortality. He may have new choices after he achieves his greatness.

Like! ! ! It's really beautiful🥰🥰🥰It's so beautifully written! Adult women should read articles like this, it's so refreshing! The heroine is decisive, resolute and strong, and treats her benefactors and subordinates well. I really want a boss like this, and I hope there will be more and more outstanding women like this! This article is so delicious! It's so delicious! Sister Yu is smart, gentle and well-spoken. She will never wrong herself and is determined to cultivate immortality. She is super good, super good and awesome ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧. I feel that she is very strong in everything she does. She is the kind of person who can learn well if she wants to learn and play well if she wants to play. "And Jiang Yu is a good talent for cultivating immortals in the true sense. She has a strong memory but is shallow about emotions. She only knows that she wants to live, be infinitely good to herself, and pursue everything to satisfy her curiosity. No matter what the end of immortality is, she will always be her. " How good! I really like Sister Yu😍😍😍. The male characters are also quite delicious, each in their own way. The author writes very well! Emotional details are also well written when done! The most important thing is that Sister Yu's modeling is really great! ! ! I like it so much! I feel very happy when I think that such an outstanding and powerful girl exists! What a very, very, very good role model! Delicious and thoughtful article! Love it, love it🥰🥰🥰

The whole book is really enjoyable. It's not a cliché and you have to save everything. My favorite is the female protagonist. It's very enjoyable. She treats the male protagonist like that and the male protagonist actually falls in love with it. It suits me well xP As for what you said about men and women, I think it's okay. It's not true. Then the author quickly changed it. I think it's good. As for Liu Qing, I didn't expect that he actually had a deputy CP. In short, this is not good. I just don't like having a deputy CP, or there are too many descriptions. I didn't think about having sex with the heroine. Overall, it's great. Because there are very few stories like this in Tomato, some of them are exciting, but the front part is just boring, just like a roguish dragon Aowen, or falling in love with a man every day. Anyway, the fairy tales are very consistent with my preferences. There are definitely other good stories with female protagonists, and I also like to read them. Immortal product! I hope the author will not stop updating [cry][cry]

An unorthodox upgrade stream for cultivating immortals, a 1v6 "sweet pet" bg with a background of cultivating immortals, using words to express the basic lines, and is not female-oriented. The story revolves around the heroine's opportunity to rob six male protagonists. The female protagonist has a strong subjectivity, and the first male protagonist is the cute little boy. It's a matter of personal preference. I've only read a dozen chapters, and I give my love daughter + the accurate wording of the article a thumbs up [like]

Good, but not enough. I am very satisfied with the language. Finally, there is no such inexplicable and uncomfortable language and description as in some novels. The plot still has room for improvement. Five stars are an encouragement and worth watching.

It's a good book. It's a book that grown-ups should read. It keeps getting stronger, and there's a cauldron delivered to your door along the way. But the ending is a bit hasty. I feel like the fairy world can also write a lot of romantic affairs for the female protagonist.

The heroine is devoted to the truth, the plot does not drag on, it is a very enjoyable one-hour movie, and the author will update it quickly [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Nice! The heroine is having a great time. Except for a few handsome men who are used to give the heroine a good time, the other important characters are all women. The female supporting characters are also having a great time! The reputation of wild vegetables [like][like][like]

There are no subtle points in the whole text, it is a completely female-centered and refreshing article, and the wording is very detailed, such as "boy, qili, baiji" and so on. The author's attitude can be seen from the first chapter, but originally there were 6 male protagonists, but in the end there were 7 male protagonists [laughing]

It's very nice [like] The plot is very smooth. I should have read the revised version. There are no plots mentioned in the comment section, so I read it in one go without any discomfort. The heroine is very happy throughout the whole story and is getting stronger all the time. The heroine is controllable. And the most satisfying thing is the author's use of female vocabulary. There will not be a slut who suddenly pops up like other books [laughing] As a relaxing read to kill time, I give this book full marks [send heart]

It's amazing. The heroine is very strong, the core is very stable, and the details are full. After reading this article, I feel more and more that the sentence "I don't think 'that kind of thing' between men and women is a big deal" is very reasonable. "Eating, sex, and sex" is a sentence that few people will explain to the juniors. The author is very careful in writing. Big praise [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Very female-oriented. The author's plot is not laggy at all, and he is a veteran at writing novels. I had read about it before but never clicked in (I didn't like the title for some reason) and accidentally clicked on it. After reading it, it really tasted good. Various female condensations. The heroine's single-minded soaring is worth watching.

It's a cool story, the heroine doesn't get offended, she has always loved cultivation, and the words are comfortable. Only a few numerals have not been changed, such as "disciple", "male" and "abandoned".

I wanted to give it four and a half stars but couldn't, so I'll give it five stars. The author pays great attention to word choice, and he also seems to listen to advice. According to the comments, some plots and wording have been changed. It may be difficult to change the ending later, but this attitude is worthy of my five stars. And although there are six male protagonists, many of the supporting characters are female characters. The male-female ratio is drawn up, and powerful characters appear and they are deemed to be female by default. The author is the heroine's own mother. The heroine is not aggrieved at all. She doesn't bring anything to eat when she suffers any loss. All the good things belong to the heroine. It feels so good. The only flaw I want to deduct half a star from is that the ending is a bit rushed, why didn't my sister have more of a role🥺

This book is really beautiful! It's hard to find a book that suits my tastes so well, and the author is also actively listening to readers' suggestions. I also enjoyed the plot very much. We grown-up women should read books like this! ! !

I almost missed this completely female-oriented novel. The author's grandma's portrayal of the heroine is so great, especially the heroine's style of work and emotional "communication" with the male protagonists. The heroine is completely in control of the superior. I really like watching the drama written by the author's grandma. It's so cool. The emotional exchanges between the female protagonist and the male protagonists simply made my scalp tingle. We grown-up women should read this kind of novel, it's so refreshing (✧∇✧) Amway this novel everywhere, I hope the author, grandma, can continue writing this kind of female-oriented novels and don't give up [crying] [crying] Sometimes I just want to read some female-oriented novels with scum [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The ending feels unfinished, and the struggle in the fairy world can be summarized in just two sentences. But it's really good news for the heroine, the details of the female protagonist are praised, the heroine is completely female, the king A is really strong and eats well

It smells so good ✧(≖◡≖✿) The heroine opens a harem, the female protagonist is the main character, and the male protagonists are all supportive and selflessly dedicated to the heroine Dang Shuangwen is very good to read, and it is not long and can be read quickly. The writing style is very good hehe The hostess has a very good character and is generous to everyone around her. Each harem has its own characteristics and delicious food😍 The wording is also more girl-oriented. The author is very obedient and changes everything he wants to change. There are no words that are insulting to women. However, upgrading and fighting monsters is relatively average. The golden finger is too big. Basically, you rely on attracting male majors to upgrade. The ending feels a bit rushed.