This is my first time writing, so please don't be harsh if it's not to your taste. Thank you.
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(Quick transmigration, pregnancy luck, System, 1v1, both leads are inexperienced)
Shangguan Wan'er was a nine-tailed fox who had cultivated for a thousand years. After failing to ascend, she was bound to a pregnancy-luck System. By helping the chosen ones in small worlds, who struggled to have children, successfully bear heirs, she could complete her missions and ascend to immortality. Wan'er agreed without hesitation, eager to become an immortal.
World One: The childless emperor and the noble-born young lady
World Two: The childless CEO and the frail orphan girl
After completing her missions, Wan'er returned to the divine realm and discovered that the Divine Lord looked at her differently. The Divine Lord said, “You flirted with me, and now you want to run?” Wan'er wanted to know: can someone explain why the male leads in all those small worlds were the same person?!!!
I finished reading four stories. Very well written. No big complaints. The only downside is that there are a lot of typos. In the fourth story, I don't know how to write the name of the supporting actor. He keeps changing the two names back and forth. The author must have mixed up the writing. If you don't like it, you can skip it. The rest of the writing is good. The male and female protagonists are both clean, and the male protagonist falls in love at first sight every time. The heroine can only say yes, The male protagonist character can become the ceiling male protagonist. I have nothing good to say about the heroine.
As the only remaining red nine-tailed fox in the world, Shangguan Wan'er practiced hard for thousands of years to become an immortal. As a result, when she ascended, she failed to overcome the tribulation, leaving only one of the nine tails. Wan'er hugged her burnt tail in distress, "It is destined that I will not be able to become an immortal." Wan'er murmured sadly. [Ding... The good pregnancy system is being bound...] "Little red fox, I can help you ascend to immortality." "Who is talking?" Wan'er looked around and found that there was no demon. "I am the good pregnancy system, Qiqi, I am in your mind, you can communicate with me silently in the sea of consciousness." "You said you could help me ascend! How do you help me? Do you want me to pay anything?" Shangguan Wan'er looked expectant. [The good pregnancy system is generated by the consciousness of multiple small worlds. There are children of luck in the small world, but the children of luck are extinct due to various reasons, resulting in deviations in the small world. Your task is to capture the children of luck, give birth to heirs for the children of luck, and make the children of luck in the small world, that is, the male protagonist, live a happy life. After the mission is over, I can help you restore your tail, and I will also help you ascend to immortality.] "It's very painful to give birth to a child, and the child will be extinct. How can I give birth?" [Host, don't worry, I can provide any help during the mission. There is a mall in the system space, which contains various props you need, such as: birth pills, birth daughter pills, twin pills, etc. The host can get points as long as the task is completed, and use the points to redeem the props you need. Since the host is a newbie, the system specially gives you 1,000 points. As a novice gift package, you can redeem any props you need] "Okay then" Wan'er felt relieved. [Congratulations to the host for completing the mission. ] Qiqi said. "All tasks completed??" Shangguan Wan'er felt a little disappointed for some reason. [Yes host, the mission is completed. ] Qiqi said. [Host, now you can use points to redeem anything in the system mall. The system mall will be closed later. The portable space will always follow you, and the memories in your small world will be erased. ] Qiqi said. "Can I leave a memory?" Shangguan Wan'er asked. [Also, you need to buy amnesia-free pills, which cost 2,000 points. ] Qiqi said. "Then buy it." Shangguan Wan'er said. [Okay, the pills have been distributed. Please check the host. 2000 Points will be deducted, leaving 910 points. ] Qiqi said. "I don't need anything else." Shangguan Wan'er said. [Okay, then the host mission is over and I have to leave. Now I will ascend you and repair your tail. ] Qiqi said. Shangguan Wan'er's whole body exuded golden light, and her red tail grew again. Shangguan Wan'er was extremely happy looking at her red nine tails. "Thank you, Qiqi." Shangguan Wan'er looked at Qiqi and said, although she was a little unhappy and a little sad about separation, there is no banquet in the world that never ends. [Host, goodbye. ] After Qiqi finished speaking, he disappeared. Shangguan Wan'er had just ascended to immortality. She had a lot of things to do, including reporting to the Emperor of Heaven and visiting her mansion. Then Shangguan Wan'er also disappeared. In the God Realm, Zichen Palace, Lord Junheng finally woke up after sleeping for a thousand years. Jun Heng opened his eyes and looked around. It was his dormitory, and then a series of memories appeared in his mind, which were memories of his time in the small world. Jun Heng has known Shangguan Wan'er for a long time. At first, he just thought the little fox was cute and naughty, but gradually his feelings changed. Jun Heng himself didn't realize it. Later, when the little fox failed to ascend and was about to dissipate, Jun Heng saw his heart clearly. Then he entered the small world and asked Qi Qi to bind Shangguan Wan'er and help her ascend. "Master, you're awake." Qiqi's chubby body jumped up to Jun Heng's side. "Well, where is Shangguan Wan'er?" Jun Heng asked. "Master, Wan'er has gone to heaven." Qiqi said. After that, Jun Heng also disappeared and went to the heaven to find Shangguan Wan'er. Shangguan Wan'er reported to Tiangong. As soon as she established her residence, she was stopped by someone who suddenly appeared in front of her. "??? Xia Jiuqing! Why are you here?" Shangguan Wan'er said in surprise as she looked at the person in front of her. "Wan'er, I'm Jun Heng." Jun Heng introduced himself. "You said you are Lord Junheng of Zichen Palace?" Shangguan Wan'er said in disbelief. "Yes." Jun Heng nodded. "So, what does it have to do with me?" Shangguan Wan'er suppressed the excitement in her heart and said calmly. "You don't want to be responsible for flirting, right?" Jun Heng said. Shangguan Wan'er didn't speak, but looked at Jun Heng quietly. "I have known you for a long time. When you were in human form, I went to the demon world once and happened to meet you in your form. I was attracted by your innocence and cuteness. Then I often visited you secretly. I don't know what happened. I have never been in contact with feelings. I didn't understand my feelings until you failed to ascend, so I found the way of heaven and asked my spiritual pet Qiqi to bind you, complete tasks, and help you ascend." Jun Heng said. "Wan'er, I like you. Can you be with me?" Jun Heng said. "So, Qiqi is your spiritual pet." Shangguan Wan'er said. "Yeah." Jun Heng nodded. "You are also the target of the missions I conquered." Shangguan Wan'er continued. "Yes." Jun Heng confirmed again. Shangguan Wan'er looked at Jun Heng. "You really like me?" Shangguan Wan'er still felt unbelievable. "Yes." Jun Heng said. After hearing Junheng's answer, Shangguan Wan'er hugged Junheng happily. "That's great, I thought I would hold onto the memories with you for the rest of my life." Shangguan Wan'er said. After that, Junheng took Shangguan Wan'er back to his Zichen Palace. The two people kissed each other inseparably in the Zichen Palace and spent the whole day messing around. "Wan'er, let's hold a wedding." Jun Heng said. "Okay." Shangguan Wan'er nodded. Afterwards, Jun Heng gave Shangguan Wan'er a grand wedding. At the wedding, Qiqi held the marriage certificate, and under the witness of all the immortals, the two people wrote their names on the marriage certificate. Shangguan Wan'er never visited her mansion, but instead lived in Zichen Palace. Three hundred years have passed, and Shangguan Wan'er and Jun Heng's children are already a hundred years old. Shangguan Wan'er and Jun Heng lived happily every day, and Jun Heng always took Shangguan Wan'er to play in the small world.
In the warm spring breeze, I rode my horse as fast as I could, and saw all the prosperity of Chang'an in one day.
I like it so much, it's wonderful
Everything else is very good. Just talk about it. I don't know how many people talk about it in this chapter.
It looks good. The heroine doesn't have much control over each small world and the hero just comes by himself 🤭 but the ending is a bit quick 🥺
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, recommended, recommended
All good. It would be better if the word (with) is not filled in after each sentence. It sounds very weird. As I listened, I became upset and didn't want to hear it anymore. This habit needs to be changed.
But you said it was very good. You said it was very good. The content of the book is very angry, rich, Ai Ni, and the main characters are very loving. I like reading this kind of novel.
Good, good, good