Collapse of Iron**********

This book not only attracted me because of its subject matter, but the author's writing style is also very good. It ranks among the best among the many fan works I have read. First of all, the depiction of Xiao Etch is very complete, as if he is like this. Secondly, the portrayal of other characters in the book is also very good, not OOC at all and vivid and lifelike. The plot of the story is very well mastered, it is deep, connotative, not brainless and the pace is moderate, making people want to watch it again. Overall, this novel is very, very, very, very good. You can read it with confidence. Highly recommended! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][OK]

I think the author's portrayal of Xiao Eclipse is very vivid, and his writing style is also very delicate. All in all, this book is great in my eyes. I hope Xiao Eclipse can write a completely different ending with everyone in Omfalos.

Is Xiao Eclipse angry? That's very life-like. It feels better to change it to sadness. Bai E feels angry and Xiao Eclipse feels sad. Later, the transition is made to add tragedy and pity and directly embark on the path of joy, which better connects the plot. After all, it's not surprising that joy can do anything, right? With the sadness of thousands of reincarnations, plus being an electronic ghost and an outsider, Aha will definitely give him a mask. Becoming an envoy of the Happy Order can also be patched in various ways, and it will be easier to connect to the subsequent stories.

Very interesting, looking forward to the next episode. I don't know if the author will be interested in writing a spin-off about the original world of World Movies｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Novels written from the 0th reincarnation are rare; the characterization of Xiao Eclipse is also very good

Xiao Eclipse and Bai Exilian have gone through more than 30 million eternal reincarnations together. The three of them have become a real family. When the time comes, they will solve the Iron Curtain with one clan and three orders [laughter]

The sweetness is off the charts! Sweet, too sweet. I feel that the portrayal of Eclipse Treasure is very good. As reincarnation continued, and when their former best friend died at their own hands, they finally understood the heavy meaning behind the journey of chasing fire.

I really like fanfics like this that don't contain any private goods. It feels like I'm reading a story about a parallel world. It warms my body.

It is currently written as non-toxic and can be consumed with confidence.

Very well written, this type is relatively rare, so good luck to the author. [Praise]

I want to see the extra story about returning to the collapsed world [shy] [almost crying]

Yes, the description of Xiao Eclipse is very good [crazy] [blowing kiss] [admiration]

Leave a claw and kick me when I get angry

Everyone is doing well, and so is Xiao Eclipse!

I'm thinking, if you think about it more broadly, this issue of Iron Curtain won't end with the Iron Curtain's body eroding the big eyeballs, right?

So pretty! So pretty! Just write slower! Otherwise, it will be over if you get stabbed in the back! ! ! ! !

It would be so cool to see Little Eclipse and Bai E carrying the fate of Omphalos together

The growth of Xiao Eclipse is great, the overall rhythm is very good in my opinion👌🏻

Super good-looking. Xiao Eclipse must be with the golden descendants!

Come on, author, it looks great

Very nice, looking forward to the follow-up

Come on come on! Very well written [love][love][love]

Quite to my liking.

Good looking ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧, looking forward to the follow-up content

I lost interest as soon as I started watching it.

The book has been blocked. I hope I can survive.

Maybe I'm the only one missing. It's pretty good.

How could this happen... I like this book very much

The future is bright, I hope I can finish writing Ompharos

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that it has been discontinued. I hope this one can be updated again in the future.